One Piece: Thor, the Thunder God from Elbaf
海贼：从艾尔巴夫走出的雷神托尔
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 793k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 8h ago
- English
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Synopsis
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285Chapters
67Monthly votes
1kRecommendations
14.4kFans
7 ch/weekPace
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If we were to follow Norse mythology, the idea that Odin is Loki's brother and Thor is Loki's brother is purely a Marvel creation.
There is...💩
I managed to get through the minor plot holes in the beginning, until chapter 35 with the numerical monster. The protagonist, who was constantly emphasized as having immense strength that even Rocks wouldn't dare to take, was instantly sent flying by a single punch in a struggle with Garp, unable to hold on... What does this mean? Does it mean Garp already had the power to wipe out Rocks? Garp is stronger and more skilled than the protagonist; was he just holding back all along?
In short, Luffy hasn't even been born yet, but he's already licking Garp's boots. Describing Garp as having unparalleled fighting power? Are you trying to make people laugh? Even Rocks wouldn't dare take your punch, yet you got blasted away by Garp's single blow. You then offered the Giant Kingdom's inherited fighting techniques to Garp in exchange for the Six Powers?
A 12-year-old Titan is equivalent to a four-year-old human, and his strength is no less than Harald's. Are you serious?
It seems like One Piece gave Thor's Black Dragon Fruit to Hajrudin. While Hajrudin was inspired by Odin, he doesn't seem as good as Odin at all.
It's completely unfounded, poorly written, and either written by a newbie or by AI.
The first three pages can be completely deleted; the plot remains unchanged, and the protagonist is just a complete slacker.
Rubbish
The previous point emphasized that Harald was thrown away, Rocks couldn't even fight him head-on, and then Garp knocked him away. Who do you think is the biggest loser?
All I can say is that the main character is an idiot.
Charlotte Linlin, with such strong talent, why didn't you keep her in the Giant Kingdom? Instead, you made her eat that trashy Devil Fruit from the original story. Give her the Azure Dragon Fruit, and she could definitely grow to the level of Rocks, or even surpass him. It could have changed so much! It feels like you didn't do anything at all.