The Outcast: Divine Transformation Through Golden Light

Does the three views really have to follow the five senses? Quan Xing still deserves to die?

I've watched almost half of it and want to ask why everyone thinks the protagonist is not strong? Can't you see the truth? Don't everyone in Longhushan know about the dual cultivation of life and life? Everyone thinks they can touch it? Are they really that stupid?

The heroine is obviously Feng Baobao, but in many fandoms, she is just a supporting female character. Feng Baobao is not good! Not worthy of the heroine!

I always feel that the heroine Xia He is a bit redundant. . I jump to watch wherever there is Xia He. . .

Daily Life is really good, but it's about this love story that I really want to give up. Even a woman wants to be the main character, Kun, and Lu Linglong. At first she said she would be a sister, but then she wanted someone else. The first thirty pictures are really good, but the sense of division in the second part is so strong that I suspect it was written by two people.

I know the protagonist is awesome, but did you write too many supporting sentences? The audience's thoughts and minds are almost full of the whole chapter. What's wrong with Jiangnan?

It's a bad batch. To be honest, just look at the title later. The plot is slow to advance. What little plot there is is all the original plot. It's hard to imagine that six of the ten chapters describe fighting scenes. Three chapters describe how the onlookers were surprised. Nine-tenths of the chapters are the original plot. The remaining one-tenth can barely be considered original. The key point is that the fighting plot is the same and extremely boring. The protagonist just stands there motionless waiting for the opponent to fight, then defends himself in the astonishment of the crowd, and then defeats the person with a backhand slap, and the crowd is amazed again and again. Every time! It's like this over and over again every time! It just made me laugh. There is also the creation of the protagonist. One moment it is said that the protagonist is a time traveler who knows the plot, but the next moment it is shown that the protagonist knows nothing. When Zhang Chulan was asked to leave by the Wang and Lu families, you looked anxious. Don't you know the plot? Why are you anxious? You should also know that Wang is also being targeted by two families. He still has to catch some spy. If he just says he can't do it, he has to pretend to be a b and copy and paste the original plot. It can be said that the beginning is quite satisfactory, but the further you go, the more boring it gets. It is no different from copying the original work, and you can even pretend not to understand.

Evil author, use less descriptions. He writes a picture every time he throws a punch. There aren't many key actions. It's all about other people's comments.

It's not why you group of people have such a big opinion against Xia He. You said it's not a bus, and Xia He's constitution is natural. Those men can't stand the temptation and bring her a lot of trouble. They are not all traitors and evil. There are also many people who contributed during the war of resistance.

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than 100 chapters, it's disgusting.