My Destiny Is Mine

It's so damn good-looking, forgive my vulgarity, but it's a bit like Gu Zhenren's style. The author has a great imagination, a wonderful idea, and a perfect setting.

Alas, the current trend is such that the upright and great protagonists have become extinct. It has been a long time since I saw that kind of protagonist who is upright and has a charming personality. Just like the heroes in anime, who like to describe them as as obscenely as possible recently, Simmel in Fulian does not fall into the trap.

I came from the last book. The various abilities of the protagonist were mysterious, full of imagination, and full of expectations. I finished reading it, but I personally felt that there were many regrets and failures. There were many descriptions of Yiyun City and the citizens, but it was not attractive. I felt that it could be deleted. The plot of the second protagonist's matchmaker's clone felt quite separated from the protagonist. Although the clone was also very powerful, I always felt that he was not as awesome as the protagonist. The various timelines and time-travelers behind the third chapter are very messy, and their combat power has also collapsed. There are too many conspiracy theories about the Holy Emperor and God's will from the four big bosses, which makes me suspicious. It feels like it's all a trap and it doesn't feel good anymore. Wu hopes that the author will focus on focusing on the growth of the protagonist's abilities, and it would be better to add some plots of the protagonist pretending to be a slap in the face. Hmm, I hope the author can write this book better

After reading two new books, they seem to have some shadow of Heihua Flow? Your life is a small one but you want to be a good person? If it's this genre, it's not very popular.

In name, the protagonist becomes a demon cultivator, but in fact, he is still doing the right thing. I don't understand why the author still emphasizes that the protagonist is a demon cultivator from time to time.

The book is very good, but why no one reads it 😰

This is a bit questionable. There are so many factions, fairy kingdoms, stealing immortals, and loose immortals in Huang Tian. There is only one lower world in the book. How can it provide so many fairy factions, fairy kingdoms, and loose immortals? In addition, many fairy kingdoms in Huang Tian have not been inherited in the human world. How does he exist? Didn't the book say that without popularity in the human world, Huang Tian's fairy kingdom would disappear? Are there many human worlds?

Why hasn't this book become a masterpiece yet?

There are so many NPCs that readers can't remember them, and one often pops up out of nowhere. After a few chapters, it's almost gone and will never be used again. Why would a passerby like this name him?

This book has no concept of time. The author is vague about the age of the pig's feet or how long he has been practicing. Normal people have no concept of how long it takes to reach a state.

The protagonist is also a shit mountain coder. The key is that he can run faster than the one who has been practicing for thousands of years.

If you came here because you liked the character of the protagonist in the author's previous book, you can leave.

This villain is too disgusting to die. I couldn't stand it any longer, even eating and taking it, and kicked me for dead wood. Abandon the brothers first😐😐

When I read the free chapter, my first impression was that it borrowed some ideas from The Legend of the Life Hunter and Gu from the Nine Swords. The following is a large block of almost original fortune-tellings and innovative cultivation methods that are both good. But the protagonist still feels less frustrated. Do you feel that the protagonist is too smooth? How can there be a strong sense of conflict without frustration? And the other supporting characters are too marginal, their subordinates are tool men, and their relatives and friends are too fake. The characters are not standing up, and when reading some big scenes, you can only feel a sense of incomprehension when seeing the various parties fighting and enlarging their moves. Especially the section where the Market School was destroyed felt too childish. The whole incident felt too far away from the protagonist. There were not many friends in the Market School. The reason for the destruction of the School was not described in detail, and the battle process was not very clear. The reading is: "First the protagonist develops a lot, then the protagonist's sect is destroyed, but it has nothing to do with the protagonist, and finally the protagonist can stand alone and show off."

Why are humans and aliens always at odds? It has to be for something, right? It has been written to the last volume. Throughout the whole text, there is a confrontation between human races and alien races, but the reason for the opposition has not been written. If it's just because of the conflict of cultivation resources, why aren't there many, many countries in which human races and alien races are in conflict with each other? Or there are various ethnic groups in the alien race, such as the chest-piercing people, the fire-wearing people, etc. If the alien race and the human race are only in opposition because they belong to different ethnic groups, then what is it that combines the various different ethnic groups into one ethnic group called the alien race? Why do other races identify themselves as belonging to an ethnic group called the alien race instead of going out independently like the human race? If it was just because of interests, how could it be possible that at different stages (Jiuzhou, Huangtian, Cangtian) they could be clearly divided into two camps of humans and aliens? There is no answer to these

Admire, admire. How long does it take to come up with so much inspiration?😢

Have you ever practiced immortality? You write blindly and play the piano randomly based on your own imagination.

Whether good or bad, they are all characteristics of one party, but after so many chapters, apart from having feelings for a few of his masters, Lao Deng has always been neutral and partial to self-interest. He even had a strong resistance to the Tiansha Lone Star when he first met his master's disciples. So why are there ethnic concepts that are more important than these emotions? Foreign races are just consumables in Lao Deng's eyes. It could be the reason for such a style of dealing with things, but now it seems that it is set like this directly like creating an NPC. The human race is the nb and the alien race is the sword. They would rather risk going to the alien area to practice the alien race than provoke the human race. Even if it is not possible, they are still demon cultivators among the human race. Either optimize this reaction, or simply lay out the idea of ​​​​why it is like this.

Whether it is to bring people together or to ward off disasters. It jumped out too abruptly. No foreshadowing. But now that it's been written like this, what are the follow-up arrangements? Pack lunch immediately? Or is it entangled and ambiguous?

Could the author be writing a farming development novel like Making a Copy? This is what you had in mind when reading the introduction to your last book, Qingyunxian. Then I realized it was not the case. Could the author be able to write the previous genre?

Why didn't the person who changed the fate of the protagonist directly kill the protagonist or directly imprison him (if the protagonist's cultivation level affected him)? Is it a fool's operation like the Emperor of Soul, or is there another hidden agenda?

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Happy New Year, book friends

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Hypocrite, true villain, villain first, gentleman later, gentleman is magnanimous, villain always cares.

The plot after Shengcang is so boring (=_=)

Will there be a call behind Cang Tian Huang Tian 🙂, Cang Tian is dead, Huang Tian should stand, the year is in Jiazi, the world is auspicious, and the protagonist Jiazi is too old.

The more you write, the more exciting it becomes. Do you plan to finish it as soon as Heaven is finished?

I read in the comment section that it looks like Gu, so when I asked, I really hate CS protagonists like Fangyuan. Including the kind of writing in which the author exports Jiahao's dark values

Because I have never looked at this label. I looked at it today and I didn't expect it to be quite good.