Dimensional Invasion: I Can Fish in the Myriad Worlds

Highly poisonous The author designed the protagonist to possess the template from his time with the King's Power Mask Group, and he also obtained the Three Thousand Starry Sky Flames, as well as the fully activated Hogyoku with the Rat Talisman. He constantly refines his swordsmanship and even comprehends the King's Power Sword Intent on his own.

What fishing in the heavens. Fishing in Japan is almost the same

I haven't read it yet, but after reading the synopsis, I knew that I was going to jump into the game soon. The background of the story is numerous and confusing, the protagonist has many skills, and the power system is also messy. I couldn't finish writing it at once.

Nowadays, the book review section is corrupt and full of wicked people. This is precisely because of insufficient updates. If authors diligently update 10,000 words every day, then the wicked people will be afraid and retreat, and virtuous gentlemen will be overjoyed. This is an achievement worthy of praise even from the legendary emperors Yao and Shun!

After reading a few chapters, I found it quite good. It's just that the title has a kind of "useless donkey" vibe. I think one of the good things about the setting is that everyone knows about anime. It's like the feeling of being the only one in the world who knows about it feels like something shameful.

Holy crap, this is so weak! Chapter 158 is about that woman's wild, irrational thoughts about the protagonist. I can't even tolerate that! Trading the Nika Fruit for a Growlithe? Is the protagonist an idiot? Can't he see which one is more valuable? Don't tell me this is to provide emotional value for the protagonist. Pshaw!

In my youthful arrogance, I dared to do anything, only to realize that human nature has its limits. Though Huaizhu was my concubine, my ambition remained unfulfilled. Though we grow old together, I have never betrayed my true heart.

In this world of "Against the Heavens Poison," things are already like this. Having just obtained a cultivation method, instead of cultivating, they go back to a regular school—it's outrageous! Did they never go to school in their past life? Even if they were a slacker who missed out on nine years of compulsory education, they shouldn't be skipping cultivation to attend a regular school at a time like this! This is truly outrageous!

First, and most importantly, it's too padded. It repeatedly describes things that don't need to be emphasized. Two or three pages are spent describing the protagonist doing something, but five or six pages are spent explaining why he did it and what he was thinking. Secondly, the protagonist inexplicably started showing off. Things like, "Your defense is pretty good, you can withstand my power without dying," and various other actions and words reeked of childish, pretentious bravado.

In conclusion, the subject matter is excellent, but the author is mediocre. 1. Every action, every line of dialogue, and every plot point requires a lot of internal explanation, which is exhausting to watch. 2. The author didn't manage the pacing of the protagonist's personality transformation well.