Zhutian: Become Invincible from Shooting the Vulture

I don't dare to say that it is the best among Jin Yong's martial arts I have ever seen, but it is definitely the most Jin Yong among Jin Yong's martial arts fans. This author has obviously really read Jin Yong's original work, not just watched the TV series, and has done considerable research. The character and behavior of the supporting characters are most in line with the character of the original work. Nowadays, there are always readers who like to judge Jin Yong's martial arts with career novels, and make a lot of complaints about the three views of the original protagonists, saying that this one is stupid and that other is stupid. On the one hand, it is a God's perspective, and on the other hand, Jin Yong's martial arts is never a career novel, and the protagonist does not have a successful career. There are many times when martial arts were written. Jin Yong has not been surpassed from that era to the present, because the martial arts he wrote have a strong "martial arts flavor". These protagonists are martial arts, not engaged in careers, and basically every book has career people. However, most of the career people end up badly in the original works, such as Murong Fu, Zuo Lengchan, and Yue Buqun. The more calculating, the easier it is to fail. I emphasize again that Jin Yong's writings should not be read as career writings. Jin Yong's intention is very obvious, to bring readers a martial arts world and follow the protagonist's life. The "chivalry" of each protagonist here is different. Don't just think about "serving the country and the people." Of all the male and female protagonists in Jin Yong, only Guo Jing is so chivalrous. Most of the protagonists have no results in their careers. Instead, they are unintentionally inserting themselves into the cause, such as Xu Zhu. Xu Zhu's passivity, Qiao Feng's calmness, Duan Yu's life of finding a girl, Zhang Wuji's drifting with the crowd, Yuan Chengzhi's road to revenge, Linghu Chong's retro pre-Qin chivalrous style, Chia Ke Island's unintentional insertion, The Deer and the Cauldron's mixed martial arts world that does not rely on martial arts... No one is pursuing a career, everyone is living. Jin Yong tells us that such a life is also a chivalry, and this is the charm of Jin Yong's martial arts. The supporting characters of this book are very consistent with the style of the original work, including the analysis of Huang Rong. For Huang Rong, if you are not a single-minded person, you will not be attracted to her. At least this is much better than those who pick up Huang Rong. The supporting characters are well controlled. However, the protagonist is somewhat cunning and double-minded, with constant little poisonous points. Now the double-marking has become a bit of a feature, so the author should restrain himself. In addition, it can be seen that the author wanted to write about some conflict of opinions and the spiritual growth of the protagonist. Now it seems that this part is a bit long-winded and controversial. Personally, I don't think it is a big problem, but it is a bit long-winded. Writing at the starting point, the protagonist has to have a career to some extent, but martial arts is indeed not a place to pursue a career. The author's handling of this aspect is already the most Jin Yong-like among the martial arts I have read. It is highly recommended for those who have read the original work or are interested in old-school martial arts. If you want to read a martial arts story about martial arts, or a martial arts style that deviates from the original meaning of Jin Yong's world, don't read this article. There will be a so-called "three inconsistencies in views." In short, this is the most Jin Yong fan, so come on, author.

The writing is quite good, but the setting of the protagonist is a bit unbearable, and the front and back are a bit confusing. I mentioned before that we must maintain a good reputation, and let the three law enforcement monks go. Since you and Jiuyang know how to avoid conflicts and outwit them. Later, in order to achieve their goals, they resorted to all possible means, "Those who stand in my way will die." Since they have the relationship between Guo Jing and Hong Qigong, there will be no shortage of opportunities to learn advanced martial arts. They try every means to deceive this and that, and they have to flaunt themselves as good people. Torture those bad street martial arts students why they are unwilling to study the eight classics seriously. Tsk... In order to complain, I gave a little reward and said goodbye. The writing is good, but I really can't stand it.

The previous writing was pretty good and a bit innovative, but the part about Junshan preparing to become a gang leader was really unbearable. He knows everything but is still confused. What about the protagonist's eloquence? What about the plan? It felt a bit like forcing my wits down, so I gave up after seeing this.

The writing is really good, and it successfully pulled me back from piracy to the original version. Before reading this book, I was worried because of the "poison death" in the book review section, but after actually reading it, I felt that the author brought people to life. Many authors can only write about characters with facial expressions, and many readers can only understand characters with facial expressions: when a person encounters happiness, anger, and death, he tells you early on that even though his martial arts skills are improving day by day, the character's mind may not have changed from the beginning to the finale, and the internal factors supporting his behavior are simply like a true or false question. This book breaks away from the stereotype and writes a different realm. The composition of a real world is complex, and the heart of a real character is complex. The only constant in the world is change itself. I am very happy to see in this book the tug-of-war compromise between subduing the "mental ape" or galloping the "imaginary horse", and seeing the various changes in the protagonist's thinking and behavioral patterns. This complex and contradictory protagonist is poison to some people, but to me it is like honey. Also, the choice of words and sentences are really like Jin Yong's original works, and the emotional scenes are really touching. Come on, author!

Who is Huang Rong in your mind

The protagonist asked about his martial arts behavior and it was very confusing

It's too self-pleasuring. Did the author write it for himself?

Chapter 45: Death due to poison. I can't stand it anymore. I suggest everyone who is interested in reading this book read Chapter 45 first. Don't add data to this author in vain.

After reading chapter 69, I can't watch anymore. Let's sort out the trajectory of the protagonist Rich, 2000 taels of gold went to the Sutra Pavilion to copy Jiuyang After 6 years, his skills will be at the top level, After that, he will travel around the world for two years, looking for sects and families with evil deeds. Many people were killed, most of whom were lay disciples of the Shaolin sect. The purpose is to search for martial arts secrets. Go to Zhongdu to plan Mei Chaofeng's Nine Yin Scriptures, and defeat Mu Nianci in a martial arts contest to recruit a bride. Through various despicable means, the mouth is invincible to obtain the Nine Yin Scriptures. Traveling around the world with Mu Nianci, Hong Qigong inexplicably accepted him as a disciple to pass on his throne. Li Mochou probably fell in love with the protagonist at first sight The goal is to use the cooling effect of the cold jade bed in the ancient tomb to practice the Nine Yang Magic Skill To make up Wang Chongyang's deathbed confession in the ancient tomb. After Jiuyang Dacheng, he came out of the mountain and met Zhen Zhibing. He said bluntly that he would meet Yin women in the future and then castrate people. He also told people that Yin Zhiping would also build Yin women and persuade Quanzhen to castrate Yin Zhiping as well. When there is no capital madness, you are arrogant. It's a lie to everyone. He travels around the world as a chivalrous man, and everyone in the world has failed me. How can you be so virtuous!

In The Condor, there is Hong Qigong whose righteousness can suppress Gu Chaoci's evil thoughts; there is Guo Juxia who makes him sincerely admire him and makes him feel ashamed; Everyone in Tianlong is full of stench, possessing the three poisons of greed, anger, and ignorance. Even Wang Yuyan, who is pure and pure, has a cold heart, and Murong's family has done all kinds of bad things... However, the cold ones have great virtues, and the ones who have done all the bad things are... He immediately became a Buddha, all the good guys died, and the bad guys got a happy ending. In the end, the winner with the biggest fist took it all. The sweeping monk finally recruited two of the top three masters in the world to become Dharma protectors, and also acquired their unique skills to become Shaolin heritage. Isn't Xiao Feng's death the result of the bottomless power struggle between all parties? To practice martial arts, you must first cultivate virtue. Even the most powerful sweeping monk with the highest martial arts can't understand the principle that the three religions lead to the same destination through different paths. He still needs one martial art and one Buddhist method to resolve the hostility. His martial arts cultivation is not limited to the supernatural power of the three religions in one. Therefore, the protagonist in Tianlong directly becomes a demon.

I was really speechless when I saw the protagonist castrating the future dragon knight. Yang Guo is gone, so how can a Taoist priest have the chance to become a dragon knight? Moreover, he is still a good person so far and has not offended your protagonist. It is really difficult to understand this approach. It's even more outrageous than killing someone's entire family just by looking at you.

I really admire this author. He wrote 700,000 words in the first world. You are awesome. Has the author forgotten that this is Zhutianliu, or are you already immersed in this world? From the beginning to the present, I have included a lot of private information, and it is full of self-pleasure. It seems like I am writing my thoughts after reading it. Please be more serious, okay?

The protagonist doesn't look very smart!

Brother author, everything else about your book is very good, but the protagonist's personality is really fucked up. Falling out is like turning over a book, and it's very impersonal. It's like saying Mrs. Wang asked you to kill Duan Er's lover. As normal people know, people are just pretending to be B, but the protagonist falls out on the spot, making the scene very ugly. You After all, my daughter, although everyone has double standards and is self-interested, they are all doing one thing on the surface and another behind the scenes. You can't be so straightforward and lawless. Just say that so many people in the Wang family are besieging you. How many of them are your own fault? Many conflicts are unnecessary. You have to force the conflict, and you can't even pretend to be B several times. Overturned, in fact, it is already considered overturned, right? Shaolin masters talk about martial arts without taking action. Your book is quite realistic, but the more realistic you are, the less able you are to do whatever you want. Unless you are really invincible and have no worries, according to you, there is no way to be invincible. If you just assemble 10 masters, you will be choked even if you run, right, actually good There is really no need to say too much, just imagine it in your mind. After all, no one can do whatever they want. In fact, Huang Rihua's version of Jiumozhi is very good, and he is very smooth-talking. The protagonist can learn from this. Anyway, the protagonist has an intelligence advantage. He is a moral stick to fight with anyone. If it doesn't work, he will take action. No one can say anything, right?

The author's writing is really good, and the thoughts and behaviors of each character are carefully considered. However, the author is also too self-centered and a little crazy. It even contains a lot of my own personal items. But whoever writes something wants to let others accept his thoughts. There is nothing wrong with it, it's just that the methods used are different. If you write it down with this kind of intention. Write a few books, and if you get more training, you may actually be able to write a magical book.

Now that I have read Chapter 81, I don't see that the protagonist is addicted to martial arts and becomes crazy. Instead, he is a very stable double-standard character who bullies the weak and fears the strong, is duplicitous, but still has a bit of conscience. The narrator keeps insisting on how much it is, which is a bit hard to agree with.

Chapter 45 is really poisonous, Huang Rong has been tricking her a lot, and finally Yuan Liang, how can this be such a bitch🐶

I don't know if other readers are happy or not, but I know the author must be happy~ His long-suppressed thoughts are vented in this book 😁 Not only are they vented in the book, but they also have to argue with the readers in the comment area. Author, you feel comfortable.

Seeing Tianlong, he was poisoned and died, and he licked the dog without any bottom line.

The book is good, but the plot and characters in it always make me want to say something but don't know how to say it. Maybe it's because the characterization is too good, or maybe the author wants to write a real martial arts world as much as possible. Although it's good, some parts will inevitably make readers feel uneasy. I'm obviously looking forward to the follow-up, but I'm disgusted by the current plot.

The protagonist is a double-standard dog. If you can accept it, watch it. If you can't accept it, run away.

Your book is good but not very good. I feel like I am writing a review of The Condor Shooting. There are only a few sentences in the plot that are all comments on the characters' perspectives. It's really uncomfortable to read. Just write whatever you think the characters are like. When you read a fanfic, you just see different stories with the same setting. Sure, there is no need to tell the whole story. Just shape it according to what you think it is. The way you write it makes me feel very verbose. There is not much plot and the whole story is about confronting the void. Author, you seem to be afraid that others will not recognize the characters you write. It is wrong to write like this.

Damn it. The protagonist beat three monks and wrote 7 chapters. There are too many psychological descriptions. I explain psychologically while fighting. It's not like I can't beat them. Is this the case later? Too wordy

I just read the first 20 or 30 chapters... The writing is good... I think the plot is well written, and it's not too outrageous... The protagonist is too loosely established... I want to do whatever I want... But I don't have enough martial arts skills to look ahead. Looking back... At the same time, I also want to be both responsible and independent (not mocking, I just feel that this word is really suitable) And there are long paragraphs in the article to instill three views and talk... I can feel the author's understanding of human nature. And the conceited interpretation of the original work, and the author's eagerness to prove something and convince some people... Although it is understandable to make the decision on one's own territory... But... For readers, this It's not like reading a novel... But it feels like I'm reading a "popular science post mixed with a storyline"... I don't know if this will be the same pattern later. Please let me know if you read the later part...

Don't over-evaluate the original characters in fan fiction. Use your own right and wrong, good and evil, and criticize others from a God's perspective. It can easily make people rebellious and cause discomfort! It also seems very superficial! If you directly say that you don't like someone and you want to kill him, everyone will accept it! In fact, all those who have achieved great things throughout the ages are basically "shameless people" in the eyes of ordinary people! For example, Liu Bang can abandon his wife and children, regardless of his father's life and death; for example, Li Shimin can murder and imprison his father... Going a step further, how did ordinary people's moral code of conduct like "loyalty, justice, filial piety" come about? Isn't it true that the ruling class has been tirelessly indoctrinating it to make it easier to rule? But the big advocates never care about this! They only talk about the winner and the loser!

It was the first time that I abandoned a book because of too many words. I explained it while I was reading it, which made me a little irritable.

The author's writing is getting better and better. When Shooting the Condor just started, there were a lot of private book reviews and a lot of descriptions of psychological activities. By Tianlong, the private book review can be well interspersed in the plot. Unlike when Yang Kang was seen in The Condor, which was a long section of private book review, Tianlong's private review of Qiao Feng was interspersed with the climactic plot of killing Qiao Feng and fighting against the five masters. It's not that readers can't accept private goods, but they have to feel comfortable first, and only then can they accept private goods. At the beginning, a large section of private goods is difficult to read. It would be better if the author could update more than 10,000 words every day. Looking forward to the follow-up plot.

Tianlongjuan is quite speechless. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. It would be better to have no female protagonist. . .

It's called practicing writing if you fail once or twice. What do you call it if you fail three times or four times? Some people even went to every corner to criticize me, looking at what the author himself wrote?

This book has the best martial arts costumes I have ever read. The plot setting is reasonable, relying on the original work without being rigidly bound to the original work. Whether it exceeds the original work or not is not something I can judge. The most outstanding thing is the characterization of the characters, which is delicate, unobtrusive and well-founded. As if this person should do this kind of thing, without any twist. The protagonist's character is neither oily nor muddy, nor Buddhist, which I like. It is also reasonable to recruit girls. It is not like riding a horse and whipping a whip as soon as the tiger is vibrating. Currently, I am writing about being with Wang Yuyan. The shaping and transformation of Wang's character are very natural, and the character's psychology and behavior can be explained in a self-explanatory manner, which is rare in martial arts. Those novels that slap the whip when seeing beauty, as if there is no limit to wearing it, are what I hate the most. So far, the author has written well, keep up the good work! Cherish!