Arhat Conquers Demons and Begins by Relying on Heaven and Slaying Dragons

The mentality of enjoying the pig's feet before putting them to pieces became the Dharma

Author, you are not good at writing this article. You have your own ideas, but there are too few updates to read. So I read your last book and found that the writing style and style were completely different and I couldn't stand it. I hope to update a few more pictures every day, otherwise I will cut it as soon as possible.

Have you ever practiced the Arhat Subdue Demon Kung Fu? Some things are not written randomly, very elegant

This is a good book. If there is less debate, fight if necessary. There is no point in talking nonsense with a cannon fodder.

To be proud, I must be Mrs. Ning 😜😜😜

The rest of this book is okay, but the first one about fucking Jinhua's mother-in-law is too strong. I think the author likes 50 Road movies more than usual.

This is the novel whose style is closest to Jin Yong's original work that I have read, but the results should be better. As a reader, I feel that in addition to the controversial protagonist, there is also a lack of traffic. For a brief introduction to the protagonist's setting, the author can try to give as little qualitative explanation of the protagonist's personality and thoughts as possible. I feel that the author wants to write a growth-oriented protagonist, so the description of his character and thoughts will change later, causing the reader's interpretation to be biased. In mainstream online articles, why does the protagonist have to set a flag in the early stage? It is because the essence of the subject matter is the game upgrade flow, so the personality can be static, just stick to the character and let the readers take the role. I talked a lot about it, but I just felt that good essays shouldn't have such poor grades. The martial arts themes on the rankings are really hard to watch. It's rare to encounter a writing style that matches yours. Maybe the expression is not specific enough. I suggest the author refer to Jin Yong's description of Yang Guo. Every node of Yang Guo's growth is driven by the plot, so everyone has a strong sense of his growth and changes. But throughout the entire story of The Condor, Yang Guo's character remains unchanged, but the difference in growth before and after is also quite large. To be implemented in the article, it is enough to have more psychological sketches of the characters in the specific plot and less subjective language expressions, especially the content expressed by the characters may change in the future.

It would be nice to be less preachy. Zhao Min in this book is the cutest and most expressive Zhao Min I have ever seen.

Is this book a dark genre? I'm a good martial arts fan, but you made everyone look like a cunning villain.

The author quarrels with the readers every day. I really want to throw him in the face, but I won't read it... But the reality is that the writing is really good. Among Jin Yong's 14 books, I love Zhao Min the most. Take a dozen monthly tickets and curse them (╬￣ Pan￣)

It's several levels higher than other martial arts novels. I haven't read a novel that truly suits my personal psychology and situation in many years. I look forward to you writing your own martial arts novel.

I want to watch Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit: Legend of the Seven Heroes and Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit Walking to the End of the World with Swords

Are you going to follow Jin Yong's path? The world is far away, but the love between children is long? Isn't Yun Changkong an alternative version of Zhang Wuji?

Screenshot from the original work: This is what the original work calls flying out of the atmosphere, flying into outer space, causing volcanoes to erupt, and silencing islands with one slap. In fact, the beating caused stone chips to fly on the wall, and the words and pictures on the wall were destroyed.

Li Wanhua

It's not popular because it's not a cool article. In-depth analysis. There are a thousand Hamlets for every thousand readers. Most martial arts fans have never read the original text.

It's a pity. It would have been better if I only wrote about Yitian, but the story is indeed coming to an end. Alas, the plot is very good. It is almost full level at the beginning. It is not easy to progress the story layer by layer. It's a pity that it lacks a bit of soul-stirring and heart-wrenching plot.

To be honest, the protagonist is not likeable, but the author made him not annoying. The protagonist is very artificial, but it makes sense and is not unreasonable. The most rare thing is that they are not childish There are many martial arts and fairy novels nowadays, which seem to be about revenge and revenge, but they are really childish, like children playing house. It's really good

When I first read Jin Yong, I felt that Arhat's magical skill of subduing demons was very powerful. However, the original work only mentioned it in a few strokes, and there were very few fans who wrote about it. It can be said that there are no more. Author, you are now alone 😢

I always feel that the authors of these novels have completely different understandings of modern people's views and mental states. They deliberately write about an alien who in ancient times showed his incompatibility in every aspect inside and outside. If you are more careful, it will definitely be okay for normal people to pretend to be temporarily integrated into the environment.

The author's writing is quite good, like that of Jin Yong, but there is a bit too much talk. In addition, dealing with a smart woman like Zhao Min makes people feel tired and annoying.

He is no longer the Yun Changkong in my mind. I have to say goodbye.

Haven't you opened a new book yet? Search the author's name every day to see if there are any new books.

After reading the author's first copy, I had the idea to read the original work carefully. The author The Yitian chapter is really well written.

Brother, the whole volume of the Tang Dynasty is broken through the void!

I can't stand it any longer. It's the author who made a table of excellent food, but you have to listen to him scolding you while eating, and listen to him explain what is used in this dish and how to make it. You really don't want to be scolded and you don't want to hear it. However, the food is so delicious, so I gave it to you (Zhao Min is really good)

It's well written. What's the new one to write?

It's still serialized. When will the new book be released?

When will you start the new book? You don't know how to open a small account and write 🤔

Tianlong original text: Su Xinghe shouted loudly: "Let's play chess, what's the point of talking more? Is my master just for your entertainment?" As he spoke, he waved his right hand and slapped a palm. There was a loud bang, dust flew in front of his eyes, and a big pit appeared in front of Xu Zhu. The power of this palm is extremely fierce. If the palm force had pushed forward only a few feet, Xu Zhu would have had his muscles and bones broken, and he would have died unexpectedly.