One Piece: A Hollow Lives Inside Me!

It's really rubbish. I don't even know what Rocks' real name is. I thought Rocks was his last name.

You wrote a Rocks out of nowhere, and you also forced to write a major general who goes to the East China Sea to antagonize the protagonist who is a bounty hunter. What's funny?

Hollow ranks: Ordinary Hollows, Hollows: Gillian Chukas Vastold, Vastold's variant Skritor (referring to the strongest Hollow), hence also known as the King Hollow, only appearing in the records of the Great Spirit Corridor: God Hollow - Cherpin and Demon Hollow - Serafim.

This is a paradox: the protagonist must be stronger than the cheat system to ignore its hidden dangers. If the protagonist is already stronger than the cheat system, then what's the point of having a cheat system? Is it just a decorative accessory to add to the glory?

Has the author actually watched One Piece? A leopard that Luffy couldn't even defeat with Gear Second actually possesses Haki? Is this just wishful thinking? Or is the author just getting carried away?

How can a Hollow be considered a Mythical Zoan? I remember in One Piece, Mythical Zoan species have to have mythological or legendary backstories. Even if you made it up as a Fallen Angel, it would still make sense.

The point of this book is its illusions; I've already read forty-two chapters and all I've read about illusions is the Hollow Bullet—what's the point of reading that?

It's truly rubbish. The author clearly doesn't understand One Piece or Hollow abilities, and their combat power is questionable. They even use Rocks' name to drive the plot; the protagonist wants to keep a low profile, but they insist on mentioning Rocks' name. Then, the East Blue brings Garp over to take him as a disciple—I couldn't stand it anymore.

Why is the Multiple Devil Fruit so poisonous?

The "Sound Spin" is clearly a spatial ability, but the author claims it's because the speed is too fast? Is this just pure AI fluff?