Tao Palace Game

The imagination is good, the plot is not too rushed, there is a process and a result, and it is comfortable to watch.

Being a Shennong for the first time, the original version thought this book was slow, step-by-step, and quite interesting. In chapter 85, Dao Palace has been described as having many nbs. A piece of extraterrestrial flesh and blood in the novice world is too much for Dao Palace to handle. The protagonist faces the extraterrestrial flesh and blood, and Dao Palace urgently says to recycle it. The protagonist hesitates, and then becomes parasitized. The novice mission fails, and he owes a lot of debt. It is not recommended for ordinary people to read it. The previous article is quite good, but it is a complete waste of expectations. If you can accept the abuse of the master, maybe you can give it a try.

But it's really hard to fail the protagonist in the first dungeon. If it's well-written, it's understandable, but it's an anticlimax. The most outrageous thing is that the description of the Taoist Palace is so nb. The world of the quiz can also be said to be completely under control. The local foreign gods and wild gods are nothing compared to the Taoist palace. In front of the local Taoists, they are just petty. As a result, the alienation of the external gods caused by a small mountain god who is equivalent to a boiled chicken cannot be cured. This Taoist palace is still closed down.

Mojiji wrote a lot, but he couldn't even explain the environment clearly. It was just the author's own brainstorming article.

160-120=30, Taught by the author

These comments are all rubbish. I have been reading books for more than ten years and I can take a look at this.

It is estimated that many people were disgusted by the first dungeon. After all, it was the first dungeon. No matter what genre it was, it had to at least have a small climax. The result was an anticlimactic end, with no improvement in cultivation, no improvement in skills, and the mentality of the protagonist was even worse. You have written the most attractive part of the free chapter so badly, who will continue to read it, and the author also explained that the first copy will not affect it, just like you say you are a chef and treat friends to dinner, but then you come up with a bunch of excuses, saying that you have no experience in treating friends to dinner for the first time, and you will definitely do it well next time, and ask everyone to come next time, who dares to come. I'm quite puzzled. Not only was the writing of the first copy brilliant, but it was just finished in a normal way. Does the whole thing have to be anticlimactic, just to arrange the plot of an evil god? Anyway, we can't appreciate this way of writing.

Duo-brained fish, you went astray. Tao Palace is the observer of the Tao. Change is the Tao and comes out. Are you going to die if you use the original strengthening route to cope with the present? Look at Li Muxuan and Lu Jin under one person. Finding a way is the greatest talent of a practitioner. Going out of the original strengthening route is suitable for the protagonist.

It's a waste of resources to spend several times the resources of an ordinary cultivator, but if you can't skip a level, it's a waste of resources if you can't beat people of the same level.

You've already become an immortal and you still sleep in Datongbu? Are you here to be funny?

This guy likes to write about eunuchs and pig's feet, and then the supporting characters and various love experts have a harem, and I don't know what his mentality is.

Is the author screening readers? Originally, the tempo was neither fast nor slow, and there was nothing exciting about it in the early stages. Logically speaking, the first dungeon should be a fun point that gave the protagonist a lot of resources, but as a result, he was kicked out before the game was even halfway through, and he was still in debt.

The dull dungeon process of more than 40 chapters ended the dungeon hastily, what kind of flesh and blood parasites will be created? To be honest, the contents of Chapters 84 and 85 are really not good. I originally thought this book might have some potential, but now it seems like it's still a piece of cake.

The strength in the dungeon increases too quickly, so the dungeon is forcibly ended and the strength is forcibly reduced. For this operation, the outline was burned overnight, right?

No wonder no one watched, the end of the first trial was so poisonous

I'm very disappointed. I regret voting for you. The last few books are so funny. I'll delete them and leave.

The character design fell apart at the beginning. A senior company official with an annual income of tens of millions, when he was suffering from illness and about to die, he would not let go of the 11,000 items 😅 The main character is not a Grandet style person.

It's okay in the past. In the first dungeon, the protagonist is parasitized by an evil god. Good guy, good guy, is it so poisonous? Please, please have some logic. Either die or live. This kind of parasitism is evil or disgusting. Just change the protagonist.

In the first trial world, under the control of the Dao Palace, an evil god appeared. Either it was a cheat for the protagonist, or it was too disgusting. That thing can't defeat the protagonist? , Fake it, The world is controlled by the Dao Palace, and something like that appears to test, it is illogical, The world is not completely controlled, if something like that appears, the Dao Palace should not react so quickly, and the protagonist should die

What the hell are you writing? They forced an extra scene in the early stage. When killing a tiger, you take a sip of poison and spray it on the tiger to kill it. It's not the tiger you're poisoning, it's me who's poisoned. 😅

First, there is no sense of substitution. The protagonist could not have been aboriginal, but the author forcibly turned him into a semi-aboriginal person just because of one sentence. Second, at the end of the quiz, you could have a surplus of two thousand meritorious deeds, but you have to write about some uncontrolled unexpected situations. Two thousand meritorious deeds are enough for you to become stronger. If you don't take the high road, you have to take crooked ways and suppress the protagonist in disguise. If you don't have enough lives, you still like to gamble, right? If you weren't the protagonist, you would have died so many times. Gamblers don't have a good end. It's disgusting.

It's too unreasonable. Let's just say that there should be no lower world in the early stage of this novel. Many of the pitfalls of immortals are completely gone later on, and the story is cut directly into the fairy world.

The idea is quite good, but the plot is too childish, and the growth process is too abstract, with no foundation and no Taoism.

Author, the system of cultivating immortals you have written in several books is considered to be a relatively interesting ancient cultivating style, but in the current environment, everyone reads online articles, especially those where the time traveler is set as a second-generation human being. The protagonist is not required to strategize, but he must also have a certain degree of scheming. To put it bluntly, A promising plan has the ability to fight back, instead of just having fun playing online games, always messing up things, and following the crowd. We readers will not be in a good mood when we bring in the protagonist. Calling you a messy mentality is all poisonous weeds. It is not an injustice to you, you brought it on yourself.

I can still read the previous one, but I can't stand the story about the fish and the tree. Maybe I'm too holy. Goodbye. I've deleted it.

I couldn't stand the first copy...

The author's writing style is fine, but the novel's conception is not. If he studies literature and copies public works, he may become a god.

There is nothing to say about the author's writing style and the plot, but it just doesn't fit the general environment. You can add some cool elements as appropriate. After all, we want to make readers' money. For me, the way it is written now, I also like to read it, but after all, you can't make money from niche readers like me.

Why did the update stop without saying a word?

It feels like the pace is a bit fast. Steady