Immortality Begins with Smiling Proudly

I have to be impressed by the author's writing style, but it's hard to describe how the author does things for people. You can see the author criticizing people in all the book reviews. I don't know if you are doing it for food or for fame. This behavior is strange and must be tepid.

The full text is still readable, but the Yitian part is full of long paragraphs to earn subscriptions. One original text of "Green Willow Villa" can be written in 5 large chapters, with long self-righteous psychological descriptions, like a mentally disturbed person who has one thought at a time, and extremely inconsistent behavior. Anyone who has read Jin Yong's original text will feel that it is extremely poisonous. I won't order it anymore, and I'm leaving!

Xiaoao was there showing off his speech the whole time, but he was beaten with Songshan's hidden weapon and was "sad and angry". He felt really frustrated and withdrew.

Did you think you wouldn't lick Ren Yingying? The results are all decided, take a look, it's a disgusting batch, don't look at it, it will feel like a loss again. It was good for you to accept the daughters of Yue Lingshan and Liu Zhengfeng in the early stage, but then you refused to accept them and licked Ren Yingying later. You are really smart.

Very sore, very anxious, and Wenqing was seriously ill.

Everything else is good, except for the bad point about Zhao Min at the end that almost persuaded me to quit. It's not that I can't accept it, it's obvious that I will. The key is that every other chapter there is a natural marriage between Zhang Wuji and Zhao Min. What a smile, mysterious and unpredictable, I accepted it, and I have experienced two worlds, and I have experienced everything. Yingying has even said before that she understands the principle of one flower, one world, and even knows that she has experienced the key points of Zhang Wuji and Zhao Min's love. She still has Zhao Min fall in love with him for half a month. It is destined to be like this. I accept it. This is really heartbreaking.

Opening a comment for new readers. This is an author who is good at telling stories. This is a work that favors group portraits. If you don't like the intrigues and intrigues, you can leave. After all, this arena is not suitable for you. If you like short stories and the protagonist can't change the story whether he does anything or not, you can also avoid it because you can't understand it. This author has a good grasp of the situation, and has a good grasp of human relationships and intrigues.

In my opinion, martial arts, as Jicha said, are "emotional, righteous, and lawless." The author's writing style, in my opinion, imitates Jin Yong too much. . Looking at the whole story, on the surface it seems that the protagonist is having a smooth sailing, but in fact he is extremely frustrated. . He always cares about his upright character in everything he does, and being restrained is as uncomfortable as pulling his neck. . . I recognize Jin Yong's heroes, and I respect Guo Jing, Qiao Feng and others from the bottom of my heart, but their heroes are too sacrificial for others and have too high aspirations, which ordinary people cannot afford, so I respect and admire them, but I don't want to be them. . I think that a modern person who travels to the world of martial arts cannot be a great knight. Being able to have a bottom line, eliminate evil and promote good, in my opinion, is already a very righteous outlook on life. . . Therefore, the protagonist in the author's works is too fake, making it difficult for people to have a sense of empathy. . Isn't the martial arts world that most people yearn for "a world of love, justice and lawlessness"?

After following the update and seeing the latest 37 chapters, I feel that I should have a say in whether the book is good or bad. (Why do I say where the chapters are? It's to prevent the time and space police and a group of black people from brushing up.) First of all, the author writes in great detail the psychological descriptions of the characters and the causes and consequences of the events. What's wrong with this? I think it's very good, at least it doesn't look tired. Secondly, the author has a good understanding of the human world in martial arts and the books of Mr. Jin Yong (he only goes to Jinpenwashing) and can portray all the supporting characters well. Isn't this better? So, is it okay for me to give this book a solid foundation first? Then let's study the specific benefits of this book. 1. The regulations for events are clear. 2. The psychological description and story arrangement of the protagonist and supporting characters. 3. Regarding the changes that will occur after the protagonist joins the event and the plot arrangement of the supporting characters after the change. 4. The personal story and emotional arrangement of the protagonist in the full text Are these four items alone necessary for a fine novel? Will adding more points start to be a bonus? The fifth point is that the whole world of Swordsman is full of calculations about various human relationships. Therefore, there is no brotherly pride of Tianlong and the great chivalrous person in the Condor 3. In such a story, is it too much to ask the author to write a chivalrous and soft-hearted person? The sixth point is that before the two events have been told, some malicious people (those who really cannot be regarded as well-intentioned comments) are posting comments to dislike it. Because the author's writing style and writing style are better than those people. He touched someone else's cake. So if you like it, just keep reading. If you don't like it, you can go out and turn left to read those fast-traveling or what you call "killing and decisive" books (to put it bluntly, they are garbage that you can't even read with your brain). That's it, I hope the author can persevere and finish the book. If the writing style can be kept to the lowest level, it will be just a piece of food. Maybe it will be a god, but the fandom is not the best. I hope that the author can have original works in the future. If the writing style is still like this, then he can basically become a great writer.

The beginning was good, the Lin family and the Liu family were solved in a way that was consistent with Jianghu, and the protagonist was witty, but something went wrong later on. He deliberately set up the training ground on the top of the mountain, did not notice Zuo Lengchan's movements, was forcibly ambushed, and owed favors. The whole process of meeting Ren Yingying was wrong. The character creation fell apart, the characters became weird and inconsistent, and the plot was not as reasonable as before.