Liaozhai Alchemist

I read the latest chapters in one go, and I have a few suggestions. Those of you who haven't read them can also refer to them The first dozen chapters, to be honest, I almost couldn't finish it. The writing is awkward, and the most embarrassing part is undoubtedly the poetry part. Anyone who has completed nine years of compulsory education actually has a certain aesthetic ability in ancient poetry. Therefore, in order to make use of strengths and avoid weaknesses, it is better for the author not to create his own, even if he plagiarizes, right? If a time traveler plagiarizes, can it be called plagiarism? 🤓 The second thing is, emotional drama, as I said before, use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, you can write it, you can even write a few more, but don't write too many details. The key is that the author is not good at writing this, and the later ones will be better than the previous ones. 👍 Generally speaking, the writing gets better as you go to the end. The story is told very well, much better than the previous book, but you have to pay attention to the rhythm and don't write nonsense. Write more about the protagonist refining alchemy, training spirit beasts, and miraculous monsters. If readers are interested, please develop more golden fingers. After all, it will be great to pretend to be alchemy in the future. ✌️

It's still pretty good, not tiring to watch.

I really couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 23. You want to show me modern love in an ancient setting? Poisonous? Only a powerful family dares to show off. If a little maid dares to do this, she should be classified as a female channel.

Okay, I've been holding back the bitch part for a while now, good guy, this shit is not just a lump, it's a fucking vat, it's really a little cracked! I won't go into too much detail, but I suggest the author first check the weight of a legitimate son in ancient society! What is the operation of recognizing an adopted son when his legitimate son is not dead and he is not old yet? Is it a fool who can have a career in a cannibalistic society? Even if the legitimate son dies, it's impossible to immediately recognize an adopted son to seize the throne, right? Is it difficult to be too aggressive with a baby? Or is it that my son is going to die, so it is the right thing to find a relative's son to come and seek the throne and usurp the throne, so that he will die a miserable death? After all, people's hearts are unpredictable

After seeing 61, I would like to express my opinion: the protagonist is not brainless, but does not express the way of thinking in the Internet age of modern society in the previous life, so the protagonist behaves no different from the natives after time travel. This is based on the protagonist's behavior and thoughts. In addition, the thoughts of an ancient maid are written into the thoughts of a modern girlfriend, which is not like the ancient maid at all, and is exactly the opposite behavior of the protagonist. The author's writing is really speechless =_=! ! !

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 45. He also killed monsters and recited poems, but he was still reciting Xin Qiji's Po Zhenzi. That poem was about his own life. It is about being drunk and imagining that when he was young, he would fight, be successful in battle, and leave a name in history, but when he woke up from the dream, his hair was already gray. Can you copy this kind of poem casually? It is narrative... The only lyrical part is the last sentence of "Pity for Nothing"... The protagonist is a young scholar. As soon as this thing comes out, the whole world knows that he is a lj. If he wants to say that this poem is his own, he will be nailed to the pillar of shame and talked about for the rest of his life.

I thought alchemy was made by an alchemy inheritance like female fantasy fantasy, but the result is a synthetic golden finger, and the protagonist is also a bit seriously ill. When a civil servant offers you the opportunity to rise to the top, do you reject it or accept it? Even if you don't accept it, do you thank the person who gave you such an opportunity or do you scold him? Even if you have a golden finger, others don't know it, but they give it to you with good intentions. You declined the opportunity to be a civil servant, but instead lost your temper. What are you so angry about? There are so many people who want the opportunity of Yin Shen Tongjuan. What's wrong? You can become a god in one step and get a salary. In addition, the golden finger is much better than a tuberculosis ghost. You refuse without gratitude or go to the exam, but lose your temper. If I were the city god, I would wear small shoes for you. If your character is not good, you still want to become an immortal. Dreaming.

Strict wife control, occasionally there were a few in ancient times! A concubine hardly dares to give a bad temper to her husband. As for a maid, not to mention giving a bad look to her master, as long as she is not obedient and not serious, she will be kicked out of the house, and if it is serious, she will be beaten to death. This author is really not suitable to write about ancient settings. This is the first novel I have seen in which a girl gives a bad attitude to her master. It seems to be the first one. The other one is about a girl giving a bad attitude to the lord in a medieval setting in Western countries! What a god damn logic, the waves are surging where there is no water, and the details are where there is no logic! Not to mention ancient times, if in modern times you hire waiters who don't show mercy to customers, how many days can they stay in your company?

In fact, according to books such as "Baopuzi Neipian" or some contemporary novels, many elixirs have special ways of taking them, and they must be combined with medicinal ingredients. There are also some elixirs that cannot be taken, but they also have miraculous effects when worn. There are also some elixirs that can turn from good medicine into poison due to the inability to match the realm or certain physical conditions. I feel like the author can write these in. It will be more interesting.

He was poisoned and died from the poison. There are too many flaws. First of all, he didn't say that his disease was contagious, and he just didn't say it in one sentence to support the plot. Then the protagonist read a book but didn't read other books and he actually got a good name. Also, the protagonist is the only son of a wealthy family, and his son is not dead yet? The protagonist's father adopts an adopted son and prepares to adopt him. Although I don't understand the eldest brother, I also know that at least he should wait until the person dies before adopting him. No matter in history or in modern times, whether the father dies or the son does not exist, the person has to wait for a while before he can adopt him. What makes me speechless the most is whether the author understands what father and son are. The only son, his father gave up because his illness was difficult to cure. I understand if the family is poor, but he basically gave up on his only son despite being rich, and prepared to adopt someone else's son. The most disgusting thing is that the protagonist actually went to his father to ask his father to buy him medicine, and even copied a poem to impress his father. He laughed to death.

I'll just say a little bit. As long as it travels through ancient times, as long as the protagonist has a maid beside him but there are too many scenes, it will definitely collapse! ! ! Can't cover up the smell of diaosi

In the fourth chapter, Zhang Zhong calls the protagonist eldest brother, which means that Zhang Zhong is younger than the protagonist. In the seventh chapter, it is said that Zhang Zhong betrayed his lust to lure the unsalted girl to curse, so the protagonist got tuberculosis. . . Now it turns out that the main character is sick at the age of 8. Let me go, this is a picture of a young girl who seduces an unsalted girl. . .

If you want to see how to make alchemy, you don't need to read it. It's all explained in one sentence. Making alchemy is just like cooking rice in a rice cooker.

In the early stage, he made a fortune from elixirs. In the later period, all kinds of precious elixirs were freely distributed for free. Aren't you afraid of poisoning your fans due to the strong contrast? Did you, the author, pay attention?

The poisoning started in the first chapter, don't come here, why don't you leave, and don't you listen to the young master? He talks a lot, talking about coughing and vomiting blood, but refuses to say three words, it will be contagious!

It doesn't change, the protagonist has traveled through time and still doesn't believe in monsters. If you have some brains, can you understand that the ordinary world can tolerate these ghosts and monsters?

I really don't know what to say about the protagonist's IQ. A good modern person is not as good as aboriginals. Many things are obviously wrong. He is just like a blind man. He is not as smart as the maid.

Chapter 110 completely poisoned me 😅 The protagonist takes all kinds of elixirs, practices Taoism, martial arts, etc. He can do whatever he wants with monsters the size of calves. It's not too much to break bones and tendons with just one punch with bare hands. If you hit a few leading villagers, they won't be able to gather together. Who are you disgusting with doing this?

Why is no one pursuing the investment? This author is very honest and will not lose money.

I just realized that your last book was a Hu Taoist, and the characters in this book are not good either. Although the setting is interesting, the characters in the book are really intelligent.

Why are writing about monsters in Liaozhai still limited to animals and plants? Whether it is in traditional Chinese mythology or Liaozhai, everything can be transformed into spirits, including but not limited to animals and plants, organic matter, inorganic matter, man-made objects (including houses and cities), and the inorganic environment (mountains, rivers and seas). I feel that the imagination of current authors is not as good as that of the ancients. From reading for a long time, we can see that a kind of thought has been solidified and spread deeply in online articles.

If you can make elixirs, why don't you give them to your own father? It's not just for yourself. Even dogs can eat them, but not your own father?

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It was quite speechless to watch. Starting from the local dog, it will be contagious if it starts to chirp for a few days but cannot say a word. I don't care about the character of the maid, just modernize it. It's the emotional line at the end. A girl randomly comes out and likes the protagonist and won't marry him (the three sisters of the Hu family). Later, if I had some cultivation, I would poke my head into the grass every day, and I would take care of anything when I encountered it. I had a few great immortals under my command who were domineering, and my servants were looking for talents at the place where the rankings were posted. Everything else is fine, just plain. However, he hasn't been able to find more elixirs for his father for so long, and Marshal Feng from the sky has brought his own dry food to help. There is a shortage of elixirs in the sky, and the protagonist has not seen any offerings. Also, what the ninth-grade Heavenly Official gave me at the beginning was too casual. When I look at the arrogant character of the protagonist, I always want someone to teach him a lesson, preferably in an unforgettable way. When I go to work as a county magistrate in another place, I spend money to buy drinks. I am a bad chess player and I still feel that I am awesome. I lose a few games and my face becomes pale and angry. What a god! The maid helped to win and was still very angry.

Later, the plot is forcibly advanced, various wits are used, and the combat effectiveness of the whole story is messy. Nascent Soul's can't beat the foundation-building ones, and the pig's feet either rely on others to save them or rely on coincidence to escape.

This book is so poisonous that I didn't want to read it after reading a few chapters. In the final analysis, the author didn't handle it well. There are no problems with the plots themselves, but the author doesn't have the level to write those plots in a way that makes people feel comfortable.

I haven't read it since you inexplicably ascended. I didn't clear the story of Liaozhai, so I went to the next world. I stopped reading it. I recently found it again. I was reading it since returning to Liaozhai. The title of the book is Liaozhai. At least the end of Liaozhai is going to other worlds. If you can't continue writing, just end it. If you can continue, it's better than if it ends in the middle.

Personally, I don't think it's as good-looking as Hu Taoist.

Why is the protagonist crying in Chapter 9? This is a fucking time traveler. I went to the hospital and entered the pill formation stage without crying. It's extremely poisonous!

It feels like it wasn't written by one person! The level has dropped too much