The Savior Who Came from Freljord
从弗雷尔卓德走出的救世主
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.5M Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Subgenre
- Game Otherworld
- Updated
- 1y ago
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660Chapters
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29.9kFans
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The author's writing style is indeed solid, but with this title, what do you think people who are drawn in want to read? It's nothing more than the three sisters and the various characteristics of Freljord. If you start by saying that Ashe has been married to Tryndamere for two years, what am I supposed to read?
Chapter 22 Criticism
There are many assumptions that lead to the characters losing their own stance and character design. For example, the behavior of Pig Girl in Chapter 22 is hard to ignore. A mature adult who can commit such a ruthless act as matricide may have a change of stance, but her thinking should not change so quickly. Thinking has inertia, and the law of the jungle is her survival rule.
Using flashbacks to depict a group portrait is both watery and awful.
What kind of comment section is this?
I wanted to see other people's comments, but all I see are people posting pictures. Is no one managing this?
Sejuani was written as the girl next door.
Calling someone "sister" makes them blush and go weak in the knees; the way anime characters write about this world just doesn't fit.
It was actually alright at first, but the characters were too superficial and unrealistic, the plot was nonsensical, the protagonist seemed to be under a mind-numbing aura throughout, and the harem was also inexplicably built up. It was full of early, simplistic fantasies typical of novice writers; even invincible protagonist novels weren't this simplistic.
No matter how much I try to improve it, I keep failing.
How about renaming it "CJB Who Came Out of Freljord"?
Do you know why this can't be considered a featured post? Because there's too much unnecessary dialogue. Watching a single battle involves reading a huge amount of internal monologue and a bunch of nonsense. It's so annoying! Battles are just you fighting me and me fighting you; why all the unnecessary chatter?
A little disappointed
Up to Chapter 13 of Volume 2 (I haven't read the later parts yet, but I'm already halfway through the book), the protagonist's only growth has come from acquiring more and more mothers and a harem, as well as the abilities granted by the system.
Weird
I've read about ten chapters, and the character descriptions feel off. Maybe I prefer selfish, lone-wolf characters. The protagonist seems indecisive and constantly manipulated. The priestess is annoying, always jumping around in front of him. The pig girl keeps provoking him, but he doesn't kill her.