Family Cultivation: Rise of the Wilderness

I read more than 140 chapters in one go today. Although the author says that he is a newcomer, I personally feel that the author's writing style is very good. Compared with many articles in the top ten of the monthly popular list that treat readers as elementary school students with full-length talk, this article is not even a little better. In addition to the author's good writing style, the story structure and character creation are also remarkable. The description of the plot is appropriate and detailed. Not only is the description vivid and detailed, it avoids a long-winded plot, and the abbreviated parts are also just right. This article is different from traditional immortality articles. If you want to read the traditional immortality articles where gods block gods and kill gods, and Buddhas block and kill Buddhas, then this article is not suitable for you. Of course, everyone has their own preferences for radishes and vegetables, and I can't say there's anything wrong with readers who have that preference. Everyone has a choice of their own favorite novel genre. Finally, I hope the author can work hard and hope that the subsequent plots will become better and better. Don't be led astray by some trolls and stick to your own rhythm. Come on!

It's Chapter 870. It's good to watch but not so good. The plot is pretty good. 1. There are some bad points, such as the enemies caught in the Qin family's fight can't be crushed to death, teammates can't fight to make up for it, etc. 2. The setting is made up while writing. The number of words is not much, and it has to explain what Qi training, breath, movement, Zhoutian and so on are a long paragraph, which is a bit watery (all those who read the fairy tales insist on explaining everything). I wanted to give up several times. But the plot is good, the climax, the ups and downs, the connection between the plot and the characterization are all very successful. Watch it while spraying.

Personal Opinion To be honest, this book is really well written. This book is not a mindless novel. It is not one of those stories where the protagonist, under the banner of family or business, cheats and rides on rockets to improve his cultivation. The clan members get some inexplicable adventures and are forcibly promoted to a level similar to that of the protagonist, and then inexplicably... It is a pseudo-family story that has become the dominant force in the world, but a story about the rise of a business family and farming that is consistent with reality and has a reasonable plot logic. The supporting characters each have their own characteristics, and the characters are well created. In my opinion, this book is comparable to the leader of a cultivation sect, except for the slightly inferior writing skills. The only hope is that if it is to be cut off, I beg you not to rush the ending, and not to raise the level of the protagonist and their family too high. You can write an ending in which Li Huinan breaks through the golden elixir, and then the Li family dominates Pu County. Li Xiangming concentrates on managing the territory, unifying the affiliated forces to rest and recuperate, so as to give people room for imagination in the future. To be honest, I feel that the biggest problem in this kind of book like Wen Zhangshou in the later stage is the interest relationship between the various forces. The overt and covert ones are too complicated, and there is also the transition between the novice village forces in the early stage and the external forces in the later stage. If the planning is not perfect at the beginning, it is easy to fail to grasp it in the later stage, leading to collapse or eunuchs.

Moral model essay! It makes me want to vomit! A time traveler? As a person with modern ideological education? Can you accept injustice? I have been an unlucky guy since I was a child and was sent away. My father doesn't love my mother? I don't believe you don't have any resentment in your heart? The master doesn't care, but the family doesn't provide resources? Don't you understand the principle of cultivating immortality slowly, step by step? Once again, the family was thrown into the old man's nest to be used as a test tool for conflicts? Are you still happily teaching this and that student? Don't you have a share in the Foundation Establishment Pill? Practice was delayed again? What's the difference between blocking someone's path and enmity? It would be strange if a family of leeks could still have a normal mind.

I have also read a lot of family novels, but there are not many good ones. Most of the authors are very poor and cannot support the world structure that a good novel should have. Many magic weapons, talismans, and formations are just given a name, mention a few functions, and that's it! And how could a complete world of cultivation objects be completely separated from one castle in the air to the other and to the west? It should be like the low-level elixirs and talismans written in this work are related to the intermediate and high-level ones. What are their advantages and disadvantages? Why was this elixir and talisman written clearly? This is the prototype of a good world framework, and you can slowly fill it in later! 2. When modern people travel to another world, the biggest golden finger is actually the modern business philosophy, which brings game guilds and trading platforms into the world of cultivation. After seeing it for the first time, my eyes lit up, and the introduction was extremely detailed. Puyin Mountain originally only had this potential, and the protagonist used the family The family's strength is used to form a prototype, interfere with the original monster hunting group, and finally form a family monster hunting group and follow the trend. It is indeed a good way for a family to obtain a large number of spiritual stones. It is smooth and unobtrusive. It is much better than the protagonist opening a dungeon, picking up some fruit tree spiritual plants in it, and then the whole family selling specialties after coming out! The original golden finger green robe is like a patch to supplement the cultivation qualifications! Just mentioned the third spiritual root to the second spiritual root! Ordinary family stories often use space magic weapons to speed up the growth of plants, and then make elixirs. It makes me sick just looking at it! 3. The author's NPC counter-routine is also a highlight. The various supporting characters in the novel are also individuals. They act according to the author's ideas rather than the protagonist's ideas. The protagonist has only been exposed to NPCs for a period of time. How could he understand the character and ability of NPCs so clearly in such a short period of time! In the guild hall, he supported Zhao at first, but later found out that Zhao couldn't outplay Zhang Mazi and had selfish motives, so he tried to suppress him. However, Zhang fell. The traveling businessman he was optimistic about was no match for Zhao, so he began to accept Zhao again! This is an anti-routine. The protagonist is not the author who is omniscient and omnipotent. Of course, the world he lives in will not all follow his ideas. It is reasonable to change the approach when you find it is different from what you originally imagined! 4. The thoughts and thoughts of various characters in this book are described in detail and reasonably, and the corresponding descriptions of the fighting scenes are average! I just found this book this week and read it in a few days. I just issued a monthly vote for you. I hope the author will not stop updating. I will give it a try and come back to read it. Come on👏!

The first 400 grains and grasses, the rest are completely 💩, about 300 to build the foundation, and they are forced, otherwise I have to drag 200 more, and then I saw chapter 580, and I didn't even break through the mid-term. Use 400 pictures to describe the tide of monsters and monsters, including the establishment of labor unions, monster hunting guilds and other forces around monsters, and then guess what? Being pushed horizontally, nine times out of ten will go away. I wasted so much time writing about this monster and the construction force. The only gain was that I gained a lot of enemies, and then the most outstanding eldest brother in the family died. The main character, the rich man, has no shortage of Dharma and Dharma. He doesn't want to practice at all. He just wants to build tall buildings with building blocks and then push them down.

It is recommended not to read this novel Family Cultivation Articles In terms of cultivation, the protagonist has practiced the sixth level of qi at the beginning, more than 800 chapters, and it is still in the early stage of foundation building. Family aspect, at the beginning, the family ancestor is at the peak of foundation building, breaking through the golden elixir in seclusion, and more than 800 chapters, from the seventeenth to more than thirty years of the protagonist, still in retreat?

The protagonist is also a talented person, and he is gentle enough to win over casual cultivators whose strength is lower than his own.

The north is a large area of ​​land, which is not drawn, while the south is marked as the ocean. Since there is no scale, it is only for reference and does not guarantee accurate orientation. In addition, the comment area for the map upload became blurry, so an enlarged screenshot version was posted. This part is where the main story in the early stage of the novel takes place.

The middle part is too boring, so go to Biluyun Cave, Chapter 10 and Chapter 1, find a foundation building and the plot is over, boring, skip a long section and read the rest. Hey guys, the protagonist hasn't built a foundation yet. Are you going to write 1,000 chapters to build a foundation? Normal Cultivation of Immortality is completed with 3 million words. You probably won't be able to get a golden elixir out of these 3 million words. It's equivalent to saying that it's either unfinished or it's really a low-level Cultivation of Immortality.

Beast Tide, Purple Yin Cave, the writing is really bad

If you want to write like this, you might as well write a historical fiction. You won't feel comfortable writing under the guise of a cultivator, and the readers will find it awkward. Does the protagonist devote 10% of his energy to spiritual practice a day?

Is this cultivating immortality? It's written a bit like a courtyard house😅

Too much mother-in-law, the essence is still cultivating immortals, strength can solve most problems, I was so tired from watching mother-in-law one day, there are too few related to cultivation, right?

This novel is both readable and disgusting. After reading more than 500 chapters, there is no golden elixir. It's really funny. Foundation building is the lowest level. In the future, you can write in the golden elixir realm. It doesn't matter if you stay in the golden elixir realm for a longer time. Normally, you should build the foundation around 100 and have more than 300 golden elixirs. This novel is too boring. The novel is also a seam monster. It's political. If there is no golden elixir in 600 chapters, then this author is really ink.

It looked okay at first, but after the green robe came out, it then built Shangji Palace, and then Changyang Valley Market. I don't practice much anymore. I keep describing the infighting within the family and how to develop the family. I couldn't stand it when I saw that leader appeared. I suspected that the Nascent Soul had been brought out. The more I watch it, the more uncomfortable it becomes, and it doesn't make me feel any better. I see you arrange the protagonist to do this at one moment and that at the next. Are you still practicing immortality?

It also writes that the protagonists are all scheming and powerful, but they can't even place an informant in the Qin family. Instead, the Qin family has agents everywhere, which is amazing.

I wrote about it in the east and in the west. I mentioned before that I wanted to develop beast control. I captured the black water black snake and injured Li Xiangru. I also went to Youyuan and thought I would learn a clever way to control the beast. In the end, I hired a few beast masters. I didn't mention it again. I went to learn illusions. The illusions had no results. I went to get a tattoo. I spent dozens of chapters on the situation of Zhao Jindou of the Puyin Mountain Chamber of Commerce. He thought he had commercially controlled the regional market, but there was no way to explain it. Just three years later, he went to grab the mines.

There is intrigue internally and no enterprising spirit externally. The Jindan Family does not have its own tablet system and expects a few existing members to practice Qi? Let the Qin family be beaten into a sieve, and the ten foundation-builders let three new foundation-builders run around every day, while the others eat and wait to die? It's amazing to be alive to this day

After raising it for half a year, I found that the author was still writing about power management, and his own cultivation was still in the early stages of foundation building. I admit that management power is indeed useful, but this is the world of immortality where great power belongs to oneself. Everything should still focus on one's own cultivation, right? Otherwise, no matter how well you manage your power, a golden elixir will be snatched away from you or destroyed. I hope the author can balance these things well.

After reading a few chapters, I found something a little disgusting. The first thing is about time travel. You don't have a system and you don't have a golden finger. Isn't it just disgusting to have to add such a few sentences in the article? Second, there are several foundations in the family, four houses and a branch, and there are also intrigues and so on. Do you think your Li family is a big Nascent Soul clan? This immortal clan is really unforgivable. Third, your hook is that someone started to develop spells at the fourth level of Qi training. It is more abstract. Let alone how your former Jindan family cultivated low-level monks. Spells should not have been a systematic thing for tens of thousands of years. What illusions are added to the spells? It is your turn to come up with whimsical ideas. Overall, it is watchable, but average

There are a lot of rubbish novels on the monthly ticket list, including Qi training, foundation building, and Golden elixir Pi Yong AI in hydrology are all on the list. This book is not on the list and it is not a high-quality book. Start from the beginning and just dive into the market!

But why is this book so popular? ? ? Is it because there are no brainless plots, cheats and system cheats? ? ? Doesn't anyone like to watch the normal Immortal Cultivation style? ? ? The writing is very good, and overall it is reasonable, except for some plots that need to be polished. For example, it is a bit exaggerated that four people from the Qin family ambushed Li Xiangren and three of them died. The contrast between Liu Xiongyu and Liu Xiongyu in the copy of Ziyin Cave before and after entering the cave was too great. There was a lot of foreshadowing in the past and it felt so forced to die just because of a woman. Did the author Kavin deliberately write it to death because he had no idea? ? ? The head of the Li family was injured and fell into a coma. Li Xiangyu and Li Xiangming were in the past, when the Geng family was ambushed by the Qin family. The Qin family's two foundation builders were suppressed by the genius of the Geng family. The two Li family members were in a daze and did not do any last-ditch attacks. One of the Qin family's foundation builders should have died. It felt like they were deliberately suppressed and no one died. . . The level-up time, prices, plot rationality, villain's IQ is online, and the holes dug in the article are also filled in. Personally, I don't think there are any major problems with this book, but it's a pity that it doesn't🔥

Very exciting, still beautiful as always

Will there be updates? The author is great

That he could be resurrected was beyond my imagination.

It's been a long time since I read a family story. This book is really good. It's much better than the previous books from Qidian. The logic is reasonable and the intelligence of other supporting characters and villains is also good. Why do I keep asking for leave recently? Isn't this a prelude to a break? Reminds me of the few family novels I read earlier, Above the Hill (broken update), The Immortal Path Evergreen (hasty ending) Tian Yuan Xian Ji. Also, do you have any other good books to recommend?

Dear author, can you update more?

Big cheers for the author! More updates, not enough!

This book is such a pity. I can't wait for the update, so I wrote a copy myself. Friends who are interested can check it out. "The Rise of the Family: Beginning to Prove the Truth from an Acre of Wasteland"