Myriad Worlds: Starting with The Legend of the Condor Heroes

This is so self-indulgent. Is the author writing this for himself?

Chapter 45, "Death from Poisoning," was too much to read. I suggest everyone who's started reading this book should read Chapter 45 first, so the author doesn't waste their data.

I couldn't read any further after chapter 69. Let's trace the protagonist's trajectory He was incredibly wealthy and spent 2,000 taels of gold to copy the Nine Yang Manual in the Imperial Library. Six years later, his skill level will likely be among the top tier in the martial arts world.

In The Legend of the Condor Heroes, there is Hong Qigong, whose righteousness can suppress Gu Chaoci's evil thoughts; there is Guo Juxia, who makes Gu Chaoci feel ashamed of his own inferiority; there is Mu Nianci, who is pure and kind; and even the blind man Ke is worthy of being a great hero, making people both annoyed by his rigidity and stubbornness and yet admiring his chivalrous spirit...

Seeing the protagonist castrate that future dragon knight was truly speechless. Yang Guo is gone, so how could that Taoist priest have a chance to become a dragon knight? Besides, that guy is still a good person so far and hasn't offended the protagonist. It's really hard to understand this action. It's even more outrageous than killing someone's entire family just because they glare at you.

I'm truly impressed by this author. Seven hundred thousand words in the first world—you're amazing. Has the author forgotten this is a multiverse fantasy, or are you already completely immersed in this world? From beginning to end, it's been crammed with personal opinions and self-indulgent writing, like a book review. Please, be serious!

The main character doesn't seem very bright!

Author, everything else in your book is great, but the protagonist's personality is really awful. He changes his mind as easily as flipping through a book, and he's incredibly heartless. Take, for example, when Madam Wang asked you to kill Duan Er's lover.

The author writes exceptionally well, meticulously considering the thoughts and actions of each character. However, the author is also too self-centered, bordering on arrogant, and even includes a lot of personal opinions. But everyone who writes wants their ideas to be accepted by others; there's nothing wrong with that, just different methods. If the author continues to write with this level of dedication, after a few books and honing their skills, they might actually create a masterpiece.

Having read up to chapter 81, I haven't seen the protagonist become obsessed with martial arts. Instead, his consistent double standard – bullying the weak and fearing the strong, two-faced, yet still possessing a shred of conscience – is quite consistent. The narrator's constant emphasis on this is somewhat hard to agree with.