From The Secret of the Liancheng Sword to a Wulin Legend

After reading more than a dozen of them, this writing style is very similar to that of the female channel next door. When someone kills someone, he has to explain to others how he deserved to die, and he has to argue with the person he killed about how he deserved to die.

The best thing to say is to be careful. To put it bluntly, it sounds like grinding water. If you don't want to be associated with Shui Sheng, just ignore him. Why bother writing a lot of rationales and reasons? He also deliberately showed that he had no talent. There are many such things. If there is no necessary reason, there is no need to write it at all. Just do it. Half of a chapter is devoted to various reasons.

A modern person talks nonsense about morality and kills people directly. If he doesn't get angry, he can just erect a monument to record the event, and the whole thing is grinding and chirping.

I hate the protagonist and the author who put moral shackles on themselves the most! Just fucking kill him and that's it!

Why do I feel like the more I write, the more awkward it becomes? The first part is pretty good, but the second part is not good.

Is it wrong in my last post to urge the protagonist to quickly learn a top-notch weapon and martial arts? Look at how the protagonist in the book fights with others now? I know how to fist! Occasionally throw stones at things. The problem is that the protagonist has never practiced finger snapping magic, so he is unprofessional! Ordinary members of the Federation know how to use a watermelon knife in a fight, but Du Fuwei in Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty also has a pair of iron sleeves, and there are five pairs of iron wire rings in Kung Fu, so he can withstand the world with a few sonic skills instead of being a coolie who can attack the street with bare hands! The same is true for the protagonist now. When facing a real master of bright weapons, it is a frustrating experience! Shenzhao Gong has no horizontal training effect, and the fist cannot block the weapon. Without the weapon, not only is it impossible to parry and block, but also the length of the arm span is greatly reduced. Facing a truly first-class master, the only thing they can do is chase after him and chop! Are you kidding about the saying that every inch is long and every inch is strong? Author, if you want to argue, I suggest you take a look at modern military combat. The spear is versus one-handed sword and sword and shield, and the sword and shield is versus one-handed light weapon. It is written very well in the Book of Military Fist and Sword Manual that the spear is the king of a hundred weapons! The sword and shield is a way to restrain one-handed light weapons! Empty-handed? Nothing! Proper delivery of food. What, you said Superman is empty-handed? Ha, let me ask you how many times Superman's physical attributes can crush his opponents? Let's switch to Black Adam Doomsday, take a kryptonite dagger up there, and ask Superman if he's afraid?

The depiction is very delicate, and if it is too delicate, it will appear too complicated. It's okay to have two worlds in one world. The first world is just about killing, the second world is indecisive and doesn't say anything. The third world is still struggling with women, and it is all about following the five senses. It is better to advise Huang Shang to be an official than to become a martial arts master. When it comes to the protagonist, the martial arts is not as good as women. What a rotten fish. As long as you are a woman, you have to write about your appearance and your thoughts. Now the dog-licking economy has gone down. Author, you should be more careful, I will go on my own 😅.

The previous books were all very good, in line with a modern person's point of view and style, but when I got to Shendiao, everything changed. The flirting, teasing, and ambiguity were all there. The more I read, the more boring it became. I was even sadder when I saw Cheng Ying. What kind of style should I change? It's such a pity. It could have been a good book.

Ding Dian? When I was a teenager, I thought he was a pathetic good guy, and when I was 30, I thought he brought it all on himself. When I was 40 years old, I felt that this kind of person should be cut into pieces. Now I think it's none of my business?

Think about Qiao Feng! What he is practicing is not the world-famous magical internal strength. The Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms can be used by all the heroes in the world! People rely on turning decay into magic, and a set of Taizu Changquan can also compete with Shaolin monks! Be strong when you are strong! This is the real martial arts! And where is the protagonist of this book! The Lianchengjue chapter is well written! After arriving at the Divine Condor Chapter, the style changed drastically! The Shen Zhao Jing and the Blood Knife Jing are still not enough! Go around and steal other people's martial arts skills! This is really baffling! Martial arts are dead, but people are alive! Will the more you grab, the more harm you will suffer? ? Not necessarily! Compare with Qiao Feng! The main character is like a clown!