Immortal I Speed ​​Channel Supernatural Game

Is the cover directly facing Sister Dongbei Yu?

After the plot of the second sister was revealed, the protagonist's humanity began to increase. From the crazy character of the characters in the past, a series of natural abstract words were displayed. Now there is too much humanity. The abstract words feel like they were written specifically for fun. The most typical example is that he calmly accepts Mary's bunny girl costume, but later in the plot, it is said that he will dance naked in a clown costume and feel socially awkward. More intervention from family members Currently, I see that my eldest sister is not dead and is still an advanced player. I guess my parents are not that simple either. After taking care of it, the madness was significantly reduced Before the protagonist entered the dungeon, he was really playing as a dungeon, and there was no heavy emotional investment. However, some core concepts can always be extracted, such as the free will of the Mary, the hope and despair of the circus, the reversal of the stage and the love story of the overlord Yu Ji. The first few scripts were about abstract narratives mixed with wits to show the core, but now they are like urban martial arts and violent deity in different backgrounds. It seems that there is not as much contrast as before.

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📢: This is the brain storage area. Please line up and put your heads in an orderly manner Please identify your number plate, one card for each brain, and do not pretend to claim more than one. If you are smart, please put your cherished heads in the safe at the back to avoid being falsely claimed by others, causing unnecessary disputes and annoyance. 💢 We hereby solemnly warn you not to steal other people's brains when our staff are not paying attention🧠 Love Brain, please do not affect the rest of your neighbors. Thank you for your cooperation Thank you for your strong support for this book, I am very grateful. Just to trouble readers who usually have some free time, please help me click on the latest chapters and read them every day, so that I can have data. This lady, you don't want your husband either... Oh, it's cross-talk. Dear readers, you don't want to keep the book to death by keeping copies, right? As for the update time in October, it is estimated that it can only be updated at night, because Fries has to go to work during the day and does not get off work until 9:30 in the evening. It is already 10 o'clock when I get home. But the update frequency will be faster after it goes on sale next month! Because I am not a cool person! JOJO! Trivia: When reading this book, don't put too much thought into pursuing the perfection of hard-core logic. After all, I'm not a real detective. Wu Shen is also here to complete the work. Everyone can read it to relax after a tiring day. French fries provide emotional value and there is no need to make it too depressing. The above is from the heart of an 18-year-old newcomer.

The widow!

The widow—Wu died!

Zhuge Yue's offline appearance was a bit unexpected. I also imagined that this person would be in the harem group in the future. I really like this person.

In Chapter 2, I saw that the protagonist has a family. Can anyone tell me what happened next? Watching Giant Mosquito in the Sky left an indelible psychological shadow on me. The emotional scenes were disgusting. The routine is classic within the classic, and the writing style is average. A strong tomato flavor.

Let me ask, does the protagonist feel no pain? If someone uses the Ten Manchu torture methods against the protagonist, wouldn't the protagonist be afraid at all? Or if 100 ugly men line up to attack the protagonist, wouldn't the protagonist be afraid?

I haven't read Chapter 10 of Sanchun Hotel yet, so I'll briefly share my personal opinion. This novel currently has 300 chapters. Before Smile Refuge, I personally think it is definitely not only at the level of 300+ on the monthly ticket list (I only contribute one piece at the moment), but at least at the level of 100+. As for the protagonist, he is not particularly compassionate, but he does not delay things and has a positive outlook on life. He is a genius and does not have a strong sense of empathy, but he is more down-to-earth in terms of human nature. In terms of supporting characters, I personally feel that the ones currently on the stage are: 1. Zhuge Yue. From the previous article, it seems that his death was too easy. After his death, a lot of patches were made, and the character creation was slightly flattened. In fact, it was okay, and it finally led to Pluto. But in terms of character, she is more suitable to dig deeper, and from this we can discuss the next supporting role. 2. Second sister, so far, apart from introducing the old Taoist priest, I have not discovered his role in the entire novel. In fact, whether he is used as a foreshadowing or a hidden clue, I know that he will definitely be of great use later, but why do we need to talk so much about her and open the Sanchun Hotel in this part? Everyone has known since the Yin Yuan Thief that she is not ordinary. In the later stage, she will also be of great use at the level of gods, and you can probably guess a little bit. At this time, it may not be necessary to write her as a killer, or to apply an unusual patch, or to forcefully open a Sanchun Hotel because of the protagonist. Is there any possibility that it is not necessary? Her opportunities, her vagina, her ghost, and her extraordinary skills are very attractive, but the whole background of a killer seems reasonable - oh, she must not be an ordinary person with such an awesome life experience, and then in Sanchun Hotel, her ghost ability has been patched, and the thickness of the character has been strengthened, but it is really unnecessary. From the nonsensical point of view of this book, it is the unexpected that makes people's eyes light up. When it comes to rationality, let's not talk about whether she is consistent with Zhuge's characterization of the protagonist, whether she really helps the protagonist as an anchor (I don't think so, the protagonist is as stable as a stranger), whether it fits the theme of the book, let's just talk about it. You can mention the character of the second sister as a side story at the end, or you can open a separate chapter before it finally comes into play. But let me say one more thing, the second sister of an orphan who loves her younger brother very much, is very very beautiful, very very very strong, there is no sense of involvement at all 🙂. If this character wants to join the team (I think the writing idea is a lone wolf, it should not be), I think it is okay to write it like this, but as a foreshadowing, even a hidden line, it is a bit too much. 3. Xie Zhi (xiezhi), I think he is more like the human character of the protagonist, but the author did not write in this direction. There is nothing right or wrong. Instead, I think the character is well created as a clear line, but if there is the second brother Shushan The feeling of righteousness turning evil is even better, such as killing evil people at all costs and being oppressed by others, but because the protagonist has to help step by step, either out of friendship or out of profit (similar to Zhuang Zhuang Dad), this kind of development is also good. Of course, it's still the same sentence. I think there is nothing wrong with the character created by the author, but I just have my own little opinion. 4. Scholar Qin, the book boy seems to be just a little book boy. When he was in the Liyuan, he seemed to have some skills (although there was a patch saying that he went there many times), but when he arrived at Smile Sanctuary, he was okay in the early stage of the dungeon. In the later stage, Chun Chun was a big fan, a strong person at level 30. It can be like this, there is nothing wrong with it, but it is clearly the second among the third batch of players in the country and even the world. If you write it like this, why does Qinglong have to do all the good things? Or is Qin Shusheng still as brainless as now after the merger, but with added strength and knowledge to force the cooperation? Or was this person not found in the middle and later stages? All in all, it's too embarrassing. I don't think the protagonists Liyuan and Sanctuary have become much stronger, but how can they suppress the "second" like this? It needs a big supporter to show the protagonist's awesomeness. There is no problem with this. But like the person on the cruise ship, or Zhuge, or creating a bad luck guy who has bad luck to do this, I don't think it is so disqualified. 5. Penguin, this could have been a god-level supporting role like Caesar, especially of high status. He could be an entertaining game opponent for the protagonist, or a profiteer paired with a practical little expert to cause trouble. The early stages of this book are actually very lively, but with such a strong character who can enter any dungeon, and even if she wants to recruit a disciple, she has to make a deal with the Lord, and with such a good image, and a supporting role that fits the protagonist's characterization, the two and a half dungeons have not seen his end, which is not bad, but it is not as lively as the early stage of this book. I really think he could be a character like Caesar. 6. Those two bitches, brother, do you know how I feel when I see those two people now? When I saw them, I knew that this dungeon was over. Not only were they crushed in terms of strength and character, I didn't want to see the protagonist rely on these two to solve the dungeon... Why didn't I summon them as soon as they started? The protagonist should be very rational. Isn't calling over for help the best solution? By the way, why don't you give this job to Scholar Qin or Penguin? Why do you give it to these two people? Do they have any reason to appear? To be honest, brother, these two people have to appear every time. Do they have any necessary role to play? You have to disclose this to some extent. Otherwise, every time at the end, there will be traces of a bunch of big guys, but it will be very annoying to have to call these two over. 7. There are many people writing about it. Let's leave aside the mid-to-late stage characters like Tarot Master Qinglong, and leave aside the know-it-all intelligence dealer. If there is an ordinary supporting role in the future, we can just show up and explain it during the square trading. Every time he appears, there is no sense of involvement, and I don't know what role he comes in. He is not a living brother. Finally, let me complain about Smile Shelter. Brother, I know you have to bury a lot of things in this part and have to tell a lot of information. However, brother, an old Taoist priest, a penguin, three sages, a Qin scholar, two women, and many foreshadowings are used to shape the plot. Don't you think it is not as good as the twins and the woman with a good sense of smell? The twins are so damned good that the agent also has his own clear character, but why do the other bosses have the feeling that they are there just for the sake of the plot? There is also the clown suit. Three top-level epics have been turned into one suit with a side effect (currently) that seems to be very large (emphasis added), which is a bit of a loss. This is an invincible novel. The protagonist has never suffered a loss except for a small defeat from an old Taoist priest. It is completely reasonable for the legendary suit to not be so effective (mainly when you fight, you can't save the gods by running naked and dancing for 10 seconds). Moreover, if you write it this way, the exclusive equipment is either invincible or invincible. They are all good items without any side effects. Not to mention that the protagonist should not have many of these items. Otherwise, wouldn't it be a pleasure to change from a battle of wits to a battle? Besides, if this is the case, why can't someone as an experienced player have more than one? Isn't it a big problem for you how to fight then? Either exclusive equipment can be polarized, which is more reasonable. Link side effects to death and turn it into truly exclusive equipment. In fact, I feel that letting Xiaoxiao share a mission can kill two birds with one stone, and then combine it into a piece of equipment, such as a tattoo, a crest that takes effect when placed in a backpack, or a simple clown skin mask, which can evolve again to form something similar to a subordinate personality, and then delete the side effects or "select" it and then link it to death. Then increase the side effects of the exclusive equipment, so that in the later stage, there is no need to write about both combat and wits. It is better to just write about wits and add tricks. The last thing I want to say is that your infinite flow of invincible novels is really good, but the plot feels a bit broken starting from Smile Sanctuary. As a new writer, this is normal, just don't write too much, focus on the plot, other characters, the second sister will be released first, and later on, don't write the book boy and let him become a pure admiration, or even let him break the big story In the future, it will become a full-time supporter. The venerable is rarely seen or serves as a clue provider (it is almost the same now, but I mean to make them less human, so it is easier to write). The penguin will show up more to support, and the old Taoist priest will show up every one or two copies to show off. It is best to make the protagonist's knowledge go to the next level or subvert it. Qinglong should just die. In this way, the reality is the Cave Cave Haechi, and the copy is the three major clue providers of Shutong Penguin (it is completely ok without Shutong) and the Venerable Old Taoist Priest. The Ape God and the Catastrophe Cult act as the bright thread, while the second sister Pluto acts as the hidden thread. The focus should be on the plot and overall life of the protagonist, and less effort should be spent on other areas, concentrating on big things. Finally, if you finish the story with 1.5 Million words, your structure is really good, but if it exceeds 2 million words, firstly, it will become more and more boring and unhappy, and secondly, the supporting characters will be a bit flat and too watery

The first dungeon was great, it was interesting, people died neatly, and it was very comfortable to watch. But the second dungeon changed. Isn't it too boring for the good guys not to die? Why did it happen that he survived only to die in the end? Wouldn't it be worse to die directly at the hands of the boss? It doesn't affect the plot. Later, there is the person who keeps applying for the one who asks to clear the nightmare. It's a coincidence. I know the process. I joined the official and formed a team with a very beautiful girl. Then I continued to pass the dungeon protagonist and started to work as a nanny to save people and then help them improve their strength. Finally, bonding, love, etc. Started to save the world. I am really convinced, it's 2025! Brother, is he still so positive?

Zhuge Yue is dead? He shouldn't be cheating again, right? I feel like this character is used in male videos to disgust readers. If you want to make fun of people, feed them some drugs, then strip them naked and throw them on the street. Drawing people to make gay movies or something like that makes me physically uncomfortable as a reader. This can't be said to be a joke at all, but just a lunatic and mentally ill person.

I ordered it all and am about to throw it away. I have used up all the props by beating a bitch. I have cyber hamster disease and I can't stand the prodigal son.

Author, you said that you take two fixed days off every month, so does this count as menstruation in the book "The Immortal Supernatural Game"? And if the days of menstruation are different every month, does it count as irregular menstruation?

But please write less emotional drama, it will really make people unable to substitute. Just write a fun person. Can you mention the sister and other things in one sentence? They are all gentle people. No one wants to read it all the time in a cool article.

It's not consistent with the original work but I'm too lazy to argue with the artist, so I'll just leave it like that. It can be used as a concept drawing or something By the way, was my last picture reported? Why is it like this () Artist: Lin Yuyu (Huajia)

I admit that you are a genius, but why don't you kill yourself every 10 minutes and keep yourself crazy for a long time?

Brothers! I finally got it for free! I have finally been waiting for this moment since I started reading the book! I want to watch him all at once! Severe whoring for free!

I have read more than 200 chapters so far. The pace is quite good, there are no major poisonous points, and the plot is quite cheerful. Personally, I think the only shortcoming is the handling of the character Zhuge Yue. This character appears suddenly and disappears quite suddenly. There are only dozens of chapters in the plot. For this I personally like the appearance of this character, and he is also a fun-loving person. Zhuge Yue is very interesting in just a few dozen chapters. I personally don't agree with the ending of this character. Such a good character can definitely work with the protagonist, and the two of them can have fun together in the dungeon. , The way of writing a "bad boy" and a "bad mother-in-law" is also quite interesting. As for the reason why it had to be taken offline, it mainly depends on how the author wants to write it. This character is not to the point of being heinous, but just a little bit twisted. If it was really to the point of being heinous, the strange things in the book would have been revealed long ago. Got it, as for wanting to explore the secrets of the protagonist, that's even easier. The author can just arrange some plot points where each other is getting into trouble or a plot that gets into the hearts of both parties. Of course, even if it's offline, it's too sloppy in just a few dozen chapters. The author's personality charm disappeared as soon as it was written...

Why do you like silly names? . . No elder would name him. . . . .

Artist: Shi Xin Platform: Critical

There is a successor to "Player Fierce"

If I can't draw a detailed picture, why can't I draw a rough sketch?😁😁

Is it a no-CP story, a single heroine story, or a harem story?

When the protagonist awakens his power, start watching

emmm I said I made the wrong vote, do you believe it?

Brothers, I have been reading books for many years. This book is really worth reading. It is relatively silly and joyful. Hey, life has been so miserable. Why not be happier? I subscribed to brothers first! Oh, by the way, I only saw 130 pictures after applying a patch. If there is any problem later, it will ruin my reputation.