The Outcast: The Heavenly Book of the Five Emperors

Shaver Xia He is not a good person. Many authors these days are greedy for other people's bodies. They follow the facial features and they can write about anything.

It's hard to disagree. You write a fanfic, and I really want to support you, but I'm sorry, your heroine, Xia, scares me. What the brother said was very good. It's hard to find a slut even with a lantern, so don't wash it.

I don't know that Xia He only had a relationship with Zhang Lingyu and then came to see a fellow fan. He only looked at it half-heartedly and expressed opinions? Zhang Zhiwei wants to find a bus for his apprentice, right? I don't know what Zhang Zhiwei's name is when he can see it with his eyesight.

It feels like I'm washing Xia He, it's better not to have a heroine

People have to have fun in moderation. If you go too far, it's just disgusting.

Don't make the main character very neurotic.

The plot collapses in the next 50 chapters, and the protagonist travels through the timeline. Can you be a normal person? The so-called magical power is all tricked out by deceivers (very poisonous), those two self-operating skills (hanging up are too brainless), and that skill almost becomes a demon after practicing it. We are not watching the protagonist kill people, we want to see the sense of substitution in the novel.

I'm sitting on the road more and more, and I've lost my original intention of writing.

It feels like the joke has been overplayed. It all affects the plot.

What does Xia He say? When Zhang Huaiyi's body was dug up in the first episode, she really didn't mind having an open-air corpse Pely show.