I Train My Body in the Horror World

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Damn it, seeing this type of thing reminds me of evil spirit, damn Tang San

It's really good-looking. In the first chapter, a protagonist with a normal brain circuit and the weirdness of the strange world of recovery are written. The author can't even finish the three golden chapters. The first chapter attracted me. I just saw that the protagonist is too "tired" now. Weird events come one after another, leaving no buffering events at all. Basically, he just gets through the weird events, adds some reinforcements, and then encounters weird events immediately. Maybe the author feels that writing two chapters a day is not so urgent, but after reading it in one go, I still feel that the pace of the story is too fast. It is recommended that the author write more relaxing content, such as daily life, introduction to the background of the world, thoughts on martial arts, etc.

Fully ordered, identified as good grass+. If the author can finish writing, he can be given food +++. Advantages: A large number of original copies, and at the same time, the reference is very appropriate, and almost all the jokes will not appear to be funny; The writing is very strong, the fighting 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻, and the various wordings are also very sensible; The rhythm is tight and the bathroom is tender. It can be said that this is the only one this year that makes me feel that it is very appropriate to follow up. You can see that I will follow up. I basically won't follow up because I am afraid of being cheated. I only order after a long time. You are the one who really wants to get out Disadvantages: There are very few unavoidable daily routines, but I feel that it has no impact. I feel that the author is getting better now. There are some flaws but not much impact To be honest, I feel as excited as when I read the whole book. This is the first time I have typed so many words. If the author is a eunuch or a mess, I will lock you up and make a big noise!

Just use the divine elephant to suppress the prison, and one cell will imprison a spy.

Why do Qidian novels always like to describe the male protagonist from a third-person perspective? Brother, you are the male protagonist, you are the protagonist. How can the reader take the place of your story when you describe it from a third-person perspective? How to directly obtain the psychological description of the male protagonist? No, buddy?

.... Seeing that I didn't hold back, I helped spread the wealth, kept pleasing other special-level people, and gaining favor with others. Did others gain something? Or if they were smart enough to use the "golden finger" early to develop and gain breakthroughs, or maximize their profits. The protagonist gets a small gain by passing through the levels, all relying on system rewards, saying that I don't care, that I don't think I am important, and then giving it away. . . . . ——This kind of behavior is actually the author's own subjective influence. "The author's excuse is, 'I am the protagonist's mind causing trouble.' This is actually inconsistent with the thoughts of a character who is struggling to survive in a strange world and is precarious. The finger may not be gone that day. In such a situation, he will only try his best to maximize utilization and exploit the golden finger. And the protagonist didn't. For example, he couldn't eat or keep the corpses of wild-level monsters. He upgraded his pet snake, and then left a large number of corpses of wild-level monsters for others. . . ——I really don't believe that the protagonist's golden finger can't be used to develop a concentrated essence or a purified technique. It doesn't even need to be developed, it's just a small skill based on existing abilities. In ordinary fantasy novels, not to mention magic techniques, things like sucking up blood, killing people and extracting blood to form blood beads to sell, etc., Others at the lowest level can do it, but the protagonist is powerless. I know that there will be no lack or shortage of protagonists in the future with the support of the author, but can we give up this kind of thinking? It is very ridiculous.

Will you write a book? It's almost 200 chapters and I haven't even seen the protagonist poop. What's wrong? Isn't he human? Why don't you poop?

What's the situation with the heroine of this book? 1. Harem (more than 5) 2. Multiple heroines (less than 5 and 1 or more) 3. Single heroine 4. No heroine (capable, not interested, even if invincible, not interested in women) 5. No heroine (interested, but incompetent, struggling to live due to various reasons such as enemies) 6. No heroine (not capable, nor interested)

The front part is okay, but there is a big problem in the back part, that is, the father of the protagonist's friend looks down on the protagonist, but he respects the protagonist's ghost dragon vest. This misunderstanding plot is so unpleasant to watch.

I suggest you delete the first ten chapters. The popularity of the book will be even higher. The first ten chapters are completely unlike the rest of the book. The first ten chapters are just 💩.

Either you don't write about Wang Hanlu, or you have written her as the protagonist's girlfriend and marginalized her. I have a lot of words to say hello to you.

Is this called hanging? Nothing but brute force

They're all good, but they're too dry. After a dungeon ends, the day-to-day relaxation with pretense ends and a new dungeon opens within two chapters. After reading it for a while, you have to slow down for a while. Author, please refer to the House of Horrors and write about it for daily relaxation. After working for a long time, it seems that the world you wrote has a lot of supernatural events happening every day. It's so weird.

Supernatural and thriller-type works are so miserable. There are only two or three big cats and kittens. Speaking of the country's vigorous crackdown, is there anything to say?

Can any Shen Nong tell me what this book is like?

The protagonist finally defeated the BOSS after all the hard work and returned to the normal world. He vaguely heard whispers, and when he turned around, he was surrounded by the corpses of his classmates who were soaked and turned white. He did not escape the black pool at all, and he posted the first chapter.

A veteran who has followed him all the way from the Fairy Box. This book was a bit lazy in the early stages. In a world where weird things happen frequently, there is no description of national organizations and control agencies, and there is little mention of the nature of weird things, so it seems very empty. In fact, the first pool dungeon is a good insertion point. The captain opens the door to fish for people. When he comes out, it should be an official operations room that is airtight and monitored by multiple people. In this way, the anomaly management organization and other worldview information can be directly and smoothly introduced; directly coming out of a narrow private office, it seems that the official team is a grassroots team and has no plan for anomalies. The logic is really untenable.

I have read more than 290 chapters so far, and I find that the author is getting further and further away from the real-life plot. The book has appeared in the Book of Disaster Messenger Forum, Hidden Gate, Official Cunning Master, and Rogue Cunning Master, but they have not been written in depth. These forces can enrich the real-life story and enhance the freshness without making the plot boring. I hope the author can write more about their plots to deepen the communication with them, instead of only having a few friends around me every time I come back from a mission. The protagonist has changed history several times. It has been a long time since he became the 12th Great Glory, but he is still unknown. Apart from friends, he is only known by a few official captains (which makes it not fun enough). If possible, I hope the author will write more plots about real forces. It is best to write about some of the outstanding young people in these forces, so that they can strengthen their connection with the protagonist. Some young strong men can be portrayed as decent villains and stepping stones for the protagonist. You can also write about the competition and confrontation between the country and the country's masters. Let the protagonist step on them to become famous (this can effectively increase the fun) These are my personal immature suggestions. I hope the author can adopt some

I'm a little disappointed. Although the writing is good, I originally came for the ultimate martial arts, but the result is pure mysterious resurgence. The martial arts has no restraint at all. The original mysterious resurgence was not that good at first, but the setting was novel.

The horizontal training is weird. . . You will be better with Yi Jing Jin, Jiu Yang Sheng Gong, etc. Also, it is impossible to be that kind of steel person without taking drugs.

Having read Shen Nong for more than twelve years, I can conclude that this novel is a masterpiece of fairy grass! There is no poisonous point, the killing is decisive, the plot has ups and downs, and the setting is fresh and interesting. If it keeps up, it can become a masterpiece. To be honest, the author of this novel has written about a certain cat before. I felt good about it when I read it, but the weirdness in that novel was completely unexplainable, which was much better than the weirdness in this novel. If he wasn't a genius with a super high IQ, he would have died in that novel even if he had incredible strength. It's really brain-burning and has no solution.

I haven't watched it yet, would you like to know if it's good? The last time I saw someone practicing martial arts in this weird world was Firefly Fangzheng who was sanctioned by King Sugar.

Only this kind of weird novel makes me feel that no matter how much you hang up, it won't be enough, and your combat power will never collapse. Something big will always pop out of nowhere and overwhelm you.

Is there a Shennong? How is this book?

Weirdness is a mechanical type. Is it useful for the protagonist to desperately stack armor?

The main character's sister has pale blond hair and it's a bit hard to read. Is the geographical setting based on East Asia? Or is it a mixed-race setting? Albinism or atavism? Because I looked at a lot of oriental elements, I suddenly felt a bit unaccustomed to it, and I had to make up for the image of the protagonist in my mind.

The setting is interesting, but unfortunately there are too few updates

It's very nice to watch. It's very comfortable to watch the Yakuza style. It doesn't overwhelm the combat power. It's very enjoyable.

After reading two chapters, I knew this book was worth reading, Muscle Pa Ryu 👍