One Piece: Becoming the King of the World from the Age of Rocks

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This is the approximate timeline of the world, it should be pretty much the same

To be honest, I was very disappointed. I just watched Rocks die and did almost nothing. None of Garp, Five Old Stars, Draco Galin, Roger, and Rayleigh died. I have no problem with you wanting to kill Rocks, but Rocks fought with those guys for so long, and they were weakened after Rocks died, so the protagonist just let them go, which is a great job. You said that if you are afraid that the plot will go too far, I can understand it. You don't even dare to write about Garin, Garp, the Five Old Stars, and Rayleigh. 6 Is very good. You can't write without the original plot, right?

Settings about age and strength: It is set in this book that the peak period of the body is half the normal life span. If the life span is 100 years old, the body will reach its peak period around the age of fifty. If you are strong in physical skills and domineering, you can use special techniques to extend your body's peak to around sixty years old. After reaching the age of sixty, physical strength and dominance may not decline, but physical strength will still slowly decline. After reaching the age of eighty, even a strong person with peak physical skills will lose physical strength and dominance. This setting is based on Garp, Sengoku, Cyborg Kong, Rayleigh and others in the original work. In the original work, Garp was already 78 years old when the war started. Except for special cases like Whitebeard and Zefa.

Can you please stop using that fantasy martial arts description to write about pirates? It's really a drama.

I feel that the non-pirate camp has a better sense of reading. Including me, I don't like pirates.

Regarding the Age of Rocks, there is not much explanation in the original work of One Piece. Maybe I have missed many points. I hope readers can tell me and I will write them according to the actual situation.

Suddenly I thought, if Luffy wins, then Momonosuke, the stupid Dragon King, and Germa will become the new Celestial Dragons. It disgusts me to death.

One Piece has been updated to this point. The Admiral has the highest combat power of the world government. Three of the Yonkos have been destroyed. The Yonko of Bakidu. Does the author still think that the Yonko is one level better than the Admiral? Judging from current performance, the Admiral should be more intimidating than the Yonko.

Stephen Riyeon? What a cool name. It's neither Chinese nor Western, nor is it a pirate.

In Qidian, I don't seem to see many people writing about the plot of Rocks' era. Even if there are, they are not interesting. I hope the author can write this book better.

After taking the first seven chapters, I feel pretty good. I hope the author can keep writing and the more he writes, the better.

When I first read it, I felt that the author couldn't control his writing skills and liked to describe the details. As a result, it felt weird at the beginning. First, he went to Shaolin to get the sword manual and fell to death. However, when he woke up, the description of the killing moves made people think of the sword-piercing moves of the Western sword. The system that finally popped up had the feeling of Karp playing physical skills with bare hands instead of being a swordsman 😥. As a direct disciple, he didn't see what his master taught him, but he was just freeing up. Let's spar with other disciples. You come out of the sword hall and use a whip 🥵, and then the moves you perform in the second battle have a Japanese flavor, making it impossible for people to understand which moves your character is using 😒

I have read more than 20 fanfics, and this one ranks at the top.

Good book, a bit refreshing. Can watch

It's like reading a fantasy novel from ten years ago

After reading the first 11 chapters, I found that this is a fast-paced and exciting novel. Yes, I like this kind of pirate novel. It is not like other pirate novels, which are procrastinating and have to start from an ordinary person and slowly become stronger.

It's okay. After all, the timeline is so far ahead and there will be no shortage of original characters. However, the protagonist's age is almost 60 in the top war, so it's difficult for the author to operate later.

What's wrong with having a baby with the aunt? It's not like getting married, why should I be green? How good is my physical fitness! It would be better to have more children and half each person. 😁😁😁

The protagonist is learning swordsmanship. Why should he go to Dragon Ball? And Dragon Ball talks about bloodline. You don't have a special bloodline. How to survive in Dragon Ball? And besides Future Trunks, who else can use a sword?

The author's first book, the writing style is relatively immature, but it is refreshing and I have to say that it attracted me. I would rate it 3.5 Out of five stars.

The author's new book: "The Eternal Divine Brain of the Swallowing Starry Sky" [Protagonist: Ai Chen] Introduction: Travel through the swallowing starry sky and obtain the eternal divine brain. The divine brain can fuse all things and turn them into its own avatar. It has its own innate abilities and can evolve infinitely! Integrate computers to gain computing power, upgrade your computers, and become the most powerful brain in the Yuan Universe, capable of calculating trillions of times in an instant. Integrate the immortal-class spacecraft of the mechanical race, gain the ability of mechanical evolution, follow the path of mechanical style, and create mechanical style treasures that are better than those of mountain riders. Integrate with the Zerg mother queen, gain the ability to analyze genes, acquire various powerful bloodline genes in the universe and integrate them into one body to create a perfect divine body.

The protagonist behaves like a pirate and commits crimes such as burning, killing and looting. Although it is consistent with his identity, this still has a great impact on his performance.

Everything else is fine, but the name is too embarrassing

The next one will be about Dragon Ball

So short!

The male protagonist can destroy the King in space with the Golden Lion first, so as not to destroy the world government when the pirate camp is about to win, and then use a cannon attack on Mary Joa to pull them down together!

Write another book, Rocks is so charming

Author, will you finish this book when you become the master of the world, or will you continue to explore the universe?

Golden Lion has always felt that the protagonist is about the same strength as him. When will he have a fight with Golden Lion to confirm his leadership status? I always feel that the protagonist is too kind to him.