One Piece: Starting as the Luo Pirates’ Vice Captain

It's very strange. You are the Thunder Fruit. The power of your fruit should be increased in the direction of voltage, electromagnetic field, and you have to use some energy to control the electrons and protons to form neutrons and then hit the nucleus to create a nuclear explosion. But what is your ultimate move now?

What were you thinking with the weapon? A hammer? Seriously? Some people who watch One Piece like action and adventure, some like the diverse abilities of Devil Fruits, and some like weapons like katana and tachi that can slice through the sea and cleave the sky. A hammer is just too abstract. As a protagonist wielding a hammer, this character design is way too niche. I'm outta here.

The description sounds impressive, but it's actually the Rumble-Rumble Fruit, and the descriptions are just its techniques (like Lightning Blast). Speechless.

So suddenly everything collapsed and you're time-traveling? How many years are you planning to travel through? How are you going to write it? Tsuru and Junko are old, and their children don't recognize them anymore? And your adopted son was only three years old when you abandoned him in Wano Country, a country you just slaughtered.

It's well written, but it keeps bringing up the fact that I'm a modern person who has received nine years of compulsory education, and I keep talking about morality. I don't know if I'm just making a joke or if I really think that way. Once I enter the workforce, I won't be so naive, right?

It's one thing to suppress power levels, that's how it was written during the Rocks era anyway. But how come everyone later on can be compared to Rocks? Your power level inconsistencies are even faster than Oda's! Roger and Garp learned the Hatake technique with a single glance, and then you inexplicably added two more overlords from before and after the Grand Line, making them even more powerful than Rocks at his peak, fighting the Rocks Pirates and the Whitebeard Pirates all by themselves.

The story got increasingly chaotic towards the end; the author clearly couldn't control it, and there were constant plot holes that undermined the protagonist's fighting power. It was quite boring, and I gave up after reading a bit.

The synopsis is great, but once you get to the main story, everything is wrong, the power levels are drastically reduced—isn't that fraud?

It doesn't matter if the weapon is a hammer, but setting such a large modifier in the editor for ultimate skills seems a bit wasteful, doesn't it? Ultimate skills can be researched manually, so why not set the modifier for something like Purple Lightning? I accept the system showing insufficient points and requiring me to accumulate them, but now you're telling me I can't set it?

To be honest, this setup isn't very good. It would be better if it were changed. For example, you could set the cheat ability as eating the Soul-Soul Fruit, then constantly searching for new Devil Fruits, developing the Soul-Soul Fruit to analyze the demon souls within, and then grafting them onto your own Soul-Soul Fruit. Wouldn't that be a much better setup? 🤓🤓🤓