One Piece: Starting as the Luo Pirates’ Vice Captain

It's very strange. You are the Thunder Fruit. The power of your fruit should be increased in the direction of voltage, electromagnetic field, and you have to use some energy to control the electrons and protons to form neutrons and then hit the nucleus to create a nuclear explosion. But what is your ultimate move now? Control a bunch of thunder and lightning to play with Lego and turn them into various shapes. It's your ultimate move? It's still a lot of effort. It's a tiger and a finger. I wonder if you throw the entire thunder ball and throw it at it, wouldn't it also cause the same damage?

What do you think of the weapon, hammer🔨? Seriously? Looking at pirates, there are some who like passionate adventures, some who like the various abilities of Devil Fruit, and some who like to use swords and swords to cut the sea and split the air. If you get a hammer, it will be too abstract. As a protagonist, if you get a hammer, your image design will be too niche and slip away.

The introduction looks very powerful, but it is actually a thunder fruit, and the entries are moves (thunder welcome and the like). I am speechless.

The writing is very good, but it always talks about morality as I am a nine-year compulsory educator in modern society. I don't know if it's a joke or I really think so. Once I get out of society, I won't be so naive, right?

Forget about suppressing combat power, that's what it was written in the Rocks era anyway. But how come everyone can compare with Rocks later? Your combat power is collapsing faster than Oda. Roger Karp learned to dominate at a glance, and he added two grand route front and rear overlords. The writing is more impressive than Rocks, who is about to reach his peak. One man fights Luo Tuan and Bai Tuan.

The writing becomes more and more confusing as the writing goes on. The author has no control over it at all, and he keeps leaking abilities, which obviously overwhelms the protagonist's combat power. It's very boring, and I gave up as soon as I read it.

A good place suddenly collapsed. How many years do you plan to play time travel? What do you plan to write then? He and Junzi are old, and your children don't recognize you anymore? And the adopted son was abandoned in Wano Country when he was only three years old, a country that you just massacred. Forget about suppressing the combat power all the time. If you can't suppress it now, just use time and space escape. Obviously there are a lot of things to write about, and there are many ways to play fruit fusion. The worst thing is that you can open a new map after clearing the pirate level. Can Shishi + Menmen + Zhenzhen break through the world wall? If not, let the system arrange it! After the unification, new generations such as San Dajiang, Green Bull, Sand Crocodile, Eagle Eye, etc. Will be trained to conquer other worlds. Or break out of the universe? The pirates themselves have interacted with many worlds, right? Wouldn't it be enough to just write it as different planets under the same cosmology? I wanted to write as much as I could, but I chose the least flattering way of writing. There are still a lot of things that have not been dealt with in the time and space itself. At best, it is called a foreshadowing, and at worst, it is screening readers. Then congratulations, success, goodbye.

To be honest, this setting is not very good. It would be nice if you could change the settings. For example, set the golden finger to eat the soul fruit by yourself, then constantly look for new devil fruits, and then develop the soul fruit to analyze the devil soul in the fruit, and then graft it onto your own soul fruit. Wouldn't this setting be much better? 🤓🤓🤓

It doesn't matter if the weapon is a hammer. It's a bit wasteful to set such a large entry in your editor as a ultimate move, right? If you can study the ultimate move yourself, why not set the entry to something like purple lightning? The system shows that there are not enough points. I admit that I need to save them. Now you tell me that I can't set them up.

Little white text, the character's personality is not portrayed at all.