The Outcast: The Heavenly Book of the Five Emperors

Xia He, the razor-wielding author, is no good person. These days, many authors are just lusting after women's bodies; their values ​​follow physical appearance, and they'll write anything.

It's hard not to agree. I'd really like to support you if you wrote a one-person fanfic, but I'm sorry, your female lead, Xia, scared me. That guy was right, a real slut even if you were carrying a lantern—no need to defend her.

I don't understand why Xia He, who only had a relationship with Zhang Lingyu, would read fanfiction about just one person. Reading it is one thing, but offering half-baked opinions is another? Is Zhang Zhiwei trying to find a "public bus" (a euphemism for a sexual relationship) for his disciple? Even someone as discerning as Zhang Zhiwei could see through that. I don't know what he's talking about.

It feels like they're trying to whitewash Xia He; it's best to avoid having a female lead.

People should have fun in moderation; going too far just makes them disgusting.

Don't make the main character seem crazy!

The plot in the last 50 chapters is a mess. The protagonist even travels through time! Can't he just be a normal person? That so-called immortal power is all fabricated (it's incredibly toxic). Those two automatically operating cultivation techniques (the overpowered abilities are ridiculously ridiculous). He almost turned into a demon while practicing that technique. We're not here to watch the protagonist kill; we want to feel immersed in the story.

I've become increasingly focused on theoretical pursuits and lost sight of the true essence of writing.

I feel like the jokes have gone too far. They're even affecting the plot.

Well, when Xia He unearthed Zhang Huaiyi's body in the first episode, she genuinely didn't mind having an open-air corpse peep.