My Uneventful Cultivation Journey Shouldn’t End Here

I have read three books by the author, Female Channel Cannon Fodder, A Puddle of Demonic Cultivators, and the current one, and I have some thoughts First of all, the female channel's book, in fact, it was very exciting in the early stage, with mediocre writing, mediocre cultivation, and inadvertently surpassing everyone else. The calmness and calmness are the biggest joys (including the following "A Puddle of Demonic Cultivators"), but the biggest failure is the inexplicable female protagonist, not to mention that the protagonist has cultivated to a transcendental level. The concept of the world, and you are still relying on the heroine. If you write the heroine's character very plump, similar to the image of a teacher, it is fine, but every time you write about this heroine, you will interfere with her. The atmosphere of cultivating immortality you created before completely disappears, and there is a very strong sense of separation. Everyone comes to see the protagonist. You always weaken the protagonist's sense of existence in front of the heroine, but the image of the heroine is completely unworthy of this kind of treatment. It is really overwhelming. The reason why the second book, Demonic Cultivation, is better than the previous one, Female Channel Cannon Fodder, is that the female protagonist has less roles. I think the author has reviewed the previous book, so a long chapter focuses on describing the protagonist's own cultivation. , And the image of the heroine is a little more likable than the previous one (she won't call her mom for no reason) The last one is the current one, it has an inexplicable heroine, the boss returns, and the protagonist, and the protagonist is inexplicably bound to the heroine, It's really huge and blunt, even worse than the one written by the female channel cannon fodder (why is the author always obsessed with calling mom or being called mom), the impression is really bad. After these few books, author, don't you know where your advantage is? You can rest easy Just focus on the protagonist. To be honest, the heroine you wrote is really boring. It's just that your writing is good in other aspects, so I don't want to give up the book, but it's really tiring to read like this I hope the author can refer to my opinion as a young reader Sincerely

It's obviously a cool article, so why do people who seek revenge always have to give everything they have, and they may not win? Instead, those clowns and despicable villains can jump repeatedly? (The possessed Su, to put it bluntly, is the chess piece that the author uses to kill people, and then the protagonist comes to the rescue)

Why is this beginning not as good as the beginning of the female channel Cultivation to Immortality? Have you really watched too many female channels?

Every generation is trying to control the fairy clan, but each generation has no effect. It just takes advantage of the popularity of the previous game, and the fairy king of the previous game looks like a clown. We really can't engage in some underworld and barbaric immortality. The realm and combat are obviously very fairy-like, but we always stay in the comfort zone, and the updates are slow.

After reading six chapters, I feel that this book is very petty.

If you don't take the Enlightenment Pill, why are you pretending? 😅

There is a problem. With things like cultivating immortals, your talents should not be optimized as your level increases. Well, for example, a person's swordsmanship talent is initially 10, and a person's swordsmanship talent is initially 5. Assume that both parties have reached the same level. If you have a talent of ten, you have improved a lot. You have improved to 100. I have a talent of five. I may not be able to improve to 100, but it is no problem to have sixty, seventy or even 80. There is no reason. It is still the same as before. You are an ordinary person. The more you use your brain, the smarter you will be. , Because on the whole, cultivating immortality is a process of its own evolution from imperfection to perfection. So I feel that some settings in some novels about cultivating immortals are good, but after reaching a certain realm, qualifications are not of much use. One method can apply to all methods

The author's writing style has not improved much after all this time. The shadow of cannon fodder is too heavy

This protagonist will only be passively beaten? Those sects formed groups to kill him at every turn, so why not exterminate those sects? You are such a great saint

Why does this author mark the chapter title as "two in one" every day? Is it deceptive? If the title of "two in one" means two chapters are combined into one? The word count simply doesn't meet the two-chapter standard, I'm just lazy, it went from two chapters to one.