I Am a Demon Cultivator

I just watched it not long ago, and only read more than 70 chapters, but there is a plot that runs through more than 70 chapters, which has always been haunted by me, like a stick in my throat. People who have never watched it may not understand it, so I will briefly describe it as a semi-spoiler 🙂: Change the perspective 🙂 → I keep a diary I'm used to it, but one day, my diary was stolen by a classmate from the class next door who played well with me. She posted my diary online and bought Doujia (1.4 Billion views 🙂). I chose to forgive; I learned my lesson this time. I used a password pad to write my diary, but she still stole it. , And directly broke my lock open, still posted my diary online, bought Doujia (1.4 Billion views 🙂), and I chose to forgive; This time I decided not to use a paper book to write a diary, I planned to write a diary on my mobile phone, and after my friend learned about this, after I bought the newbie I downloaded a virus to my phone when I was using the computer. He could watch my diary anytime and anywhere, and he could also turn on the live broadcast 🙂 while I was writing my diary. But I chose to forgive; Statement: I am just a paper person, so I have no right to decide my life. This is normal. Fans: "This female character is so cute, she is my favorite character!"

Who can see this? If others see it, they think I look down on it. Speed, one hundred chapters per person!

It was a bit interesting and I finished it in one go.

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write a hundred chapters a day ? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I've never been an author.

I read this article as a lighthearted and funny article, but in the end, a bunch of people started killing each other in this chapter. Bobo is reincarnated, right😂

Anyone who has seen Dragon Clan knows this. A senior sister that Jiangnan will never forget. Then I saw it. All readers of this author's other books know it. Heroine. Never grow up. This represents the author's quirks. What is it?

Let me tell you my feelings. It's a really good book, but the more I read, the more I feel speechless. All the beautiful female supporting characters have no ill intentions towards the protagonist. There is never a beautiful woman who goes against the protagonist. The ones who kill are either ghosts or men. I am really speechless. Moreover, there are so many female characters, except Dong Dong, who is very likable, almost all others have no impression.

Let me first ask, is there no heroine? Or a single heroine?

This book is essentially a female romance film disguised as a cultivator of immortality. Unfortunately, its core romance core and external setting of cultivating immortality have not been firmly established. The inner emotional drama is empty and lacks the delicate description that touches people's hearts; the outer world of cultivating immortals seems hasty and sloppy, and the basic settings such as skills, realms, and magic weapons lack depth and necessary elaboration, and are reduced to a thin background board. The author is not without highlights. The large number of reversal plots he designed do bring some fun and excitement. However, the problem is that the reversals are too dense, which dilutes the narrative tension that should be there, which is too much. More critically, core inversion is often poorly executed. For example, the opening scene of "The Killing of the Division" should have been extremely impactful, but due to the fleeting battle scenes and feeble motivation explanations, the effect was greatly reduced, which exposed obvious errors in detail. The overall look and feel is like an ordinary bicycle tire being forcibly mounted on an electric vehicle - the intention is to integrate the advantages of the two, but the result is counterproductive: readers who pursue the construction of a traditional world of immortality ("cyclists") will find the setting perfunctory and too "clunky"; romance readers who expect in-depth portrayal of emotions ("electric bikers") will find it difficult to invest because of their unstable emotional foundation and "drift of center of gravity". Ultimately, it's hard to please both sides. It is true that market demand can also accommodate successful integration innovations such as "folding electric bicycles" (that is, excellent fairy tale romance works). However, the author's current writing skills are still insufficient, and the fusion of genres is quite regrettable. Given time, if you can work harder, you can look forward to the future.

Endless generosity, endless power. There are endless delicacies to eat and endless money to spend. There are endless carols to listen to and endless gifts to receive. Enjoy endless wealth and live endless years. ——Huang Liang Meng Note: The author who wrote this word also entered 🙂

It feels like there was a plan to write a female protagonist at the beginning, but later it became inexplicably without a female protagonist, which made people feel that it was neither good nor bad.

Some of the characters are inexplicable. What is the significance of the character Dong Dong?

It really takes the female protagonist all the way to level up, and then the male protagonist becomes a pure feeder 😅

It feels like both the sect and the imperial court feel like they are playing house

The overall quality is okay, but this Dong Dong is really hard to describe.

In fact, I feel that it has been a bit boring recently. What I wrote earlier was very innovative, but in the end, I still didn't want to step out of my comfort zone. The current protagonist and the background of the novel gave me a strong sense of déjà vu. It's the protagonist of the Demon Sect, it's the arrogance of the Immortal Clan, it's the problem with the founder, and there's the star projection. I almost thought it was a prequel to the previous book. Is there still a lack of an Immortal Lord to feed the demons with his body, and the protagonist went to the Netherworld to suppress the eternal world? If this goes on, I will know the background and story line of the next book. If this is the case, I guess after reading the ideas for the next book, I will find other authors to play with.

Grab an author and pinch it to see if you haven't updated it yet! 😁

The entire book is only 36.8 Yuan. How do you write a book?

I interacted too much with Dong Dong, and it didn't look like people in love. It felt a bit like a father and daughter. I know that the author likes little girls. The previous nine-tailed fox man and woman were okay, but it can also be said that the relationship is a father-daughter relationship in name only. It's okay for you to read this book, but if it's not well written, it will look a bit off. I also want to test the boundaries between father and daughter, and restrain my arrogant daughter from licking the dog with her old father.

The last thing I wrote was that it was so invincible that it took off straight away and completely collapsed.

I have only read the first few chapters. The author's writing is very good, but it doesn't look like a male novel at all 1. The focus is on the plot rather than the scenes. Many "big scenes" were pushed through in just a few sentences (the early murder of the master was a small climax if a male author could write dozens of chapters) (the first few scripts were more upgrade tools, solved in a few sentences) 2. The focus is not on the fighting but on the character setting. Although there is a fighting plot, it is pitiful compared to the text set up for the useless characters. Combat power settings are vague. 3. I didn't read the rest of it, but my brother found it on the forum, saying that all the protagonists met were beautiful women, and he never killed a single woman. The female character I met was a "good person". I guess a lot of ink was spent on useless female characters later on, right? 4. You will know the name of the author's first book

Very good, one of the three books I am currently reading daily.

Can the interaction between the male protagonist and the female supporting characters be more warm? It's very uncomfortable to see that the passionate male protagonist Yi Qingqing has not fluctuated. I can fill in more ambiguous plots in daily life, and don't have to be so cold.

Drive high and go low, okay, actually I can't understand it later, it's written so strangely

The first fifty chapters are amazing, but the rest are inexplicable.

Kneel down.

Good subject, no problem before, after payment, number of words, adjectives, various modifications, expansion, plot delay and failure to advance, etc.

What happened next. After I came into contact with the country in that copy of the game, some of the descriptions were really shocking, so I stopped reading the book. I found that someone gave me a thumbs up, and then I looked at how many chapters had been updated. I found that it was over at just over 1 million words. What kind of outrageous plot was behind it that made the pursuit unsatisfactory?

The more I look at it, the more something feels wrong. What's going on?

I feel like the protagonist's father died carelessly. Were the imperial masters of the two dynasties so stupid and easily plotted? How did you live so long? Of course, I have just read Chapter 8, and the description is also from the perspective of the protagonist. I hope there will be revelations later.