Douluo: the System Will Not Come Until You Are Ready to Leave the Wuhun Hall.

From Chapter 1 to the latest chapter, and all the way to the latest chapter, I have the feeling that it is fairy grass at the beginning, becomes food grass in the middle because it is too watery, and becomes fine grass after a little better. Generally speaking, it is quite good. The author would have used less water to make it perfect 😍😍😍😍

Why do you read fan fiction? It feels good. The author should look at what he has written. It is as smelly and long as a foot wrap. We are not here to see you output the settings. No matter how rubbish the original work is, you will not keep describing the settings. Do you know what we are here to see? After reading the first twenty chapters, I didn't find anything exciting. It just kept describing the settings, and the description of the system bonuses was also very strange. For those who don't play cards, they have no idea at all, and they don't even feel that this thing is very powerful. They have no idea that the so-called card players are enjoying themselves, there is no emotional line, and no common protagonist characters appear. Why don't you write original stories if you like supplementary settings so much? This level can't even be compared to studio writing. At least I know how to have fun. This book is hopeless. You can go to bed now.

It feels like being in the 👀Monogatari series - the plot advances slowly, but there are a lot of character-related descriptions, as well as the protagonist's alternative experiences (complaints?). Although the plot is not moving at all, it is quite interesting to watch. Evaluation: Interesting, the best reason to read this novel.

The first 50 chapters are a bit interesting, but by the 70th and 80th chapters, they are no longer watered down. When it comes to describing the orc force created by the protagonist, it is very speechless. How about everyone being equal, having the same status, and developing together, the noob protagonist is constantly plotting to rule the world.

Let's talk about the advantages first: the protagonist's setting and three-dimensional IQ are all online, and there is no routine where the brain of a newbie follows the lower body. The logic is strict, normal people's logic, objective and rational, and the plot is also attractive. Pretty good. Then there are disadvantages: there are too many early hydrology chapters that talk about academic theories, and it is easy to discourage many readers. Then there is the lexical description of the plot, which has the feeling of a Japanese campus romance light novel, but does not match the feeling of a fantasy novel (such as: um can be replaced with other modal particles or deleted directly). There is also the frivolity of the protagonist, which cannot be said to be unsteady. It was like I saw the author coming out of the toilet with a bowl of instant noodles, which made readers misunderstand. Purely a personal opinion.

The setting structure is so good that I can still watch it even if the pacing is crap.

Chapter 9 is even better. The protagonist spends the resources that can train people to the soul king level to train people whose martial souls have mutated and cannot practice to level 30 or above. But the protagonist himself is not yet the Soul King, and his talents are not stuck. He just doesn't know why he doesn't practice, and his resources are to be fed to others.

The good news is no piracy The bad news is no piracy

Basically there is no plot, it is all theory, psychological activities, and introduction.

What a mother-in-law, a disciple can win a few chapters, and a hunting soul ring can win a few more. And then there are also some so-called theories that the author fantasizes about. Wash this away quickly

Others just add settings to the plot, but this is just a little bit of plot added to the settings, and almost nothing is advanced in the thirty or so chapters.

I can't watch it since the first chapter. You, a loser from the beginning, live to be 35 years old and don't know how to get fairy grass. You don't know how to imitate Yu Xiaogang and pick up girls, so you are still ready to get soul bones. It's funny, isn't it? You are just like those six-year-olds who have the counterattack system and don't have a system. You are just a fw.

After reading the first ten chapters, I only have one feeling. I am about to graduate. The author, please help me write my graduation thesis. With your ability in hydrology, one graduation thesis is more than enough.

As long as the dragon spirit in Douluo Continent does not have malignant mutations (such as Luo Sanpao), it is impossible for the innate spirit power to be lower than level 5... Not to mention that your dragon's foundation is quite good, and the minimum is level 7. Don't you Douluo fandom writers know how to write about geniuses? Tang San became a god at the age of 25.

The author doesn't know much about the power of Douluo gods. He only knows that level 99 is divided into quasi-demigod, demigod, and quasi-god. And then just after breaking through level 100, it is almost the so-called "priest" combat power? After the priest, there are three realms: third-level god, second-level god, first-level god, and god king. But what is their specific strength? How different are they from each other? Can the God King kill a group of priests instantly? Can the soul masters who have just broken through on the Douluo Continent hope to compete with the third-level gods or even the first-level gods in the God Realm? Not sure. Then obtaining the divine status does not mean directly possessing the power corresponding to the divine level of the divine status, right? So what kind of improvement process is this? Is it necessary to ascend to the corresponding strength according to the guidance of the god, similar to how Panlong reads the godhead? I would also like to ask, are there any restrictions on gods from the divine realm intervening in Douluo Continent? What I understand is that it takes an intermediary like Wang Dong'er, Bo Saixi or other divine examiners to intervene in the lower realm. I don't know if there is a problem. These are the specific questions. Any missing additions are welcome. (Temporarily pinned to top)

Suppose, I am talking about hypothesis now, there is an organization in the world now, which has military power and has the right to rule its own territory, but it does not regard itself as a political system, but as a religious center. This organization also regularly goes to various towns and villages for free to provide preschool education. It has set up service points in various towns and provides a monthly subsidy of 10,000 to families who have passed the elementary school entrance examination. The school does not engage in unfair competition with other primary schools for students. When you come out of the ten-year study period, you are not required to work for that organization or make any material contribution to the organization. And throughout this process, it continues to pay you a living allowance steadily every month, and the subsidies are getting bigger and bigger. Can you evaluate this organization? Bibi Dong was born as a commoner, a golden generation commoner and an orphan, and Ghost Ju Douluo seemed to be a commoner martial soul mutant. The Wuhun Palace was really willing to train civilians, provide subsidies to soul masters, awaken martial souls for free, restrict the hunting of soul beasts to ensure cyclic development, and vigorously suppress evil soul masters. It seems that there is no place for corruption. Dou Er, a commoner, had no choice but to seek help from nobles, who would extort money. Even if they were geniuses, without the help of their elders to hunt down century-old soul beasts, they would either have to absorb the spirit rings for ten years and then become servants to the nobles to ask for help. Without subsidies, they could only waste a lot of training time to make money, which would seriously delay their cultivation.

I was deceived. I thought I was reading a novel, but in the end, I was given a serious lesson. It was so funny. You gave me lessons in the world of novels. Do you want me to learn how to make Contra?

Is this writing a novel or a theoretical report? A few people who watch Douluo go to see other people's theoretical analysis, which is quite strange.

It's all nonsense, a piece of shit. It deserves to be covered up by those who say it's good. Have you never read any good books?

I came to read novels, not to learn about your science. Then I might as well read a book. Why come to read a novel?

I think it's well written, and it has built its own, logical and self-consistent combat power system. The advantage is that it structured "Douluo Dalu" and used original materials to retell a new story that is different from the ancient online novels before tenth grade. The excitement of the story lies mainly in the protagonist, rather than in Tang San's way. The disadvantage is that most of the people who watch Tang San are those who read Tang San's fast food articles about blocking the way, so the audience is not large. For Shuangwen, the two sections of self-improvement and pretentiousness are the core highlights, and they complement each other. The combat power system and world view shaping are good for self-improvement, and the character shaping is good for showing off. The core selling points of Qidian's Tang San novels are mostly to block Tang San, but it still uses the original Douluo world view. When the selling points of Tang San, the great villain created by the third son of the Tang family, are consumed by the author and no new ideas can be written, the whole book is basically over. Because at this time, the shortcomings of Douluo Continent's eliminated combat power system and world view ten years ago are revealed - the protagonist is no longer happy even if he tries hard to get the 100,000-year-old soul ring... Fortunately, this book has restructured the combat power system. So far, the largest proportion of the coolness is the protagonist's self-improvement. After the system is perfected, I feel that this book is guaranteed in the later period. But one of the more prominent problems is that the supplementary setting of the Douluo combat power system takes up too much text and is too complicated, so that when I read the explanation part of the article, I always use the Crimson King. I didn't ask questions before, but now it's on the shelves. I hope the author can be more concise when adding worldview.

The progress of the plot is not as fast as that of Terror Beast, which is a bit ridiculous.

How come there are so many nonsense settings? Most of the settings in novels are just glanced at. Doing so many will really cause visual fatigue. It is best not to write the setting directly. It is best to bring it out according to the development of the plot. It should not be too much. It is best to mention it in one stroke, which is simple and easy to understand. I really couldn't stand the first few pictures, so I took them out.

It's all about setting and no plot. I didn't think about the setting well when I wrote it. I keep patching it. If you like it, you can go to CNKI to find the paper.

The author has a lot of self-movement in this book. There are not many serious plots in the novel, but there are a lot of inner activities, a lot of hydrology.

It's so discouraging. I read the golden three chapters well at the beginning, but then suddenly things got weird. A lot of settings that I couldn't understand kept popping up. I kept writing settings, and I kept writing. I completely forgot about the real plot, and I kept adding settings. One chapter wasn't enough, so I just made up for it in three chapters.

I came here to read novels, not to read papers.

Others are just talking about water, but you are writing about water.

I feel like I don't need to read the main text at all, just the table of contents. There are so many irrelevant things in the main text.

Author, this book! I love so much! Especially the theories and ideas inside. For example, the change of Yan's fate, or the plot of suppressing the little brat in the future and blowing everything up is great.