From Liancheng Jue to Achieving Martial Arts Myth

After reading more than a dozen of them, this writing style is very similar to that of the female channel next door. When someone kills someone, he has to explain to others how he deserved to die, and he has to argue with the person he killed about how he deserved to die.

The best thing to say is to be careful. To put it bluntly, it sounds like grinding water. If you don't want to be associated with Shui Sheng, just ignore him. Why bother writing a lot of rationales and reasons? He also deliberately showed that he had no talent. There are many such things. If there is no necessary reason, there is no need to write it at all. Just do it. Half of a chapter is devoted to various reasons.

A modern person talks nonsense about morality and kills people directly. If he doesn't get angry, he can just erect a monument to record the event, and the whole thing is grinding and chirping.

I hate the protagonist and the author who put moral shackles on themselves the most! Just fucking kill him and that's it!

Why do I feel like the more I write, the more awkward it becomes? The first part is pretty good, but the second part is not good.

Is it wrong in my last post to urge the protagonist to quickly learn a top-notch weapon and martial arts? Look at how the protagonist in the book fights with others now? I know how to fist! Occasionally throw stones at things. The problem is that the protagonist has never practiced finger snapping magic, so he is unprofessional! Ordinary members of the Federation know how to use a watermelon knife in a fight, but Du Fuwei in Double Dragon of the Tang Dynasty also has a pair of iron sleeves, and there are five pairs of iron wire rings in Kung Fu, so he can withstand the world with a few sonic skills instead of being a coolie who can attack the street with bare hands! The same is true for the protagonist now. When facing a real master of bright weapons, it is a frustrating experience! Shenzhao Gong has no horizontal training effect, and the fist cannot block the weapon. Without the weapon, not only is it impossible to parry and block, but also the length of the arm span is greatly reduced. Facing a truly first-class master, the only thing they can do is chase after him and chop! Are you kidding about the saying that every inch is long and every inch is strong? Author, if you want to argue, I suggest you take a look at modern military combat. The spear is versus one-handed sword and sword and shield, and the sword and shield is versus one-handed light weapon. It is written very well in the Book of Military Fist and Sword Manual that the spear is the king of a hundred weapons! The sword and shield is a way to restrain one-handed light weapons! Empty-handed? Nothing! Proper delivery of food. What, you said Superman is empty-handed? Ha, let me ask you how many times Superman's physical attributes can crush his opponents? Let's switch to Black Adam Doomsday, take a kryptonite dagger up there, and ask Superman if he's afraid?

The depiction is very delicate, and if it is too delicate, it will appear too complicated. It's okay to have two worlds in one world. The first world is just about killing, the second world is indecisive and doesn't say anything. The third world is still struggling with women, and it is all about following the five senses. It is better to advise Huang Shang to be an official than to become a martial arts master. When it comes to the protagonist, the martial arts is not as good as women. What a rotten fish. As long as you are a woman, you have to write about your appearance and your thoughts. Now the dog-licking economy has gone down. Author, you should be more careful, I will go on my own 😅.

The previous books were all very good, in line with a modern person's point of view and style, but when I got to Shendiao, everything changed. The flirting, teasing, and ambiguity were all there. The more I read, the more boring it became. I was even sadder when I saw Cheng Ying. What kind of style should I change? It's such a pity. It could have been a good book.

Ding Dian? When I was a teenager, I thought he was a pathetic good guy, and when I was 30, I thought he brought it all on himself. When I was 40 years old, I felt that this kind of person should be cut into pieces. Now I think it's none of my business?

The writing was good at first, but later on the main character was not likeable, and he preferred to be a protagonist who was seeking survival in prison at the beginning, and who calculated everything. Unfortunately, it changed later on, and became twisted, entangled in this, entangled in that, and cared too much about feathers. It refers to the protagonist's heart. If the character of seeking survival at the beginning is maintained, with a little less literary youth and an inexplicable kindness, this book will definitely take off, because the writing is really good.

Think about Qiao Feng! What he is practicing is not the world-famous magical internal strength. The Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms can be used by all the heroes in the world! People rely on turning decay into magic, and a set of Taizu Changquan can also compete with Shaolin monks! Be strong when you are strong! This is the real martial arts! And where is the protagonist of this book! The Lianchengjue chapter is well written! After arriving at the Divine Condor Chapter, the style changed drastically! The Shen Zhao Jing and the Blood Knife Jing are still not enough! Go around and steal other people's martial arts skills! This is really baffling! Martial arts are dead, but people are alive! Will the more you grab, the more harm you will suffer? ? Not necessarily! Compare with Qiao Feng! The main character is like a clown!

This clown chased after a few books, but in the end, he ignored this book and ended up with such a clown ending.

Is the protagonist's brain funny? A martial arts master from the Republic of China once said publicly that empty hands are just a joke. To really kill the enemy, you have to use a weapon! To survive in the world without weapons but with bare hands is to commit suicide! Even a time traveler with a golden finger must first practice the Dragon Armor, Iron Cloth Shirt, Tiger Roar, and Golden Bell Hood! Otherwise, if you fall into the military formation, you will probably be cut into pieces! The protagonist should quickly learn the top weapons and martial arts. Ordinary ones, learn swordsmanship, and those who are popular, learn swordsmanship, and those who have pursuits, learn marksmanship, after all, the spear is the king of a hundred soldiers, the life-saving knife (Guandao) is the spear, the stick is the foundation of a hundred soldiers, the sword is the gentleman of a hundred soldiers, and the sword (Guandao) is the commander of a hundred soldiers.

The writing style of the composition is very good, but it seems to be a bit deliberately pursuing the unpredictable life situations and rare perfection in famous novels. Commonly known as Wenqing. But, this kind of impermanence and unsatisfaction is not suitable for martial arts time-travel novels. The impermanence of life is often due to the unpredictable world and the unpredictability of people's hearts. The impermanence of the time-travelers in your novel comes entirely from the mechanical deity of the time-traveler's golden finger, rather than the unpredictable world. It is difficult to express it well through the protagonist of the time-traveler who has a golden finger and knows the plot. This gives people the feeling that the author is deliberately leaving regrets. So why not just write that the protagonist doesn't know the plot, or there will be no golden finger.

The Divine Condor Chapter was okay, but what kind of thing is Tianlong's Azi? Huh? Ah!

There are too many reasonable dialogues, and it feels like Shendiao is beginning to develop into a harem.

You have a story about time travel across worlds, and the protagonist you wrote looks like a martial arts warrior who was born and raised here. If you want to write about traditional martial arts, then go for serious traditional martial arts. If you want to write about time travel, then go for the fun of time travel. This love and that dilemma are really unpleasant to watch.

Liancheng Jue is good-looking in terms of Shui Sheng and Junior Sister, but the junior sister is stupid. It depends on how the author writes it. Compared to Liancheng Jue, it is really dark.

The brutal emotional entanglements, the distorted relationships, and the perverted emotions and psychology of men and women in the book are probably the only ones I have seen in more than ten years of reading! I highly doubt that the author adapted it from the H book! 😁

After reading Liancheng and The World of the Condor, from my current point of view, I can only say that what the author wants to write is not the kind of cool novel about fan upgrades, but the Jin Yong novel in his heart. The poisonous points of many readers are not poisonous points at all in the eyes of the author. To put it bluntly, what the author writes cannot be considered that kind of refreshing novel, but the Jin Yong novel in his heart. There is no difference in the identity of the protagonist as a time traveler. The protagonist is equivalent to a native who has the prophet skill or the extra skill. In general, if you look at this book as a current novel, it is absolutely awkward, even a little bit poisonous (in terms of a single plot). If you look at it as a novel by Jin Yong, it will be okay.

If you don't write about the Tang Dynasty, you are invincible and you still go to Novice Village. You deserve to be a eunuch.

As for the rough and entangled relationship between the protagonist and the female character in the book, I want to more realistically express the time traveler (Goldfinger)'s crushing power and insight into the fate of the women in the plot. He looks down on his personality, despises his heart, and is afraid of the future (he cannot bear the subsequent responsibilities). To be honest, it is attractive to women with imperfect personality development, love brain, lack of love, paranoia, and insecurity. Girls who have grown up normally, have independent, tenacious, and intelligent character, can clearly feel your overlooking and hesitation, and will know when they calm down that they are not a good match.

When the winds and clouds rise, the sky and the earth are wide, those who stand out from the crowd show their heroes. The murderous spirit shook the world, and he became famous all over the world and showed his coquettishness.

In fact, when I saw the words "Goodbye for no time", I felt that the book was almost finished. Feng Yi had seen through everything. He had invincible magic skills and countless beauties. He had finished pretending to be cool. He was really just living one day at a time and had no goals at all. Author The writing is still a bit in-depth. Humanity and reality are unavoidable. Those who want to read refreshing articles will not follow up until now. The end is also the beginning. The author has a thorough understanding of Jin Yong's works. The three fan books have written different styles. He wrote Jin Yong The fandom is definitely one of the best, but there is also a bad or cruel point, that is, the author clearly realizes that we are all ordinary people in reality. I even feel that he is a bit pessimistic and world-weary, and he is probably too emotionally involved when writing.

If you lose your enthusiasm and finish the work, no matter how good you write it, it will be in vain.

Can you at least finish writing Swordsman? Feng Yi and Dongfang Bubai have to fight, right? If you use more than ten chapters to wrap up Xiaoao, you may not necessarily have a close relationship with Ren Yingying as you think. After the protagonist becomes invincible and then returns to reality, is it not better than if you suddenly end it? Then write an open ending and write about Feng Yi cultivating a ray of true energy in reality. It would be better than what it is now.

It's a pity. It's better than the previous books. The main reason is that the character of the protagonist seems less awkward. He is not as bitter and hateful as those protagonists. Why should it be unfinished? Let's continue Gu Long and Huang Yi.

Do you have any recommended Jin Yong martial arts fanfics?

What a pity. I thought this book would definitely be a good product.

It's like the sudden end of a high note, and the instantaneous ebb and flow of a tide The tide falls on the night river in the slanting moon, two and three stars are the sparks of Guazhou The flowers are scattered, and the ending is happy It's time to reward myself with an original novel