Fairy of the Mist

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This book would have been okay in 18 or 19 years, but it is too old-fashioned now, and many parts are quite mysterious. I can't say it's bad, but it's too old, with new words and old appendices, and it's still the same routine from five or six years ago.

I thought it was okay at first, but after dozens of pictures I couldn't stand it anymore. There are so many exercises and they are so messy. Since we are interpreting ancient scriptures, we should specialize in a few and practice everything. Doesn't this increase the chance of mutation?

The idea is very good. To be honest, it feels baffling. After all, Wen Xi has helped the protagonist, and the protagonist can be kind to her. What the hell is that Zhu Xuanxuan? The first time we met and went shopping, I gave him an orchid worth 10,000 yuan. Haha, the second time I went directly to the protagonist. The protagonist went directly to his father's student and took the valuable jade, and made something worthless in this world to give to the woman. I feel like shit, you can still see this kind of plot of dog licking. In the past, novels often described Long Aotian's palace stories about dog licking, etc., But now there is still this kind of thing.

I couldn't stand it anymore. After reading Chapter 51, I just made the protagonist look like a mentally retarded person. Is a famous college student really not able to understand any classical Chinese? And that girl gave her two pieces of magic-sealed jade as a gift when we met for the second time. Neither the protagonist's parents treated her like this!

Wait for others to use your creativity and write better than you

I just read the introduction and knew it was nonsense. It's as special as a modern person who travels back in time to ancient times and can control the wind and rain. How can you interpret the world of real science and technology and cultivate immortality? One plus one equals two because the person who invented it said he was two. The person who invented it said he was three. Now one plus one equals three. Do you understand? You can interpret and cultivate immortality, why can't you cultivate in the real world? They are not on the same level.

The creativity of this book is good, but the writing style is still a bit poor. First of all, the biggest creative point of this article is that everyone can awaken to different scriptures or practice other people's scriptures. In the early stage, when there were three people, the writing was quite attractive. There are demons and ghosts in the fog, and the living areas are not large. It is not easy to travel, and the population The setting is a bit loose and too much. Starting from that sword sect, the author's writing is a bit casual. The outline and main story line as well as the battle realm are very vague. The protagonist changes the map and is led by others. It's just a formality. The emergence of the sect is a failure. The biggest attraction of this book is the diversity of scriptures and They misunderstood that this was the most fundamental and attractive essence of the book. Unfortunately, the best and biggest creativity was cut off by the author himself. According to the early setting of the book, the world should be like this. Fog spreads all over the world, there are many monsters and ghosts, communication is inconvenient, and each living area is large or small, but the population will not be large. This results in a person who can only guess at the scriptures. The practitioners are severely alienated and have weird personalities. Their habits are different from ordinary people or they are not human. Their strength is even different. There are sects, but they are definitely small ones. They will not be the mainstream of the world. They are more cultural or military exchange organizations such as loose alliances.

Both worlds are mysterious worlds, and they feel broken.

The author simply relied on his strength to write a platinum-intentioned book and turned it into a defense

Excuse me, if anyone writes a book using the author's creativity, please @ me

Maybe the author wanted to write about an ordinary person cultivating immortality to show how difficult it is to become an immortal. But in a prestigious university, to put it bluntly, if your score is not above the top level, you are not even qualified to register as a sports student. What's more, the children of university professors will not be able to teach such a mentally retarded protagonist regardless of genetic inheritance or education. Nowadays, when primary school students face the protagonist's experience, they will also question, fear, and avoid it. But he will definitely not do all kinds of tricks like a retarded person.

Suddenly I felt that giving Ruyi to two women I didn't know very well was a big mistake. You didn't even give it to your parents, so you gave it to two women you didn't know very well. You also exposed your abilities. Pigs are smarter than you!

The protagonist keeps getting caught and relies on luck to survive.

I finally insisted on reading the free chapter. The setting of this book is good, but there are too many points that reduce intelligence and poison. When the map was changed, the protagonist was captured, and he was captured three times in total until the chapter was released. The excessive use of exclamation points can be considered a small poisonous point, and these poisonous points drive most people away.

The writing is messy. I couldn't stand it after reading chapter 60. It's really poisonous. The first time I posted this was just to complain about this book. I saw that the author has written six books. The previous book Tiger Taoist was also okay. Why is this writing so rubbish? There are all kinds of wisdom, and he is arrested every day. The protagonist is not Chinese, right? Doesn't he know the Tao Te Ching? If there is a name for the scripture, can't he go to a Taoist temple to ask a professional? It is difficult for Taoist priests to interpret the scriptures?

Generally speaking, this is a book about Tang Monk's adventures. Basically, he was caught and escaped, and then he was caught and escaped again. This cycle repeats itself. After reading part of it, I got tired of it!

After reading more than 350 chapters, I feel a bit overwhelmed! It looks okay, but I feel like there's something wrong with the logic, and it's really a bit frustrating to be caught all the time. Where is the Earth Escape Talisman? You said that your protagonist has learned so many exercises, why don't you use them anymore? I read more than three hundred chapters. In the Qingwu area, the demon clan is very powerful. Where is the Demon Transformation Sutra? Isn't this a magical skill? I feel like the author completely forgot about it! It is recommended to fuse and enhance the skills (add some points to dark blue ~ manual and funny)! It's not like the cool articles I write now, and the plot is too watery! Hey~

I'm not nitpicking, you translated the Taoist secret scriptures, instead of hiring professional Taoist priests, you found a university professor to translate the classical Chinese, and you just translated the classical Chinese into vernacular, and then you can practice. Isn't this funny? If you don't say anything else, just say something simple, Huang Ting Jing, the first step of training written in the scripture is to use Qi to blast away Huang Ting. Do you know what the concept of Huang Ting is? In Taoist terminology, Huang Ting seems to refer to the lower Dantian? If you don't understand the Taoist term Huang Ting, which refers to the lower Dantian, and how to practice it, as well as Jiang Yang, which seems to refer to the middle Dan Tian. These terms are all other people's terms, and your university professor will help you translate them into vernacular, use Qi to open the Huang Ting, and then flush the Yang Yang. Do you understand how to practice?

The first few chapters poisoned me to death. They made me mentally retarded, the writing was poor, and there was no main plot. Farewell

I've only read a dozen chapters, and the author has already changed several maps. Why can't the author just let the protagonist sit still for a while? The protagonist has never stabilized. He was either forced or caught and sent to death row. Just after he calmed down for a few days, he was hunted down, captured, and changed maps. There were a lot of exercises and scriptures, but there was no main line, and the main exercises were not explained. He practiced this and that, but in the end he didn't practice anything well.

Did the author write this article decades ago? It feels like someone living in the 1990s suddenly traveled to the 2020s. There is an innocent beauty that is not polluted.

After reading Chapter 165, it was outrageous to have a city lord stand on the moral high ground and be kidnapped. Also, when writing about a stallion, I saw that each one was both independent and independent. This is the author's character in real life, but there are no women around him.

Don't say anything else. Seek refinement.

I really couldn't read it until I finished three chapters. The protagonist emphasized that he was not smart in the book. I thought he was being self-effacing, but I didn't expect that after three chapters, he was really a fool (which made me feel no sense of empathy). There were several logical errors in the first three chapters. I really couldn't read it, so I slipped away!

The first dozen or so chapters were okay, but then the girl's grade plummeted when she came out, as if she couldn't write a book and had to be replaced.

It's a pity that the setting is so good. The author doesn't have enough writing power. The emotional drama is a mess. The foggy world is okay. The real world can be skipped.

"Humanity Continent" is too difficult for newcomers! Please support me.

Relying on History Did the author use his brain when writing the book?

Later, the combat power and operation were very poor. Yang Qianhuan was stunned for such a big movement for such a long time. Why should he find something to do? Then the key areas were artificially only, and the cerebellum could not be directly operated, so he directly delivered food. The trust hierarchy and anti-spy system have overturned before and after the finale, where is our little bottle? Even if it is destroyed like this, it will be destroyed, but the protagonist goes to the saint, tepidly, and kills him with a sword. This can only be said that he has a really good temper. He does not educate these evil people, but still teaches them. I really want to express my condolences to Little Blue Star. I originally thought that the protagonist Broom Star only cheated the foggy world, but in the end, Little Blue Star was not taken seriously. After knowing the saint's operation, he became furious, and then... It was gone. The finale was no longer angry, and there were no preventive measures or plans in the middle.