Reckless Through the World of Film and Television

Are you sure your Huo Yuanjia belongs to the world of martial arts? Do you have a problem with your definition of martial arts?

The protagonist, not daring to kill Cixi, quickly changes the map. It was padded out with over ten chapters of unnecessary padding, and the protagonist himself lowered his IQ. Playing the fool to catch the wolf, It's disgusting to watch.

Why was Nurhaci called Nurhaci? He used to be a slave without a name; he was usually called "Nur-er" or "Nur-er." His cavalry armor was obtained by selling hooks; he was given a small piece of iron each time, and he would shout "Hachi-hachi" every time he sold hooks. Over time, he became known as Nurhaci.

I love watching protagonists who don't waste words, are decisive and ruthless in their actions. Thumbs up, keep it up!

The emperor needs the princess to poison the protagonist, and then have experts surround and kill him? Shouldn't it be tens of thousands of troops surrounding him, then bombarding him with cannons? The Deer and the Cauldron isn't a high-martial-arts world, and the protagonist doesn't even have internal energy or the ability to fly. This writing is truly idiotic, I'm disgusted.

This doesn't look like it was written by a human; it's a complete mess.

The Song Dynasty was so extravagant, even offering its emperor's harem to the Jin Dynasty. Can you really believe in the integrity of its scholar-officials? I don't know what those Song soldiers who ultimately jumped into the sea were thinking when facing the Mongols. Why did those 100,000 men choose to jump into the sea rather than fight the Mongols with their bare hands?

It is often said that the protagonist is a reflection of the author's inner self. To be honest, the protagonist struck me as a somewhat manic and angry young man. One of the reasons why many authors are not popular is... They only want to write what they want to write, without understanding what readers actually want to read.

I finally found a place where I could read the book, but to suppress the protagonist, they made the gold rust... Many people mentioned the issue of not being allowed to use firearms, but I don't think that's important. The biggest challenge to common sense is the most potent poison. Gold, how can it rust? 🙂 You can melt gold with aqua regia, but you still can't make it react with oxygen. In short, it's toxic but readable, readable but disappointing.

It might feel a bit frustrating at first, but it gets better and better as you write. All books that make money focus on and amplify a particular personality trait of the protagonist. You can't have your cake and eat it too. Don't write about tough guys with tender hearts; if your writing skills aren't up to par, you'll only hurt yourself. Reading novels is all about enjoyment. If you write a novel that's enjoyable, you won't have to worry about people spending money on it.