Play with Fantasy Beasts in the World of Martial Arts

Just like the title, Palu can betray, and the breeding function has been cut off. You are still playing chicken.

If you don't dare to write, then don't write it I always wanted to add some plots about recruiting girls But you are really convinced, but you don't dare to write any more Then why are you still writing it? Aren't you just looking for punishment? The timid ones are scared to death

The positioning and description of the protagonist make it uncomfortable to watch, and you still don't understand why there are so few subscriptions. The main character is written in a cowardly and lazy way, making it unattractive to watch. When there is a strong enemy, I feel afraid at first, but I also think that I won't die, so I go to wander around. Thunder point 1 (I don't have a trump card yet, and I don't use it to become stronger if I have it). I also think that King Xiaoyao can kill him, so why are I afraid of him? Thunder Point 2 (you killed it, you even went to subscribe to read it). The protagonist can pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, but he cannot really be a pig. Let the protagonist die a few times and work hard to become stronger. There are incredible reset hooks and resurrection hooks, so just don't use them. There is a portable world and time-stop, which is also a favorite. Still making excuses not to use it. You have to know how many people came here for this cool article. Just press hard. Why. What are you going to use to attract subscriptions? The main character is a coward, a loser, lazy, and useless, so why should he get people to subscribe? Don't say that your life is difficult, and it's not easy for anyone. It's really annoying to read a book and pretend to be the protagonist. If there is an easy way, don't use it. You treat the readers as fools. You don't need to write the ones that fail. Just write a protagonist who doesn't succeed. If you don't fail, you will be a loser. It's been many years since I've written an essay, and I've written so much. What do you think is the highlight of this book? What can you use to cover up the shortcomings I mentioned? I believe there are many people who read this book because of the author, but it is really hard to describe in one sentence. If you want to subscribe, don't tell me how hard you worked or how difficult it was. Summarize the good points and what kind of protagonist you want to create later. If you can't even figure it out yourself, there's really no value in subscribing. Why don't you try harder if I spend money to see you as a coward? If you want to write like this, I have no idea. See you in the next book.

The author likes second-hand work. If you don't tell me, I will treat it as your first-hand work. But if you write it directly, what do you want me to think? I can't even imagine how to apply this patch

Overwhelming combat power, boring The world of martial arts is so weak that it refuses to practice leveling in the world of Palu. What kind of protagonist is bored? The excuse is too weak.

Now that things are like this, does Xiao Longnu still want to accept her? Coming to Shooting Condor without accepting the Little Dragon Girl is like iced black tea without being chilled.

One book is not as good as another. . . . The fantasy beast Palu and martial arts are sewn together in this book. It is already difficult to sew together the martial arts novels written by Jin Guliangwen and others. You have to add a fantasy beast Palu. The sense of separation is too serious, and they are not the same style of painting. . . Shou Guo Fu is even more poisonous. To be honest, I think this book was written by you, the author, for yourself, not by readers on the Internet. . . .

It feels like the author is trapped in martial arts and can't get out. Obviously there is nothing wrong with the writing and the plot, but one book is not as good as the other. The subject matter is too old. Let's write something new. If that doesn't work, how about something weird like Cthulhu?

There are still some trivial plots that have always been there, such as not delving deeply into the world of Palu, not using the powerful Palu, not hugging the original protagonist, not intercepting Hu Yuan's plot opportunities, not using the time-travel information gap to exchange for start-up funds, the protagonist being unstable and taking the initiative to die, etc. There are many trivial operations, ignoring all these unsightly plots that occasionally reduce intelligence, it is still good to watch 🤭

The author should carefully introduce all the abilities of the protagonist and the rules of the world of Parlu, otherwise it will be confusing.

Capturing the human form reminds me of a book, Xiao Kuang.

Don't give it away anymore, it's better to give it away to a girl. If you are invincible first, you can give it away no matter what. You, the protagonist, give away spiritual fruits that you can't eat, and give away pets. Do you want to support the Song Dynasty in the future? Bring an army of phantom beasts to act as dogs for others. Is your rhythm right? Isn't it good for World of Fantasy Beasts to be widely promoted after decades of development? Anyway, it was a matter of a moment.

The biggest problem is that the author writes the protagonist who is in danger as if he is not in danger. He dies so many times in the beginning, and finally enters the positive cycle. He insists on using the weak to defeat the strong, and keeps tossing, but emphasizes stopping when crossing the boundary many times. If you don't have time to stop, it's better to say that you don't need it even if you have it. If you have martial arts, you can go to the World of Fantasy Beasts to practice until you can no longer make progress, and then you can come out, it will only take a moment. It means not to be the Sword God of Shilipo, or to be a prodigal.

Comprehensive martial arts, it is recommended to capture Zhu Wushuang

It feels like writing something original or close to the copy of Mythology Liaozhai. It has the style of Zhang Sanfeng's Zhenwu Emperor. The story line design is better. Isn't it better than just putting this together?

Unrestricted Mythology's various saucy operations and mythology analysis are written with amazing talent and beauty. The original species of Mythology is good in the early stage, but it is vain in the later stage. It also pulled out the protagonist of the previous book and secretly belittled it. He recalled the big brother's book. He couldn't write about the arbitrary whims of the demon, and even used a few natives to criticize the protagonist. Jiao, I read some of the last few books sporadically, and my level fluctuated, and I became more and more disciplined towards the end. This is not good, that is also a limit, neither up nor down. Internet articles are about emotions, letting readers get involved, not asking readers to follow you and learn from Lin Pingzhi, castrate yourself when you get married, pinch orchid fingers 😮‍💨

There is a plot in the middle where the system forcibly binds Xiangyang as a stronghold. The protagonist cannot see the suffering of the people and the Song Dynasty, so he offers a plan and says that he can get food. Learning martial arts and becoming a disciple to join the Peach Blossom Island lineage seems more secondary. The first plot should be about helping the Song people bring peace to the world. The protagonist requires these masters to go to the World of Fantasy Beasts in order to progress in opening up the wasteland. However, the protagonist's Palu Ball has no control over the master masters. Isn't he afraid of being morally kidnapped by Huang Rong or others? It's quite strange that the grandmaster immediately became tame and didn't have any thoughts when he saw the palu (precious beast) subdued by the palu ball Besides, the protagonist has information about the coordinates of an undeveloped world and is not afraid of it being leaked Although the palu system is exclusive to the protagonist, it is not There are really too many controllable factors And Guo Fu is a widow, and those who mind can leave on their own. Apart from these two, there shouldn't be any surprises But the protagonist has already gotten along with Guo Fu and then ran to flirt with Cheng Ying. Are you really not afraid of being beaten by Huang Rong and Dongxie? Overall, the settings of the battle between the heavens, the arena, Palu learning martial arts, and the spiritual time room are quite interesting.

The biggest problem with this book is that the worldview it borrows from novels is too complex, and some are too niche. In fan fiction, if you write about a particularly niche world, don't expect readers to quickly understand your story, worldview, character relationships, etc. At this time, it doesn't matter if you explain or don't explain, and then there is not only one world like yours, but you are constantly traveling through it, which leads to you constantly screening readers. It's weird if you can subscribe.

I'm speechless... I remember having the level 10 or level 15 Balrog Sheep in the early stages. It's considered a player benefit~

Just say it casually, don't comment if you don't like it The initial setting of this novel is indeed interesting, with many martial arts linkages and the fantasy beast Palu, but it becomes more and more difficult to write later on, because the level of martial arts combat power is too low, so you have to change the world to increase the combat power, but most people have never seen many high-level martial arts and have only heard of it If there is no world linkage at the beginning, and only the protagonist can conquer or make a contract and transfer to other worlds through the Palu world, it will be easier to write.

I hope the author can honestly write about the infinite flow of heaven and earth. The template for summoning the big boss is very good. The extraterrestrial demon cholera is written in the world one by one. There is less overlap with each other. You can keep writing and there is no need to force upgrades. As long as there is something to watch, the main thing is to do whatever you want, do whatever you want, break the status quo, and be a scourge. Super Dimension Players writes about the protagonist sending his clones to cause trouble in various worlds. , Semi-invincible novel, with good results. Those Tianlezi novels also have this meaning, but the template of summoning the boss naturally fits this kind. You can simply use some more traditional demon abilities, with different uses in different worlds, to help resentful people change their lives against the will of heaven. The protagonist takes the opportunity to do what he wants, destroy, save, or even just make trouble. Do whatever you want 🤓

There is still a future for carefully writing about Palu and collecting martial arts skills, but only a part of the additions were written and the development was too fast and had to be completed. To be honest, it was a failure to absorb the inner strength of martial arts during incubation to open a bigger attack. It felt satisfying, but the strength developed too fast. There was basically no room for plot development in the future.

Let me tell you, you have turned off the post limit after all.

Use the time-stopping technique, and your martial arts will be instantly perfected, and your internal strength will be instantly invincible. Then go collect the masters. Then beat up. Go and develop World of Fantasy Beasts, make a small invincible and then go to Ten Thousand Realms.

I want to see the protagonist and moderator model workers 🙂

I remember Xiao Ting seemed to have obtained the Heavenly Sword, right?

Ask for refinement🤓

It started out average, but it seems to be getting better and better.

Are you a eunuch? No update in over a week

Halfway through the update, I was ready to support but ended up dying I feel like the last few books have the same feeling, that is, the protagonist is too hung up, the upgrade progress is too fast, and the author is not willing to reduce the combat power. The world view set by itself seems to be very large, but the upper limit of actual upgrades is not high. So often the protagonist cheats all the way and rises to the top. There is no plot point to write about, and in the end he is forced to end the game flatly.