Wife, Protect Me!

The maid who almost killed the male protagonist was sentenced to two years, but the male protagonist said he should not let her go. . . It is estimated that a lot of people have been screened out (the golden fingers will be added later to increase the life span).                                            The male protagonist was originally a fool, but after being assassinated, he became smarter (the butler said that the male protagonist changed drastically). How can I put it, it is so natural. If it were told from the butler's mouth: Although the male protagonist was a fool in the past, he still forced him to read, it would make more sense than now to have such a big change in temperament. . . . .         ()，，boss，，，

The high school entrance examination is about to begin, and it's not even started yet!

After reading it for a day, I just happened to see it on the shelf. The first impression that gave me is that you cannot use modern jurists to substitute for the Legalists in this article (otherwise it may be a bit uncomfortable to read). The fundamental purpose of modern jurists is to promote social progress, and the Legalists in the article are more about safeguarding interests and consolidating rule. This interest may not represent the powerful, but more of your own interests. Its role in maintaining social security is more like what Legalists do casually when fighting for their own interests (cultivation), and is not its fundamental purpose. One of the two is public and the other is private. If you force them into each other, you will only feel blocked. Let's talk about the character design. The main character practices law in order to survive. In the process of practicing law (judgment), he also used some unethical methods such as selling rolling pins to increase the sentencing level (deliberately providing murder weapons for criminals). However, this is to survive, which is understandable and more true to human nature. This is why I suggest not to use the thinking of modern jurists to substitute the protagonist. At present, the protagonist is not at this level and it will be a bit awkward. Maybe I will experience growth and heightening in the future. Let's talk about my personal suggestions. Among writers, it is said that newbies should look at the plot, while experts should look at the characters. At present, it seems that if you put aside the golden finger, the protagonist is more like an ordinary person, maybe without some outstanding shining points, and his personality seems to have no characteristics. In the works that I am following at the same time, such as "The Order of Peace", "A Gentleman Is Defending", and "The Genius Club", the protagonists regard asking for orders for the people as their responsibilities and obligations without losing their personal characteristics. They have shining points and distinctive characters, which will leave a deeper impression on readers. (Of course, it does not mean that the shining point has to be for the country and the people) Also, sometimes the supporting characters' wisdom is a bit too obvious and embarrassing, such as Song Yu mocking the protagonist before, the Gu family guards assassinating the protagonist and being filled with indignation, etc. The author's writing style is still very delicate, even if it is a bit short, I will continue to follow up on it, I hope it will get better and better 🌹🌹🌹

Change the picture as soon as possible.

Judging from the introduction, it's unlikely that it's a harem story. Ah, is Xiao Rong going to give up on harem stories too?

To be honest, I am a long-time fan of Rong Xiaorong, but after reading a few chapters, I found that I couldn't stand it at all. It felt like it was written by a newbie. The storyline was bland and boring, which was very different from the previous books.

The first 8 four realms can block the protagonist. I thought the five realms were too embarrassing. Princes and princes from all over the dynasty could not be invited. The following bunch of five realm masters were actually played by the protagonist just for some false power 🙂 Besides, what ability does the imperial court have to suppress so many grandmasters from entering the capital? Entering as soon as you say it is just a matter of fun. Is the emperor the Sixth Realm or does he have a few Sixth Realm eunuchs around him? ? ? The problem is that you didn't say anything either.

Xiao Rong basically had all kinds of ambiguities with his wife, but ended up driving like crazy with his concubine. Then in the finale, the real wife finally revealed her heart. The main focus is pulling and pulling, relying on various interactions with the female partner to promote the relationship progress with the main partner. Then there are daily texts

Alas, it has been falling apart faster and faster since the beginning of the senior school. I don't want to continue reading this book... I hope Duan Xiaorong will be well prepared for the next book. If possible, he will write less female protagonists and don't write the harem as a stallion.

Did you hire a ghostwriter to write for you? This doesn't feel right. I still love reading Little Scholar. Why does it feel like I'm getting more and more bored the more I write?

The author has absolutely no idea what he is good at and what readers like to read. If you can't write big scenes, don't write big scenes all the time. For readers, they are just for sweet stories. The plots he writes about people appearing holy in front of others have to lose their brains before they can read them.

The subsequent processing is really rough. The plot of the protagonist taking in the princess is very wrong and doesn't taste right. Although they have only played the role of a couple for a few days, they have developed the habit of being a couple for several years, and they are also written in a natural way, which is ridiculous. It didn't grasp the feeling of emotional progression at all, it was very abrupt. Why!

The imperial examination and marriage can be separated into so many chapters. To be honest, I thought I was watching a female channel when I watched it. I have tried my best to lose my mind and read novels, but you have to write such a long and stinky section about the imperial examination and marriage. I didn't read the rest. I guess after getting married, you will have to include dozens of chapters about the couple's life. Do you think others subscribe to the Qiong Yao drama just for the sake of several women, you love me and I love you?

If you don't pursue anyone anymore, should you get married or be a virgin? You have to describe the edges, the edges are not enough, the pretense is not enough, just remember that you have a father, there is no Machiavellian plot, the number of words is daily, the writing is like an ordinary person eating delicious food, wow, it is delicious, if it is gone, it will be outrageous, just like a flowing essay.

When I read Chapter Ninety-Eight, I became more and more angry. If this book was written by a newcomer, it would definitely be criticized to death. The efforts of the protagonist in Chapter Ninety-eight were all in vain. At the beginning, the wife directly attacked the protagonist without asking anything, not to mention that the protagonist is still a fool. The protagonist's father is the top leader of Dali Temple and has the largest spy agency in his hands. As a result, his son is in the capital city in broad daylight. He was assassinated in the street under the sun. He only appeared once in 100 chapters. The more I think about the heroine, the angrier I get. I was in a good mood and listened to a book but my mood exploded. You also have a speech limit of 500 points. As long as you have 100 points, there are probably many people who are willing to spend this money to criticize you. There are many others that I don't know how to express and won't write. The more I think about it, the angrier I get.

To sum up, the world view is really a piece of cake. It's really rubbish if you can't see from the front and the middle. I'm convinced. I knew I wouldn't have subscribed to so many chapters. The more I read, the wiser I become.

There has always been a problem from Xiao Rong's Xiao Langjun to now. The emotional scenes are very good at the beginning, but basically disappear in the back. They even only mention the heroine and don't even say anything to the heroine. I hope Xiao Rong can change it. What's more, Xiao Rong has always wanted to break out of his comfort zone and write a fantasy fairy tale. In fact, Writing fictional history is also very good. Xiao Langjun and the little scholar are really comfortable to read. Of course, the fairy tale fantasy Xiao Rong also wrote very well in the early stage, but in the later stage, he was a little unsure and started to collapse. Alas, I hope Xiao Rong will get better and better. I like Xiao Rong's books very much 😢😢😢

I have been reading books for a long time, and the book has been tepid from the beginning to the end. Unexpectedly, after reading the book and the end, it has already exceeded 10,000 orders. I also read the book "The Witch" and it also exceeded 10,000. I am very happy. I can only hope that the author can return to his peak as soon as possible. After all, you are one of the few harem masters. 😭

Please give the author more ideas for his new book. Except for Xiao Langjun and Little Scholar, others are not good.

After reading so many years of books, the one I like the most is the old thief Rong Xiaorong who is now closed. The old thief lies in the comfort zone of history and slowly becomes silent. Xiaorong always wants to jump out of the comfort zone, but it seems that he has not taken the path he wants. Instead, they have become counterexamples to each other. On the contrary, Guan Guan is getting better and better in his own style. I hope Xiao Rong can find the feeling he had before next time. I want to say a lot, but when I think about myself as a 180+ line author who doesn't even read book reviews, I still have some empathy. I still have to make my own way.

The early stage looks good! 1. I thought it was a crime-solving and slap-in-the-face style, with a lot of foreshadowing and full of expectations. You can watch it in the mid-term! 1. But since I started writing about the twin children of the Song Dynasty (just to attract identical twin wives and sisters?), I started to skip it. After the cold eldest wife solved the problem of the exercises, the protagonist hopes that the cold eldest wife will be gentler, and the violent little wife will be gentler. And then the appearance, body fragrance, and gentleness of the two wives are exactly the same? ? I never expected this kind of mentality. 2. There is a princess and a phoenix interspersed in the middle. Will time travel have to have multiple wives and concubines? 3. The protagonist said that he prefers princesses in his heart! Why? Later, when the twin wives had similar personalities, Song Jia became more talkative and gentle, and Song Yi became less talkative and gentle. If he is a normal man, he must like different princesses. I didn't watch it later! 1. The protagonist is completely cheated, and the supporting characters from all over the world are collectively smart! When the protagonists started dual cultivation, third cultivation, and multiple cultivation, none of the sixth-level experts in the world felt it was against their will and had no intention of jointly studying it. 2. The code is completed, hell begins and heaven ends. The code changes the skill into a permanent skill, and the protagonist is now invincible. Finally, the author's writing is very good, and I definitely can't write it. However, as a reader, I still hope that the middle and later stages should match the quality of the early stages and not be incompetent. It feels like the IQs of the minor supporting characters in the early stage can crush various sixth-level IQs at will. .

Pursue reading, please pursue reading, it is recommended, pursuing reading is very important!

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I ordered it all a long time ago but haven't read it yet. I read a few chapters today and there are a lot of flaws. There are also a lot of complaints in the book review section 🙂 I feel that the logical thinking is not very rigorous. The character of the male protagonist is not important. I insist that the turtle is a bit too high-level. After reading one or two sentences of this book, you will know that it still has the same taste. It is recommended to read less of the book review area 😎

I would like to ask if this is still the same Rong Xiaorong? Could it be that he has changed his vest?

I've finished reading it. How can I put it? The whole book is really disappointing. It's not very enjoyable, and it's not very enjoyable. The summary is that you can read it in the early and middle stages, but in the later stages... You can read ten lines at a glance.

I feel that the world view is a bit petty. Every time there are several countries, I can't write anything. Some books feel that the main character is more exciting and more exciting just by experiencing the plot of a few cities (family, sect, grand meeting, secret realm, race war). Starting a family too quickly leads to daily descriptions taking up too much space. This is an advantage and a disadvantage. It may also be the reason why Xiaorong is not good at writing battles.

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