One Piece: Rising to Become King of the World in the Rocks Era

This is the approximate timeline of the world, it should be pretty much the same

To be honest, I was very disappointed. I just watched Rocks die and did almost nothing. None of Garp, Five Old Stars, Draco Galin, Roger, and Rayleigh died. I have no problem with you wanting to kill Rocks, but Rocks fought with those guys for so long, and they were weakened after Rocks died, so the protagonist just let them go, which is a great job. You said that if you are afraid that the plot will go too far, I can understand it. You don't even dare to write about Garin, Garp, the Five Old Stars, and Rayleigh. 6 Is very good. You can't write without the original plot, right?

Settings about age and strength: It is set in this book that the peak period of the body is half the normal life span. If the life span is 100 years old, the body will reach its peak period around the age of fifty. If you are strong in physical skills and domineering, you can use special techniques to extend your body's peak to around sixty years old. After reaching the age of sixty, physical strength and dominance may not decline, but physical strength will still slowly decline. After reaching the age of eighty, even a strong person with peak physical skills will lose physical strength and dominance. This setting is based on Garp, Sengoku, Cyborg Kong, Rayleigh and others in the original work. In the original work, Garp was already 78 years old when the war started. Except for special cases like Whitebeard and Zefa.

Can you please stop using that fantasy martial arts description to write about pirates? It's really a drama.

I feel that the non-pirate camp has a better sense of reading. Including me, I don't like pirates.

Suddenly I thought, if Luffy wins, then Momonosuke, the stupid Dragon King, and Germa will become the new Celestial Dragons. It disgusts me to death.

One Piece has been updated to this point. The Admiral has the highest combat power of the world government. Three of the Yonkos have been destroyed. The Yonko of Bakidu. Does the author still think that the Yonko is one level better than the Admiral? Judging from current performance, the Admiral should be more intimidating than the Yonko.

Regarding the Age of Rocks, there is not much explanation in the original work of One Piece. Maybe I have missed many points. I hope readers can tell me and I will write them according to the actual situation.

Stephen Riyeon? What a cool name. It's neither Chinese nor Western, nor is it a pirate.

After taking the first seven chapters, I feel pretty good. I hope the author can keep writing and the more he writes, the better.