Starting Life Anew in Fairy Tail

What I find most unacceptable is the relationship between Erza and Jellal. They only spent a lot of time together as children, and Erza was given a unique personality. How could there be love at such a young age? They didn't see each other for over ten years, and even when they did, it was only through Zekerein's thought form.

After reading a dozen chapters, I understand! The protagonist is either a Fairy Tail humanoid system or an old man, sent to change the unfortunate fates and regrets of the characters in the original work! That's roughly how the plot will unfold! The protagonist learns a ton of magic, but only uses one or two moves in battle before unleashing a devastating barrage of ultimate attacks!

The name Noah combined with Fairy Tail brings back the feeling of Ruqing's fanfic from more than ten years ago. It was quite interesting at the time, but now it seems that it is just sentimental.

An 8-year-old S-rank is a bit outrageous. It might be possible in other guilds, as long as the strength is there, but it's impossible in Fairy Tail. Even if you are strong enough, the guild leader will not let you participate in the S-rank assessment because they are worried that you are too young and not mature enough.

I still recommend writing stories with a female lead. Don't even try writing stories without a female lead unless you're really good at it; you won't be able to compete with others. With a female lead, readers will only scrutinize her closely. Without a female lead, there are more things to consider. Your plot needs to be good, not padded out, and should make up at least 80% of the story.

The author needs to make it clear that black dragon magic is ineffective, and you must attack with force to defeat the black dragon.

Kana

I just saw section 234-239. It feels like the author is simply copying the original anime plot verbatim, preventing the protagonist from taking action, all under the guise of researching magic first. And then there's Lucy. In this book, her mother didn't die, her parents supported her learning magic, her family had a large collection of books, and the protagonist had taught her some magic before.

There haven't been many Fairy Tail novels lately, so seeing a new one is a pleasant surprise. The biggest problem right now is that it feels a bit rambling and the characters aren't well-developed, making it feel somewhat hollow. I hope the author can work on it. P. S. I hope the author will try writing Fairy Tail again after finishing this one. Fairy Tail has no shortage of loyal readers, and I'll definitely support any good fanfiction I find. 🪖

I got too lazy to write more, typing is so tiring 💤