The Outcast: My Master Is Zhang Zhiwei!

Write step by step, without mentioning anything about innate talent or learning a bunch of nonsensical techniques. Remember, the Golden Light Mantra is a dual cultivation method for both life and death, integrating offense and defense, and no other sect or family can rival it. The Eight Extraordinary Techniques are powerful, but they are still techniques, not laws.

Sigh, it's like the author could write a good piece, but it's just a bit...

The early parts were alright, but the later parts were utter garbage, just filler and filler. After going downhill, it went completely off-topic. Either the author got carried away with their own ideas, or they changed authors.

A ten-year-old novel formula disguised as a person

What have I been writing lately? Something that's already dragged on for almost 20 chapters.

What are these chapters even about? It's all a mess.

I'd like to offer my opinion: I feel it's a bit unfair that these chapters were treated like juniors. Being misunderstood is fine, but when someone addresses you as an elder and lectures you, that's unacceptable. It's no longer your own business; it's like slapping the old master in the face. At that point, you shouldn't pretend to be weak while actually being strong.

It's too bland, lacking both crisis and exciting moments; it feels more like a slice-of-life story...

The rest is just a series of map changes, showing off, and getting humiliated. It would be better to just write the main storyline; the more you write, the more abstract it becomes.

It was well-written at the beginning, but became increasingly sloppy towards the end.