The Outcast: Immortal Boy, Protected by the Six Ding and Six Jia

It took more than 20 chapters to figure out how to become an apprentice.

Having family in the background is never a problem. It's just that it's easier to write about an orphan. If you can't handle the relationships well, it will be a disaster. There's no need to add extra difficulty. Also, the protagonist is Qingmei Xinghua. She has a round face and a slender figure. In those days, people in the countryside had to work and needed nutrition for physical development.

... How many things happened in the 20 chapters before they even entered Maoshan? This isn't how the story should be progressing!

The One-Man Law: Any fanfiction about "Under One Person" or that involves the "Under One Person" universe will inevitably suffer a collapse in subscriptions, and the works will almost always be abandoned or left unfinished.

It takes over 50 chapters for him to finally become a master. That's dragging on way too much.

This book is guaranteed to be submitted to the palace. It's full of nonsense, has a ton of plot points, and is occasionally quite toxic.

There are really several highlights for me I have only read a few chapters Forget it about the original heroine of a fanfic like Under One Person. If you write it well, I won't say anything else. You are not from the same world at all. Why would you write about a childhood sweetheart who is a little kid? Uh-huh. Moreover, the protagonist has traveled through time and is already an adult.

The author devoted all his writing to explaining things to the reader; there was absolutely nothing in the book...

The plot can be summarized in a single sentence, and the whole book can be written in one sentence.

Most authors who write fanfiction about a single character are terrible. Does this mean single-character fanfiction is unsuitable?