The Republic of China: Entering Taoism from Shen Da

Wonderful! It resonated deeply with me, and after reading it, I felt a sense of refreshment and joy that went straight into the depths of my soul. The author's words and stories always bring me great enjoyment and thinking.

The writing is better than the previous books, but if you are willing to work hard, don't go for your lame scientific explanation. The only criterion for science is to seek truth from facts. It is not scientific if the body is resistant to bullets and has mysterious elements. No one learns science by reading novels. Just focus on character creation and plot direction. Most people will not care whether your magic attack is self-hypnosis or something else. As long as you can become stronger, that's it.

Pretty awesome! ! ! A modern diaosi can become a sharpshooter once she travels through time! ! ! And he can fight at the top level! ! ! The key to traveling through time is the malnourished little carrot head! ! ! Awesome! ! !

In fact, I have always wanted to say that you should write less about modern history, and you must write about fiction, otherwise the shooting will be gone at some point.

Those that the Qing Dynasty could not help up were rotten to the core, and then warlords fought, Japan invaded, and the Eight-Nation Alliance emerged.                                                                                                                                                                                         In what era did mold appear so quickly?

It's too ruthless, it's so mindless to draw hatred, even the teacher's sect's hatred is mindless, the character is simply retarded

The more I read these days, the more awkward it becomes. The foreigners' invasion of China turned out to be a plot against Dragon Vein. I'm speechless. Foreigners know nothing about Dragon Vein. Are Eastern and Western cultures so connected?

The protagonist is so young and has learned kung fu. Wouldn't it be great to develop a base area and farm? It's not like one person can do it alone. Fighting monsters and upgrading is tiring.

What we are looking at is the historical weight of the Republic of China. Do the heavens want a second dimension? Moreover, in the chapter of World Bu Wu, there was no innovation in technology. To look at the Republic of China, one must look at the old and new innovations. The core of the Republic of China is very different from that of cultivating immortals. One is a sentient being and the other is free and happy alone. The heavens are also a variant of being alone. There is a sense of spiritual betrayal. And if the protagonist's golden finger is in the world, this one is too small. And in the last few chapters, politics is a bit naive. If a piece of paper could succeed, the emperor would have become an emperor long ago.

The author keeps talking about science, so why not add some science to it? Since it is not science, why do we have to rely on science?

The author's biggest problem is that the combat plot is too densely designed. If you are not fighting, you are on the way to fight. Even upgrading is very urgent. They all say that things should be prioritized and done quickly and slowly, but here you are in a hurry...

When it comes to martial arts, you write about martial arts, and when it comes to science fiction, you write about science fiction. If you cheat on a skill and explain it in a "scientific" way that doesn't make sense, I'm speechless.

The foreign enemies designed by the author are too powerful. If there is no protagonist, how can the martial arts of the country resist? It is better to write that the masterminds behind the enemy country are all locals.

If you're not a god, why did you start practicing boxing again?

The more I write, the better 🤡. Add some reference to modern science

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Please accompany the new book for a walk, don't raise it, don't raise it. Don't you feed the fish at your home? I'm dying of it! 🙂🙂🙂

Even in the plot, I still feel a little uncomfortable. With the wanted order and the local snakes, I offended them all at once, and then suddenly became the target of competition between the two major martial arts schools. What if the local snakes sue the officials and come to arrest you? You are only ten years old, and you have brothers and sisters. You are so high-profile...

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How come the author's grades are getting better and better?

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If you don't have a brain disorder, you can read it in the bookstore

Will I still read your book when I read it in two months?

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To be honest, I haven't read this name because I haven't read it recently. I have been thinking about it because I have no books to read. The result is unexpectedly to my liking.

As long as you, the author, can keep writing, I can read it, but I hope that if you write Zhutianliu Zhutianliu, it would be best to have the protagonist return to the modern world. Showing victory in front of others is what I love most.

Author, don't care what others say, just write your own novel. I support you. No one's book is perfect.

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