Dragon Raja: My Senior Brother Can’t Possibly Be a Girl

I have read a saying that Xia Mi is just Lu Mingfei's meal replacement for senior brother

I have read more than two hundred chapters so far, let me talk about my thoughts; The early stage feels very perfect and amazing, but it starts to feel a little weak in the middle and late stages, and it feels like there is a lack of explosive points; First of all, Lu Mingfei's plot is not enough; There is nothing wrong with Chu Zihan as the main perspective, but regardless of this role Regardless of her temperament, there is one problem that cannot be avoided. She is not strong enough, and there is almost no room to become stronger. Chu Zihan wants to fight Odin, but neither the A-level bloodline nor the Yan Ling Junyan are strong enough, even if they throw the whole Kassel away, she will face a dead end no matter what. In such a desperate fate, there is only one variable, that is It's Lu Mingfei. Lu Mingfei is also the only "extraordinary person" in the entire Dragon Clan plot. He is the only person who has the real ability (at least the potential) to change destiny, and this guy is a bad boy, which means that this guy can easily take over most of the explosive points. Therefore, the exchanges between Chu and Lu in the early stage and the transformation of Lu Mingfei can be interesting to watch until Chu Zi Han went to Kassel; I personally think it would be more appropriate to turn the perspective to Lu Mingfei at this stage, because Chu Zihan really has nothing to do in Kassel, and she cannot become stronger there, and it is useless to explode into a deadpool, so it is unnecessary to describe Kassel's life in detail; Secondly, the supporting roles are not in-depth enough. Up to this chapter, no supporting character can have enough connection with any of Chu Lu, almost all of them are strangers, and the line between Chu Lu and Chu Lu is blocked by Kassel - just like a long-distance relationship; In my opinion, Xia Mi left the scene too early. She is the Dragon King, has a relationship with Chu Lu, and is still tracking Odin. It is simply a perfect connection line. Chu Zihan ran to Kassel. Lu Xia and Lu Xia were able to do things behind the scenes. Lu Mingfei could learn about the dragon clan through Xia Mi. There was an information gap. Ming Fei herself had no hostility towards the dragon clan. It was reasonable for him to be abducted and used as a tool in a daze (anyway, the little devil, the Riddler, must not have understood anything); In addition, Concubine Ming can still connect with Old Tang. It may not be convenient for Xia Mi to run around in the United States, but Old Tang, who is a hunter, can. Old Tang comes into contact with Chu Zihan, which in turn creates connections between Chu Lu, Shan Huo, and Odin; Because Concubine Ming only has two-quarters of her life left to exchange, she should be more cautious in dealing with the BOSS, and if possible, pull in a few Entering the Dragon King camp is an option (Old Tang and Xia Mi are very popular), otherwise if you plan to kill Norton, Odin + False White King + Norton, Lu Mingfei will have to explode at least three times. Unless you plan to continue the combat power system dug out of the bug in Jiangnan, it will not be enough no matter how you calculate it, or you can directly become a Supreme after exchanging lives, but then there will be nothing to write about. Now I have opened a copy of the Snake Qiba Family. That Lu Mingfei must be exchanged once, and the last life must be left to Odin. I can't think of how to deal with the Mountain King and the Fire King (the original Fenrir, I read that the boss on the post forum said that the value is not even as good as Yuan Zhisheng). He can't really be stabbed to death by a hybrid's knife. Wouldn't that be following the footsteps of Jiangnan? Therefore, I think it is necessary to recruit enough help. Without writing bugs, the only mixed-race emperors who can really fight against the Dragon King are probably only a few kings. To be more strict, only Uesugi Koshi and Eri Yi. I don't think even Ange can do it. After all, Time Zero has no output.

It was supposed to be included in the introduction, but the last revision of the introduction failed and had to wait for a week.

I feel like the language is too literary and the plot seems a bit scattered.

​ ​ ​ One of the reasons for the poor performance of this book is that there are too many original writings before entering school, which are too redundant. With less than a million words, almost 30%-40% are original works before entering the school. One of the highlights of the Dragon Clan fanfic is to change the flaws in the original work, which makes people uncomfortable. The chapters before entering the school are not that long in Long Yi. It can be concentrated into twenty or thirty chapters of about tens of thousands of words, and it is enough to write about Lu and Chu after the world line has been changed. Another problem caused by the original work is that the main line is unclear. The first volume is a variety of branch lines. There is no clear main line that can be related to the content of the original Dragon Clan, which makes people more frustrated. To be honest, the story including the strengthening of Chu Zihang's part is not very exciting. It feels like it is overly literary. It is not a good thing that the novel is so scattered. The author has no intention of writing a unit drama style (it doesn't fit well with the dragon clan). Looking at the table of contents, after three months of perfect attendance, the author kept updating every 4-5 days. He still has perseverance. I hope I can finish this story completely. Come on.

It's quite strange. It's so clear that it's clearly wrong. Why did you add a restart setting when it's written so clearly? Can't you just let the senior sister redeem it?

Stack Nono and Senior Sister Chu Zihan together

Indeed, it feels like there is something wrong with the plot, and the character of the senior sister was not established quickly. In fact, it would be better to change the situation to the situation where the senior brother died in front of oneself, go back in time to save him, and then find out that the world line Chu is a girl, and struggle for a long time, and finally decide to take her to prevent her from dying in the future, to make up for the regret, change the world line, and start the dark flow of rain.

There are many bugs in the Dragon Clan timeline. The ages of the characters are inconsistent with the events they have experienced. There are even many times when three or four ages appear in the same version of the book, and the new version blurs all the specific times. The timeline of this fanfic was organized by myself. The timeline after the restart has many patches on the old version. Therefore, it is not completely consistent with the specific timeline of the original work.

After reading a few chapters, there is no difference from the original work.