The Road Is Lacking

I read 138 chapters in one go, it's really good It has a good idea, and the plot is exciting, coupled with good logic and writing skills It's good to watch! Highly recommended

Two books in a row don't make sense, have I changed?

Watch the author's protagonist change from chaotic evil to chaotic neutral to good and lawful

The clown has nothing to brag about, the more he talks about it, the more charming he becomes. The more I feel this character is inexplicable.

Why do I feel that the author's writing is getting worse and worse? Other authors' books are getting better with later books. This author's first book is the best, and then it becomes more and more unreadable. Even if you keep the same style as if you went away, it won't be like this.

The main thing to read about Waste Paper's books is his wild imagination. This is something that many authors don't have. Many authors use a routine to lay dolls, such as a certain roller and a certain skeleton. The disadvantage of Waste Paper is that his writing skills cannot control his imagination, and he cannot write the soul of the character. It is not attractive. I suggest you take some training on this. Your imagination is okay. How can you express it to make readers amazed? I feel the same way, how to grasp the feeling of pleasure. What I write now is a bit of a pity that it is tasteless and abandoned. It is indeed a pity.

He has a wide range of knowledge and his writing style is no worse than copywriting. Why can't he tell stories? Fantasy writing should also proceed from the shallower to the deeper. At the beginning, you talked about various "heart" practices, such as heart elixirs, and the concept of climbing a building. It was too abstract. This should be suitable for later writing.

Hello author, I read many of your books and didn't say much, but when I saw you talking about the pressure of family life and the relationship between creation as a writer, I thought you might be stuck in some things. I wrote these for your reference. Dao Youqi is full of writing and the setting is novel. This is an advantage, but it is also a disadvantage, because there is no substitution and not enough familiarity. As a person who has graduated from college and studied for more than ten years, I had to read seventy or eighty chapters for your title of Waste Paper Bridge and rely on comments and spoilers to sort out the context. Do you think your audience is very broad? Innovation is based on a large enough reader base. Only a large enough base of people can filter out enough people so that your book can have data, make money, and be seen by more people. If you are interested in taking the physical route for AiDian, then I will not write these things. But you are a father and a husband. Reading is relaxation for us, but work for you. Put making money first. The nouns you set can be replaced with common nouns, such as loose immortals, golden immortals, emperors, etc. Isn't the original plot considered innovative? There is no need to make all new ones. 80% to 90% of old stuff, 10% of it new, everyone can accept it. In fact, the educational level of most novel readers is as high as middle school or high school. You have to consider the cognitive level of these people. You can try to share your understanding of the realm with the old friends who work around you. If a story takes a long time for them to understand, it will definitely not sell for money. Why is Xiao Yan, the protagonist of Dou Po Cang Qiong, so easy to remember? No one has ever been sick, no one has taken anti-inflammatory injections, and various realms include Dou Master, Dou Wang, and Dou Emperor. They are all combinations of common words, and the main focus is to be easy to understand. I like your story, but I want you to make money even more. Only when you make money will you continue to create, and only then will you have the motivation to continue writing good works. So this new attempt to set everything up completely original can be put to a later date. Some words may sound preachy. That's because my ability to express is limited. I apologize to you. But I sincerely hope you can stick to it! Come on!

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If you really want to make money, write more. Anyone who advises you to write slowly is trying to trick you intentionally or unintentionally. Internet articles often contain millions of words, and it is impossible to write every word carefully. Success depends on three points: 1. The story is interesting! 2. The writing style is mature! 3. The amount of updates is enough! In my opinion, point 3 is the most important. Readers are only willing to spend so much money to read, and it is impossible to subscribe to all "interesting" works, so how will they choose in the end?

After reading Chapter 34, the author's argument lies in "emotion". It's good to have heavy writing and ink, but too much "emotion" makes people uncomfortable to read. There is a feeling that practitioners in the world, people, heavens and all worlds are creatures controlled by "emotion"! As uncomfortable as a puppet

I don't believe that the main character's ability to rob several worlds would be worse than the Heart Pill. As far as the protagonist's ability to do things in different situations, the Heart Pill has always been a drag rather than a support, and it is specially designed to shackle the protagonist.

How can I say that it is a pity to throw away the food if it is tasteless? What I wrote above is okay, but as soon as the Heart Pill came out, it felt boring and kept jumping around. Moreover, when you go to a world, do you just stay in a corner? Instead of going out and wandering around, always entangled in the original world and some small places, shouldn't you go and cause trouble? I keep suppressing the protagonist and completely fail to see what the protagonist should look like.

Waste Paper is really a role model for authors. One book after another, you can basically read them all.

I'll go, I'll die if I take care of myself 😢

What is the role of the protagonist written on waste paper now in the Wen family? I haven't seen the spiritual root that the protagonist worked so hard to develop until now have any big effect. It is several times stronger than the average person, but it is not worthy of the supreme spiritual root. Something started to go wrong when the protagonist received the Heart Pill, which made the protagonist inexplicably rush to improve his cultivation.

After seeing the latest content on the shelves, I have a question about the plot. The protagonist's golden finger is retroactive and will not increase his power immediately. Where does he have the courage to blackmail high-level ability users? Everyone can sneak across. It can also be said that everyone is a reborn person, but the protagonist is abnormally swollen. No matter how strong you are at level 2, your actual combat power is set to level 5. This Forget about the fact that his combat power has collapsed, he will still be manipulated if he encounters people above level 6 Another point is that the protagonist's idea has become that everyone except himself is not a human being, they are all tools, so he is no different from a top boss, but he is building an archway, and he does not have a set of persuasive reasons like Master Gu.

The author's novel is very good. The only drawback is that the protagonist feels too smart, no different from having a God's perspective. You will not be plotted, and you will always get the greatest opportunities. It may seem difficult, but in fact it is no different from playing invincible directly. If you make a start at the beginning, you will feel like you don't want to see it later, and it doesn't mean much.

When should I kill that Immaculate Saint? She is weak, bad and disgusting. The protagonist can easily kill such a disgusting guy. Why would he stay here for a long time? In fact, the protagonist does not need to accept the Heart Pill to rise quickly. Randomly looting a few worlds is better than the Heart Pill. I don't see the use of the Heart Pill. Instead, it is to suppress the protagonist's combat power. Xindan is a complete failure.

Waste Paper is really the representative of those who debuted at their peak. The creativity, storytelling and completion of the book of Unlimited Myth are really the best. I must have made a lot of preparations when writing it. It is really full of sincerity. I can say that one of the following books is not as good as the other. Every once in a while, when I think of the stories in Unlimited, I will search for the new book of Waste Paper, but it is really difficult to read. Sometimes I am embarrassed. When the author was at his peak, he did not have money to read the original version. Now that the conditions are better, I want to support it but I can't read it.

I probably got into the trap by summoning bosses. It was quite novel at the time. Although the latter part was a bit bland, I thought it was okay. Then there was the idea of cultivating inner demons. This idea was amazing to me who had just read the novel. But later on, I felt it was a bit off-putting. , It is also a good idea, but in the later period, the author got too excited when writing it, or it was just as boring as changing the map. I am here to gather the fan value. I just want to say something to the author. I hope you can control your own rhythm and don't write too much about the plot. I hope you can return to the top as soon as possible.

I feel that no matter how amazing it starts, it will turn into "Unlimited Myth" as I write. .

The mythical native species is at its peak for me. The realm of this book is well planned. However, if you don't arrest people, a good book will definitely support it, but this one is already predictable.

I can't watch it anymore, it feels boring. The key is that I have no sense of expectation.

This. . . There is only one sigh!

It's almost the end of the book. I thought I had just started to get into the mood. I haven't even started traveling around the world yet and it was about to end.

I haven't watched it for a long time, and then I found out it was over. I came from the time of lockdown, and it felt a bit wrong to straddle two worlds after lockdown. Today I took a look at the settings and crossed the timeline. Okay, I can explain it but it's a bit outrageous.

Add finer and finer😎

Looking at this introduction, I found that there seems to be a missing book, "Mythical Martial Arts". This book is also acceptable!

I'm a disciple, I don't want to end it anymore