Lingxiao Immortal Sect

This book has merits in terms of description, setting, etc., But the results did not meet the expectations of regular readers and the author. I think there is still a lot worth saying. (Off topic, who is the author under the vest? The author ID is "Sheep and Yangyang in a vest", and the author's writing style is obviously not like a new author. It is very likely that the old author has been reincarnated. Who is the author under the skin? I wonder if book friends who have joined the fan group know. I feel a bit like Sui Qiu. Among the fairy tale authors, Sui Qiu seems to be the only one who is interested in it. There is an obsession with the system of spells, spiritual arts, treasure arts, and Taoism. Many of the settings of this book overlap with those of "Nine Transformations of the True Spirit" and "The Immortal Road Supreme". In addition, in the later stages of "Hunting of the Sky", the updates of Sleeping Autumn were intermittent. It would be easy to understand if the platform was changed. ) Then let's talk about the feelings after reading it and the points that caused discomfort. 1. The routine is still old. Every time, a breakthrough is made on the spot, and the breakthrough should be regarded as a breaking point. A strong enemy attacks and then breaks through on the spot. The sense of déjà vu in "The Immortal Road Supreme" is too strong, and the readers are already tired of it. 2. The author preaches too much about human nature and sophistication The overall feeling is that the protagonist himself is not very sophisticated in human nature, and the author tried hard to create a contrasting character, but he failed to see where he is stronger. Cui Qinggui and Chu Yu, to be honest, they didn't even see where Chu Yuqiang was. It was completely the author's trick. Feitian Qizhen's sect competition can actually rank at the top with just a few high-quality talismans. What is the significance of this sect competition selection? 3. The positioning of the Universiade Immortal Dynasty is unclear, and the setting has a strong sense of incompatibility There is no policy program and no Dao concept, there is only a dry way to control the immortals with people, cut down mountains and destroy temples. Si Tatian's character design is very dry. Apart from being strong and calculating, he doesn't have any personality charm. After unifying hundreds of kingdoms and establishing the Immortal Dynasty, I didn't feel that the lives of the people under my rule were that good. The majestic prince had to marry the Demon Queen in the north. If we build a country based on humanity, we shouldn't attack the demon clan. You don't want to attack the demon kingdom thousands of miles north, but you should at least expand the living space of the human race, right? What did he do? He just cut down mountains and destroyed temples without even knowing how to establish a united front. This character really cannot support the description given to him. Emperor Qi in Chi Xin and Emperor Jing in Shen Nong, these humane immortal emperors with charismatic personalities are actually based on what they are like. Anyway, these people can't do such a nasty thing as defeating the empress and forcing her into the harem. 4. Setting stitching, I wanted to write too much, and the result was four different images It can be seen that the author has read a lot of books, and has read all the books at the top of the starting point list, but he just doesn't know what to choose and wants to write everything, but nothing is written. Typical ones are the setting of the Great Fortune Immortal Dynasty, or the Hundred Demons when I first got the Elephant Demon Fist inheritance, and the original life, which are all a bit different. There is also the story of Transformation. I feel that the plot of Transformation is that the early stages of the drug upgrade were too intense and the pace was forced to slow down. However, when you transformed into a mortal in the city near the sect, you completely ignored it and didn't have any understanding. Anyway, you just forced yourself through the process. 5. Forcibly climbing the tower and disrespecting female characters Although the starting point is all male videos, it is not easy for misogynist authors to survive. To be honest, Qidian readers should be decent, but to be honest, Qidian readers (especially paying users) are all "boring" rather than bright. Take the concubine that the author never wanted to leave, for example. It can be seen that the author really did not want to write a charming female character, and even stated clearly in the text that she could only be a "concubine". The author did not even want to hide your bad taste in order to make money. I don't know if the author can listen to it, because the author may be a successful person in reality, and writing novels is just to make some extra money. But the author has been writing for so long. If he wants to continue writing in this line, it is better to keep pace with the times. As a long-time reader, it is not easy to find a book that I can read. It is precisely because I can read it that I find it more difficult to accept certain points in it.

The novel is well written. The author should be in his thirties or forties and have a certain amount of life experience. However, after I received Zhu Mange, I started to read it. From my personal opinion, since this woman is rather snobbish, she looked down on the male protagonist when his cultivation level was low, and then everyone broke up. Then, the male protagonist shouldn't have to practice double cultivation with her after becoming a pill-forming monk whose cultivation level far exceeds hers. Considering the current status of the male protagonist, it is not difficult to find a woman who is better than Zhu Mange. The so-called double cultivation method is that the author writes the plot and finds reasons to marry this woman. When Jack Ma was young, he was rejected by the little girl next door. When he became a billionaire, the little girl next door went to the city to work washing dishes. Ma Yun actually wanted to marry her into the family, and he couldn't accept this plot. Regardless of appearance, talent, or character, the level of the little neighbor girl is too low.

I really don't understand what's wrong with sour socks in your thirties…

1. Realm of Cultivation The first realm is ventilation. Ventilation is divided into nine levels The second realm is martial artist. The martial artist is divided into nine levels (The sixth level is to remove evil spirits, the seventh level is to condense the clear, the eighth level is jade liquid, and the ninth level is perfection.) The third level is real person The fourth level is Taoist realm The setting of the fourth level adopts the realm division of the Supreme Immortal Road, not the practice of martial arts. 2. About human feelings and sophistication Human feelings and sophistication are the necessary measures to be taken when the protagonist is weak in the early stage and can get benefits from both sides, so as to obtain enough benefits and benefits.

You are also a talented person. You changed three names of a book. The more you change it, the worse it is for you to start with your own name. The more you change it, the more third-rate it becomes. After reading the title of the book, I have no desire to read it anymore!

Seeing the rise of the sect, upgrading the experience bar, and the world and practice settings in the first few chapters are obviously the same as Sui Qiu's Immortal Road Supreme. There are four levels of magic, spiritual arts, treasures, and Taoism. Each upper-level skill is composed of two or three lower-level skills plus a general outline. At the same time, the general realm is anchored based on the exercises, and the level of the sect is determined by this. For example, the protagonist's sect fell from second-rate to third-rate, that is, from a master of treasure arts to a martial artist of spiritual arts. After the Taoist skills, there are various other ones. For example, in the original book, the Immortal Path Supreme is divided according to the ranking of the Heaven Opening Technique after breaking through the world. It will not continue to stack boxes on the exercises and write about holy magic and divine magic. Use this to divide an orderly world. I was very fond of this setting after seeing it. After all, the setting is not messy and is filled in carefully. From time to time, a few cleverly conceived events and characters are added to make a good novel. At the same time, because the rise of the sect is also very reasonable, it is reasonable to spend time on the supporting characters, which is a perfect match. In the end, there was a specious talk about breaking off the engagement and smiling, but in the end, he was a smart-aleck framer. Every time he appeared, he made sure to write about his figure and big breasts. Then, for the first mission, I assigned a plump young woman with an attractive figure to write half a chapter. From time to time, it's important to highlight the importance of human relations and sophistication, right? I saw someone talking about Zhangmenlu, but if Zhangmenlu didn't have Chijiri Mahou, who would show his sophistication and sophistication? Moreover, Zhangmenlu grew up step by step from a good old man to a useless person. Is the protagonist of this book suitable? I feel that these two books are not in the same direction. The title should be changed to match the worldly wisdom you wrote. It should be called "Cultivation of Immortality in the Mortal World, I Persevere Alone" in a more upscale way. After all, your wind and frost knife can protect women from wind and frost, and the upgraded and jointly trained Time Knife can be used in reverse, so that time will not pass by to keep beauty forever. Why would you write about the rise of a sect if you are so good at writing about human relations and sophistication? If you want to write about some serious entertainment achievements, this is not a smash hit.

Damn it, this piece of shit started to change its name again to deceive people.

The writing is okay, the writing style is good, but the fantasy world puts too much emphasis on human nature and sophistication, isn't it a bit neglectful? Pleasure and grudges should be the theme, right? Who the hell likes to see you playing tricks and being a peacemaker, and you don't have any tricks?

Once this book is written, you can become a little god.

It is so well written This is the only book I have subscribed to This book has been written at this level, no less than "The Road to the Leader of the Cultivation Sect" The author's writing skills are good, his literary talent is good, and he has a sense of the vicissitudes of the leader's life, and the fighting also has the ingenuity of a sincere patrol I believe that the author will form his own style as he continues to write, and I can look forward to the future of writing books.