Oh No, I’m Being Controlled by the Narration

Just write a normal infinite flow story. Don't go for all those fancy gimmicks. Readers will be confused if you jump straight in without any buildup. You're not a top-tier author; readers won't have the patience to read that much. As the author "Transparent" aptly put it, traditional doesn't mean outdated. Besides, your first book is meant to build a readership. Just write a normal infinite flow fanfic. Don't add any unnecessary frills or unnecessary elements. Be grounded first.

As the title suggests, this is a place to gather everyone's complaints. If there's anything in the work that you don't like, feel free to say it here. Firstly, everyone can act as my guide, and I can receive timely feedback from readers. Secondly, everyone's opinions should be gathered here, so please don't post them separately outside. (Please!

The new Silas, the Demon Seeker, has completely overturned the previous image of Silas as a guide. Sylas: A righteous and heroic male protagonist, leader of the rebel army, a man recognized by Morgana, and the savior of Demacia. Demacian nobles: Commoners and mages conduct human experiments, committing countless atrocities, and plotting to seize Kayle's power. Morgana: "If my sister returns and sees what these nobles have done, she will destroy all of Demacia."

After subscribing to two or three chapters, I found that the chapters were completely irrelevant and not related to the book at all. Apart from the protagonist's name, everything else was from another world, and I couldn't understand what it was about.

The new chapter suddenly went completely awry. Seriously, he volunteered to be the city's reinforcements. To be honest, it was a waste of time and energy. It was really meddling in other people's business.

Did the author offend some organization or person? Why are so many people criticizing the author? I think the author's handling of the parents' time travel is at most a little inappropriate, but definitely not disgusting. Why are so many people criticizing it? 😅

The supporting characters are all so weird. They remind me of books from 20 years ago, when characters were just given names and their personalities were written haphazardly. No matter if they were historical figures or characters from popular works, they all spoke of being righteous and noble while engaging in wicked and immoral acts. They were constantly swearing, as if they had all received prenatal education.

The only thing that bothers me is that they're married, yet he still hasn't slept with Kai'Sa. Is the protagonist impotent like the male protagonists in Japanese anime?

The beginning was alright, but the quality dropped steadily from the real-life section onwards. The Investiture of the Gods section felt a bit creative, but the later chapters with physical and emotional scenes for the narrator... Emmmmm... It almost turned into a transmigration novel. To be honest, I really liked this book at the beginning. All I can say is, keep up the good work, author! I look forward to your next book.

The Nezha chapter was truly awful. It wasn't that the writing was bad, but the Valoran theme suddenly shifted to Eastern fantasy, which just didn't fit and made it unpleasant to read. I dropped it immediately. It's not that the author's writing is bad; I really enjoyed the beginning.