Cyberpunk: The Megacorporation of Night City

👐🏼Supplement: The author has revised this problematic point, and I personally feel the revised version is acceptable. If you're interested in what it was like before, please continue reading.👐🏼 The first few chapters were generally good, except for one problematic point that I felt needed revision. The following contains spoilers; please do not read if you mind.

That's normal, because cyberpunk is primarily a worldview, not a complete story with a beginning, development, climax, and ending. Whether it's Borderlands or 2077, the protagonists are too short-lived, causing the authors to run out of stories to write in the later stages. Writing about the power struggles with corporations is also not very interesting, which really tests the author's imagination and creative ability.

It's getting worse and worse. Can someone explain the situation? Find a character to praise the Haval Hyundai a few times, have the protagonist swear a few times, and then there's no more updates. Just mention the head maid character; she's been there for days and still isn't finished. And it looks like I'll have to write a bunch of stuff to reform her ideology and whitewash her.

Like a local, he gave Old Wei 20,000 euros for a 300-euro surgery. If he knew the plot, it would be one thing, but giving 20,000 euros upon meeting him... This is beyond words. I wonder if he believes I'm Qin Shi Huang (the First Emperor of Qin).

It's quite well-written, although the writing style is a bit immature and the details aren't described very well. However, it perfectly captures the fast-paced, enjoyable style of a light novel. If you're unsure about the depth of the plot, then boldly focus on your strengths in emotional expression; you've played to your strengths and avoided your weaknesses quite well.

The protagonist is a hardcore FPS player who doesn't even know about the trauma group, a well-known element of Cyberpunk 2077? Did he grow up playing Tencent's CF and CODOL?

This bunch of planetary civilizations put together in the StarCraft wouldn't even qualify as highly efficient. They probably knew the power gap was too big, so they just wrote a war machine in. You've dragged the StarCraft into the game and this is what you come up with?

Overall, the book was alright, but something felt off. I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe it was the inexplicable killing spree? Or maybe it was too much of a Mary Sue/Mary Sue story? It felt like it was, but then again, not quite. I just couldn't quite put my finger on it.

After looking at the first dozen or so images, I had one feeling: Trevor bravely storms Night City.

Did you do any of that cheesy pairing-up stuff? If you're not going to accept it, then don't describe who ends up with whom, especially since the main characters are actively trying to pair them up. Is that even possible?