Oh No, I’m Being Controlled by the Narration

Just write an unlimited flow normally, don't do all the bells and whistles, readers will be confused after reading it, and there is no direct writing at all to foreshadow it. You are not a great author, how can readers have so much patience to read? Transparency is so well said. Tradition does not mean old-fashioned. Not to mention that the first book is used to accumulate readers. Just write about unlimited fandoms normally. Don't do those messy things that are flashy and have nothing at all. Be down to earth first.

As the title says, this is a place to summarize everyone's complaints. If you feel that there is something in the work that you don't like, you can say it here. First, everyone can be my vane and receive feedback from readers in a timely manner. Secondly, everyone's opinions are gathered here, so don't go out and post them separately (please! I also realized that I need to keep the book review area beautiful, but there are really many suggestions that need to be listened to, so I made this decision. I will delete other comment posts that don't have many discussions. I hope readers will forgive me!) To sum up, this is Jiang Zi, a bit of a newcomer's complaint post. Thank you for your support! !

Silas, the setting of the demon seeker has overtaken the previous setting of Silas leading the party. Silas: a great and upright male protagonist, leader of the rebel army, a man recognized by Morgana, and the savior of Demacia. Demacia Nobles: Commoners and mages engage in human experiments, commit all kinds of evil, and seek to seize Kyle's power. Morgana: "My sister will destroy all of Demacia when she comes back and sees what these nobles have done."

I subscribed for two or three chapters and found that the chapters were wrong. It was not this book at all. Except for the main character's name, everything else was written in otherworldly texts, and I couldn't understand what was written.

The new chapter suddenly became wiser. Really, I took the initiative to be the foreign aid for the locals. To be honest. Waste of time and energy. Really a bit nosy.

Has the author offended some organization or someone? Why are there so many people criticizing the author? I am thinking about the author's treatment of parents' time travel. After reading it, I feel it is a bit inappropriate but definitely not disgusting. Why are there so many people criticizing 😅

The characters of the supporting characters are all so weird. It reminds me of the books from 20 years ago. When I randomly write out the name of the character, no matter what historical figures or characters in popular works are named, all Weiguang is doing is male thieves and female prostitutes. They are always full of swear words. Per capita prenatal education graduates

The only thing I'm unhappy about is that they're already married and they still haven't slept with Kasha. Is the protagonist as impotent as the male protagonist in Japanese comics?

The first part felt okay, but the quality started to drop all the way when the reality chapter started. The Fengshen List chapter felt a bit creative, but later on, the physical and emotional chapters for the narrator, emmmmm... It almost became a story. To be honest, I really liked this book at first. I can only say that the author should work hard and look forward to the author's next book.

That chapter of Nezha is really ugly. It's not that it's not written well, but that the tone of Valoran suddenly changed to oriental fantasy. Just gave it up. No, it's not because the author's writing style is bad. I loved reading it in the early stages, really.