As a Star Spirit, Having a Few More Clones Is Only Reasonable

Author, stop posting these AI-generated ghost images to scare people. They're too ugly. You should pay me to see these ghost images.

I thought the main character would look like Soraka after the change.

As a god, the protagonist should have a grander vision. Perhaps he could use his different avatars to orchestrate events, instead of constantly acting as Lux's babysitter. The portrayal of him as a human, or rather, as a show-off, feels too overt. Furthermore, Soraka should possess more divinity, rather than having the personality traits of a two-dimensional character.

The author wants to get Lux, so he wants to whitewash Demacia, and it's understandable that he'd portray Sylas negatively. But why whitewash Eldred? He's the only one in Demacia who can't be whitewashed, and Lux ​​has a terrible relationship with him, plus Tiana and he have a strained marriage.

Lux is indeed a great beauty, that much is certain.

What do you write when the Dragon King appears later? 🙂

Did the author read the backstory? During the Silas riots, large numbers of mages were turned into fodder and experimental tools, while mage uprisings broke out in various places. The Eldred that the protagonist saved was the culprit behind all of this.

My advice to you: 1. No romantic pairing 2. Avoid any ambiguous or suggestive interactions with members of the opposite sex. 3. Avoid using AI images as backgrounds; imagination is also a part of the joy of reading. 4. The latter half of the introduction is very low-quality; I suggest replacing it. The part after the soul is still considered mortal can be deleted entirely.

There's been too much romance in your recent updates; I don't know what your book is mainly about anymore.

Author, if you could just use a different account, I wouldn't believe this book is going to flop.