The Outcast: Immortal Boy, Protected by the Six Ding and Six Jia

I have written more than 20 chapters under the guidance of a master.

Having a family in the background is never a problem. The main reason is that it is easier to write if you are an orphan. Failure to handle the relationship is a disaster, so there is no need to add extra difficulties. The protagonist, Qingmei Xinghua, has a round face and a slim body. In those days, rural people had to work, and physical development required nutrition. How come she can photosynthesize? It was another traditional slap-in-the-face plot on the train. I rushed to save someone but was threatened and disliked. Is it to lure the Lu family out of this person named Lu? No matter how long it takes to become a disciple at chapter 20, your top priority now is not to write a bunch of side plots. Instead, quickly enter the main plot and let the protagonist develop.

. . . How many things happened in Chapter 20 before entering Maoshan? This is not how advancement works.

This book is 100% sure to go to the palace. A lot of nonsense, a lot of settings, and sometimes very poisonous.

It took more than 50 chapters to worship the guru. . It's too late

The Law of One Person: All those who write fan fiction under One Person, or involve the world view of Under One Person, their subscriptions will inevitably collapse, and their works will basically be unfinished.

All the author's words are used to explain to readers, there is nothing in the book

One sentence of plot, setting up a book

Chapter 30 Apprenticeship, it's been delayed like this, I can't imagine how much trouble you'll have after it's released.

The writing is very ink and watery. The protagonist does not practice hard and relies solely on unknown mysterious power to become stronger.