Tiger Taoist

The first forty chapters are great, even a little bit shocking to me. After the forty chapters, the descent from the mountain is purely disgusting. The tiger and the tiger are one and the same, and they share the road. In the end, the tiger is like a tool. He said he was borrowed by a kid and went to ride it. Is this a partner in monasticism? It's funny If you don't want to write about tigers, don't call them Tiger Taoist! Here are my suggestions 1. It is okay to be in danger for the first time in the temple, but it is meaningless to arrange a vulgar two uninitiated young monks to be the enemies in the future. They go to learn their skills and take revenge. This is really vulgar, but if you write it well in the back, or if you describe the young monk in the front as being very clever, it will be fine 2. If you are called by passers-by and ambushed by a formation, then He was rescued by a passing sword cultivator. It would be better to change it to the male protagonist who discovered something was wrong and deliberately entered the trap to catch them all, because your tiger has a keen sense of smell. Did you forget about him? If you want to lure the sword cultivator and his gang, they can leave the factory later 3. Do you have to make the male protagonist a person with insufficient IQ? How many people who traveled through the modern era didn't know that they were naughty children, and even let their fellow Taoist friend Akashio ride on them? ! What do you think? 4. It's best to write about Tiger's character and growth, including some of his thoughts, because he's not a spiritual beast. He's very smart, okay? If you change it, please let me know. I'll delete the comment and apologize.

​ ​ Personally, I feel that there are quite a lot of layers, and it seems that the author has been changed several times in the middle. For example, from the beginning to the exit of the Tiger Temple, the golden elixir ascends to the upper world, and then goes to the new world to start again (the world that is restarted is all about cultivating the tiger bloodline), these layers feel like they can be used as another new book.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    I can still read the whole book as several books and two sequels connected together. Simply put, think of it as a sewing book. The plot with Meng Tingyu in the other world is very poisonous when combined with the previous content. (After reading Little Red Tree, I had to eat all the fruits from the festival tree to feel calm.) It is very funny to read the new world content as a new book without reading the previous content. I was really angry and funny after reading these chapters.        ， (This is also applicable to other novels, especially animal and nurturing novels) Book lovers who can read it without being persuaded can read all the way to Chapter 312 where the golden elixir enters the upper world. (Book friends who can persevere, I believe you can see this) After the upper realm, a new beginning all the way to chapter 423 is regarded as the content of the new book. Treat the content after Chapter 424 (New World) as a sequel to the second creation.        ，，， (perhaps)

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There are many bad points but they do not hinder reading. The flaw is that the writing is too rigid. For example, in Chapter 14, a good defensive treasure does not necessarily mean it is indestructible. Since it is made from clouds, softness and toughness are good attributes, or it can have the function of hallucinating, hiding one's body and breath, or it can be directly replaced with an auxiliary type to assist cultivation or a hallucinogenic attack type instrument. The writing in the front is pretty good, but the back part is obviously a bit messy. It should be that the outline and ideas are not sorted out, and the character of the protagonist is not clear enough and is quite changeable. In the end, the setting of practicing with a tiger as a companion is very novel, and the writing style is also improved compared to before. However, there are too many platform masters and it is not outstanding. Overall, go for it.

It's about the protagonist's rebirth, but it's written without any thoughtfulness. It made me want to curse. The setting was good, and it's not a waste. If you can accept that the protagonist is a novice, this book is still good.

The writing is really good, the setting is also very novel, and the world view is currently very consistent and complete. Come on, keep voting for recommendations every day

. . . . . . Opinion: Since the protagonist takes the tiger as the basis for his spiritual practice, he should make an article around the tiger instead of a hammer in the east and a mallet in the west. 1: Going to Huju Temple to gain experience in the mortal kingdom, and practicing with the silver from the treasury, is part of the main plot, but learning the Jinyunshao magic weapon deviates from the main plot. 2: Learn the formation method to make money from ghost silk, which deviates from the main line again, but fortunately there are not many chapters, so it is acceptable. 3: Traveling to the tribe to see monsters, sword cultivators, and treasures is an expansion of the world view. I used to think it was strange to expand downwards, but the author can actually write in detail if he is willing. 4: The story about the siege and killing of loose cultivators and the feeding of Burmese gold to tigers belongs to the main context. The story about Buddhism using the breath of wine and joy to practice Buddhism belongs to the perfection of the world view. 5: But spending a lot of time writing symbols to make money deviates from the main line again and makes people confused. Suggestion: Xianxia novels are no longer like those of the time when mortals were cultivating immortals. They must clearly describe how the protagonist uses his side job to earn spiritual stones and how many spiritual stones he earns at one time. The protagonist has a golden finger of enlightenment, but he always uses it to improve his side job skills. At best, it expands the richness of the novel, but at worst, it means the word count is low. Actually, there are still many things that can be explored in the novel, such as the improvement of skills and spells, how to fight and get along with monsters, Buddhists, and swordsmen. As a reader, I don't want to see how the protagonist makes money or picks up the slack. If the novel goes in this direction, why don't I read a tomb-robbing novel? The author should think about it, what is the most attractive thing for readers in "Tiger Taoist"? Is it that the protagonist lights up the skills of refining weapons, setting up formations, drawing talismans, and maybe even alchemy in the future? The name of the novel is "Taoist Tiger", not Taoist Fu, Taoist Dan, Taoist Qi, or Taoist Formation. If the author is not aware of this yet, then the novel will be lost to everyone, and it will be seen in the future.

The plot since leaving the mountain is really crappy

I just want to know if the vitality pills that the protagonist earns in the sect can only be used as decorations? You keep saying that you are short of gold energy to practice, so you should go buy it! ! The money 💰 is being kept for the New Year!

By the way, can the author tell me who wrote the first forty chapters of this book? Has the ghostwriter written his own book? If so, please let me know. Thank you.

I have tried the poison, and the first 40 pictures are okay, but the rest should be sold to rubbish writers. The spiritual tiger that depends on itself for life and death can be lent to others for just one silver coin. What else was said later about tigers being around people, I was speechless.

A tiger should be like his brother, right? Brothers may not always be together for the rest of their lives, but this tiger will be with you for the rest of your life. Just borrow it? Would you be happy if your brother lent you to a child to play with?

He is a mentally retarded person who can do all kinds of stupid things. He even lent his protective spirit beast to someone he had just met. Just like the swordsman lending his sword to a stranger, the president lends his black box to others. The author lent his wife to someone else. The live broadcast of drawing symbols is so cool, don't show off your IQ, you have never eaten pork and you should have seen pigs running. You are not an ancient person, and the information explosion cannot save you. You are really a waste. They also said that the senior sister has a bad brain, and the protagonist's intelligence is not very high. He is really defenseless when he goes to a strange place. Why are there so many such garbage articles. Some people also recommended it, and it was written in such a cool way, and I had the nerve to recommend it.

No wonder the results are mediocre. I suspect that the author changed after these forty chapters. Forcibly creating poison points just to select readers.

Sure enough, I saw that silly junior sister Baitian became a Taoist couple and then abandoned a lot of books. This is a highly toxic spot, but everything else is fine. Yo-yo. The author writes it himself and reads it yourself.

When I arrived at Dixian, I was ready to abandon the book. They are all unreasonable settings and go against my previous settings. I feel like Pig's Foot is the most powerful alchemist in the entire fairy world. I feel that only the demon around Pig's Foot produces all kinds of magical and heaven-defying companion creatures. You can take Xiaolian with you when you ascend, why not take them all with you to the sky? Why don't others bring the golden elixir (such as the Star Mulian of Wuzhuang Temple? Secondly, if the mortals of the previous session can all practice it, then why do they need the next session (there is no need to cultivate reserve forces)? The question of Fei Lai Guan, why does the little flower stay on Fei Lai Guan? Fei Lai Guan has gone to the previous session, and the Fei Lai Guan from the next session can be found by the past pig's feet. Why can the past Fei Lai Guan travel through time and space.

It's so cruel to let a child play with a tiger for a few days if you are soft-hearted. The cultivator doesn't even have the sense to be defensive.

The writing is good, I will give you a reward of 5,000. Come on, the author 🌹

The free chapter is just a poisonous one, okay? The protagonist is nt, and the enlightened spirit beast is lent to a child to play with? If you don't have a long memory and find out that something happened to your senior brother, why don't you go back first to bring in reinforcements? Even if you have money, you won't buy gold gas to speed up. It can only be said that the author likes to bring his own IQ into it.

The review of this book is very good! Became a Shennong for a time🥵🥵🥵

What I wrote before is okay, but after going down the mountain to practice on the fifth level of qi training, I can't stand it any more. Especially when I give my spiritual tiger, which is dying, to a little kid, I really can't understand it.

It makes me sick. A tiger is being loaned out like a dog. There is no cure for stupidity.

Chapter 44: Substitution? Brother, can I lend it to the naughty kid to play with?

The so-called tiger Taoist is not a Taoist who raises tigers, controls tigers, and drives tigers. So, those who want to watch the beast-control style can withdraw. In this book, the tiger in the Tiger Temple is the Taoist companion, the financial couple, the Taoist companion who can support each other and go on. He is a person who is more important than a relative or a wife. The tiger is not a tool.

Although there are many flaws, to be honest, I think it is enough. After all, the plot is still interesting. Don't talk about this book as if it is a platinum book. After reading too many junk books, you will know that this book is really good.

The tiger was just lent to others to play with. It was really poisonous. The most important thing was that he was still a naughty kid. What was impossible in the world of cultivating immortals? What if the great power is reborn and directly does something to your tiger? You won't even cry. The most important thing is that you lent him the tiger because you felt sorry for the child. Like when you wanted to buy a toy before, your family refused because they had no money and couldn't afford it, but their family can afford this child. Tigers are just too dangerous. If he really wants to have a tiger when he becomes an adult, his father will definitely get it for him. It's like a short-sighted person. When you were a kid, you couldn't buy toys because your family was poor. It's not that people can't afford them, but they have to wait until you become an adult. Are you short-sighted? Maybe he will be a tiger as a coming-of-age ceremony. He won't buy a tiger for him because he is afraid that it is too dangerous. Even if it is a tiger, he will definitely go to the insurance company to hypnotize the tiger or something. After hypnosis, the tiger will definitely be very obedient. He will sit when he is told to sit and squat when he is told to squat. He doesn't know yet. The severity, if he lies under the tiger's belly, tells the tiger to squat, and sits him directly under it, and then the tiger only listens to him, and those slaves can't order the tiger, it is easy to suffocate him to death. Now he doesn't know the severity, if he waits for him to grow up, he will definitely buy a tiger for this child

I just watched the beginning and saw the protagonist's practice. My first thought was that this was a practice created by a certain tiger demon. It seems to be based on humans. The owner must cultivate and protect the tiger carefully for the purpose of practice. At some point, the tiger will bite back and absorb everything from the owner. In this way, someone will protect him when he grows up, and he can gain experience in human society and cultivate useful tiger talents...

It's annoying to see. Huzi is your partner. You treat it as a tool. Senior sister must be smart, and master, brothers and sisters are treasures. Without strong strength, everything they do is a burden 😥😥

I think it's pretty good to put the wretched development and cultivation in front of the real NB. Later, I go out to travel, just like an S, or in the world of immortality. Author, your mother didn't educate you since you were young not to talk to strangers when you go out? Forget it, the kid in the back is even more troubled. Now everyone should know what impression they have of naughty kids, but let's leave that quarrelsome person aside. Besides, tigers should be considered your closest relatives and the least likely to betray you. Why don't you just let him play with a kid? Don't you want to ask for your opinion? Chapter 44: Death from Poison

I don't know why, but I feel like I shouldn't come to the original store. The environment is so bad and the good mood of reading is ruined.