Starting Life Anew in Fairy Tail

What I am most dissatisfied with is the pair of Erza and Jellal. These two people only got along for a long time when they were young, and they just helped Erza to develop her personality. How can love come from such a young age? We haven't seen each other for more than ten years. Even if we did, it was because of the person who misses Zekelain. It can be said that these ten Over the years, the relationship not only did not grow, but also rose to the level of enemies. In the Tower of Paradise chapter, Jellal apologized and repented and forgave me. I was dumbfounded when I saw it. When Jellal lost his memory and self-destructed and fought on Nirvana, the relationship got better. Seven years later, it almost even got better. They kissed. Isn't this relationship too casual? You must know that the longest time these two have been together is almost on the battlefield. The limit of friendship is to have a comrade. The other time together is only a little more than a day. This can also be upgraded to a romantic relationship. You must know that Natsu and Gray are companions. Erza grew up with almost the same childhood sweethearts. Even if the relationship between the two is slow, I won't say anything if I choose one of them. But Jellal, a character who rarely gets along with each other, almost like falling from the sky, suddenly embraced a beautiful woman. So this is the main reason why I don't accept this group.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I understand! The pig's foot is the Fairy Tail humanoid system or the old man, to change the unfortunate fate and regrets of the characters in the original work! This is probably what the next plot will look like! Pig's Knuckle has learned many kinds of magic, so when fighting, he just uses those one or two moves and then uses his big move to finish the fight! 😰😰😰 Just like Dragon Ball, I fought and fought... And finally the Turtle Style Qigong was completed! After learning so many kinds of magic, you shouldn't take advantage of it and kill your opponent like Naruto did 😁😁😁

The name Noah combined with Fairy Tail brings back the feeling of Ruqing's fanfic from more than ten years ago. It was quite interesting at the time, but now it seems that it is just sentimental.

S-level at the age of 8 is still a bit outrageous. It is possible in other guilds as long as the strength is reached, but it is impossible in Fairy Tail at the age of 8. In the mind of the guild president, even if you are strong enough, you will not be allowed to participate in the S-level evaluation because you are worried that you are too young and have insufficient mental capacity.

I still recommend writing with a heroine. If you don't have a heroine, don't touch it. If you don't have a heroine, you can't steal it from others. If you have a heroine, they will just stare at the heroine with a magnifying glass. If you don't have a heroine, they will have to consider more. Your plot should be good, not watery, and the proportion should be at least 80%. It should be similar to the appetite. If you don't want to have a heroine, you can't get all the readers with multiple heroines. You still have a wide range of knowledge. You need to understand the history, and the fandom needs to understand the original Japanese light novel. If you don't have it, compete with the big guys who have already taken root.

The author needs to make it clear that black dragon magic is ineffective, and you must attack with force to defeat the black dragon.

Kana

I just saw this paragraph 234-239. It feels like the author is just copying the original plot of the anime, not letting the protagonist take action, and euphemistically saying that he will study magic first Also, Lucy, in this book, her mother is not dead, her parents support learning magic, there are many books at home, and the protagonist has taught some before. In the end, you followed the original animation exactly, showing Lucy that she knew nothing about magic. When she saw someone using magic, she wondered "What kind of magic is this?", And then the narrator Hubby explained, do you think this is reasonable?

There have been really few Fairy Tail-themed novels recently, so it was a bit of a surprise to see a new Fairy Tail novel. The biggest problem at the moment is that the story is a bit confusing, the characters cannot be established, and the reading seems a bit empty. I hope the author can work harder. ps I hope the author will try Fairy Tail in the next book after finishing this book. There is really no shortage of old readers in the Fairy Tail genre. I will definitely support you when I see some good fans 🪖

I'm too lazy to write later, I'm so tired from typing💤