Immortality Begins with Inheriting the Qi Training Sect

1. This book is not as grand and impressive as the leader of the Xiuzhen sect, nor is it as solemn and sophisticated as the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, but it can be praised as calm and steady, with many highlights. 2. From the writing and structure design, it can be seen that it is deeply influenced by the cultivation sect. Compared with it, it also reflects that the author's conception still has shortcomings and loopholes, and his writing skills still need to be tempered and escaped. 3. If this was the author's first book, it would have been quite exciting and enjoyable to read, but not many people fell in love with it. I think either there was not enough accumulation or the time was short, which resulted in the beginning and the first half of the text being a bit bland, leading to a loss of readers. 4. If you feel that the author's style has not yet been fully formed, you might as well learn from the fun and humor of Wulongshan Notes or the sophistication and weirdness of Shanhai Lantern. 5. I feel hungry even while typing this, so to sum up, if the first half was a neutral five-grain porridge, then now it is an intriguing preserved egg porridge. I hope to have a bowl of spiced spicy spicy soup later. 6. Finally, I strongly recommend book friends to read this book. It is worth reading and you will not regret it.

1: Let's talk about the conclusion first. As of now, the excitement of this book is second only to Qi Kexiu's Cultivation Sect Leader Lu and Ji Yue's Xuanjian Immortal Clan among the sects of sect masters and clan leaders. 2: The author is very good for a new writer, and the plot is very smooth. The descriptions of things and the emotions of the characters are all written with the feeling of being true to the real story. I almost read it from beginning to end in one breath. The only bad point is that the part where the poison of creation and creation is introduced is too blunt. 3: When I read the previous free chapter, there were many typos that needed to be corrected and changed. I hope the author can check it again, because such things are very distasteful to new readers. Just like the uncut jade is beautiful, but in order to attract people, you have to break the stone clothing first. 4: The worldview is really grand. It's hard for me to imagine whether the author's writing power is enough to fill in such a grand worldview. I hope it won't become an empty shell in the future. Furthermore, events happen so frequently that there are too few plots about the main protagonist's time in cultivation. Perhaps more descriptions of cultivation and the feeling of time passing should be filled in.

Following the Cultivation Sect Master Lu and the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, it is another masterpiece of family cultivation. Recommended reading.

Every time I see the fighting part, I feel very tired and want to skip watching. There are many twists and turns in the fighting, and the writing is very detailed, and every fight is like this, very similar, which is unrealistic, and makes people more and more tired of looking at it, so I don't want to watch it. I basically skip the fighting part.

Isn't it that his gourd is useless?

I haven't looked at it carefully yet, just passed it by.

Nowadays, the titles of books are all very interesting, but this book is really good, especially in the early and middle stages. The writing is deep, especially the characters are well-drawn. The battles focus on magic weapons. The plot is a little worse. The author doesn't want to write a cool novel and will design some hardships, but it basically makes a comeback very quickly. The comeback point is also far-fetched, and there is no long-term plot. Although it is a clan novel, it is written more like a family novel. The plot is often cut into the plot by sect disciples being killed and then taking revenge. The perspective is too small. Like many novels, the overall level declines after reaching a high level. I hope I can review it again later. In addition, I feel that the author is suitable for writing harem stories haha ​​😍

Generally speaking, the writing is good. Although there are some problems with the dialogue segmentation and perspective changes, the flaws are not concealed. The plot writing and other aspects are remarkable. I especially like the description of the underlying ecology. To make an awkward digression, I am a reader of Mengchaosheng's version of Zhang Men Zheng Tu. My book friend recommended Chong Ming Xian Zong after reading Zhang Men Road. At first glance, it looks familiar. Isn't this the book that stole the name? After reading it again, I realized that the writing was okay, but a bit numb, so I could only make a meme to express my feelings. I heard that your editors are the same. Is it true? The more you eat, the more interesting it becomes

This book is really good. It is not easy for me, a bookworm of 20 years, to read from the first chapter to the last chapter. There hasn't been a book that I could read in a long time. However, I felt that the book was held back by its title, which was a bit cliché. Change your name. In summary, the author's writing style is good, the plot is reasonable, and the author does not feel like a newcomer. It's just that the map is a bit too big. It's already 3.5 Million words long. Yuanying, according to the world view set in your novel, if you want to break out of the Immortal Dynasty, the Immortal Mountain, the small world, and then to the middle world and the big world, then it shouldn't be at least 7 million words?

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Up to now, Xiao Kuang and Dabao are still being beaten. The author has been thinking hard every day based on this. It is completely different from the rotation of the earth. The author needs to understand what comes and goes. For example, Xiao Kuang planted a bomb to blow up Taiyiguan's family, or Dabao In any case, the Taiyi Guan uprising was launched, or Taizu called back, or the Ghost Palace sent a letter back. In short, the author unilaterally wrote that Taiyi Guan has many tricks, but Xiao Kuang and Dabao are like quails, so the level is too low.

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My dear friends don't seem to have much to say today. Are they all making up the extra time and not in the mood? By the way, if anyone wants a role, you can leave a message. You can set your name, background, and usual magic weapons and techniques. Write a comment under this book review. I will see when it is appropriate to add it. It's just that my writing skills are relatively poor. It may take a while except for the dragon set. Please forgive me.

I finished reading this book in one go yesterday. When I saw the update today, I suddenly didn't want to open it. After thinking about it carefully, I felt a little enlightened. First of all, the poisonous point of the Demonic Creation Sect mentioned in other comments is exactly the key point that allows readers like me to persevere after reading it in one go. No matter what the author thinks, this plot at least plays several roles: The first is to explain each adventure and the level of the golden finger, clarify the high specifications of the gourd and add the double-edged sword buff to the bone, so that the golden finger issued earlier can limit the appearance instead of wiping the butt frequently; The second is to broaden the main theme The author has made a common mistake among newcomers before, which is to directly determine the location of the existing map, which is backward to the mountain villages and suburbs of the border areas. The map seems grand. In fact, the readers and the protagonist are pure country people who cannot even hear urban legends. They would have been criticized as poisonous points. However, this outside contact with the plot allows most readers to forget this small flaw, and at the same time, a small patch is made in advance for future map upgrades. In addition, the protagonist's halo has also been slightly patched. The original so-called "plan before acting, think twice before acting" style will change after having Big Dad. There must be a reason for the change, and contact outside the world is for this reason. The protagonist has a deeper sense of his position as an ant, so it is logical to still be cautious; Third, the extremely exaggerated level difference makes the protagonist team lag behind in the current progress. It seems inconspicuous, and the minimalist status of outsiders makes the current map base-building fake elixir rampant and domineering situation look like children's play house. If the protagonist group is now these players playing house, the plot is indeed very poisonous, but the protagonist group is not just a toy in the hands of the players. Currently, the big daddy is one of the mid-range and upper players, and the protagonist group is a group of toys that this player likes very much. In this way, the reader's perception of the protagonist group from the perspective of playing house will not change much, including the dead disciple and the crippled third child. If the protagonist group is among the players, then this part of the plot belongs to the abuser, but it does not count if the toys are accidentally injured by other players, and it is impossible for Big Dad to respond to the demand to stand up for the protagonist group. After excluding the above influences on the Demonic Creation Sect, if you think about the current plot, you will find that the protagonist group headed by the protagonist is actually a group of ants drifting with the tide and making extremely small progress. Although they defeated and killed two or three foundations on their own, they were all blackened green leaves, the kind that a big daddy could spray to death with a sip of salt soda. Without the plot of the Demon Creation Sect, a considerable proportion of readers would definitely not be able to accept this kind of progress. Zhongxing Zhongxing has blown up almost 200 chapters. In fact, the sect does not even have a foundation-building combat power, but it has been dealing with foundation-building fake elixirs every day. The third child who has only been disabled until now has actually greatly exerted the halo of the protagonist. It's a long story, but it's not really a complaint. The author is actually quite good at writing the rhythm. However, while pressing the schedule, the plot was also forced to advance, thus creating a kind of fragmentation. It is recommended to deal with it as soon as possible, and arrange people to build the foundation within the sect as soon as possible. Otherwise, the longer the story is delayed, the stronger the sense of fragmentation will become for readers.

I have been following this book for a long time. The setting and plot are very good. It is normal to enrich the plot when the realm of building the foundation pill Yuanying is high, but enriching the plot is not enough! And what's the use of writing about the levels of foundation building, golden elixir, and Yuanying? It doesn't show any specialness at all. It was said before that it would be difficult for Bing Ye to form the foundation to form an elixir, but now all of his disciples are able to form an elixir. Then it was written that the high-grade golden elixir is very awesome, but except for adding a setting to prevent the body from being seized, it has no other magical powers at all. Moreover, the setting of preventing body snatching is nonsense. Your golden elixirs are all of the same level. Low-grade and medium-grade ones will be seized, but high-grade ones will not. What is the principle? Isn't this nonsense! It is also written that if you want to conceive a baby with a middle-grade golden elixir, it is basically impossible. The ancestor of the Fei family who was so amazing and talented before did not conceive a baby, but now he can conceive a baby alone. In a ten-thousand-year-old family, there have been so many middle-grade golden elixirs for so many generations but none of them have produced a Nascent Soul. As a result, they have a Nascent Soul when you come here. There is also Jiang Qing, the third child, who was originally the best in Tianzi, but as a result, the whole Ice Leaf Foundation was set up to make it difficult to form a pill, and then the plot was forced to make people have babies. Personally, I think that cultivating immortals should be about exploring and perfecting oneself, and having enough energy to develop the sect and family. What you wrote will make your family and your family become immortals.

I feel that the author suppressed the main character's realm to write the golden elixir stage and wrote it into the demon. It was not just water but suppressed for the sake of suppressing. Pig's Foot's current state is in the middle stage of Yuanying or even the late stage of Yuanying. However, he has to be in the golden elixir stage. On the one hand, when it comes to Yuanying, the pace is accelerated and the ending is at the end of the year. I wonder if it is not more reasonable and better to change the ending of breaking through Yuanying to breaking through the spirit instead of suppressing the protagonist's realm now in the late stage of Yuanying. But the author kept delaying the Golden Elixir stage, and then the Nascent Soul came to an end, which was really crazy.

This book was one of the few books I could read at the beginning, and it gave me the feeling of reading a mortal back then. The author does not blindly follow the previous models of cultivating immortals. He has his own unique innovative model. Of course, he can also learn from excellent works. For example, Xian Ni borrowed lessons from mortals in the early stage and later found his own unique path. In short, I hope the author can fight to become a god. A few suggestions: 1. The author should construct his own world view, and the outline should be written in advance. Haoyu Zhenxian is a good example. The author of this book is also a senior mortal fan, so the big frame does not break away from mortals, and he does not follow his own path like Xian Ni. In the end, it is unfinished, but it is a passable work. This guy just wrote the outline in a very detailed way, so that there will be fewer jams. 2. The settings of the big world, the middle world, and the small world you wrote are good. I hope the author can be logically consistent about the relationship between the various worlds. The current power level of the small world Chitianjie is: Guarded by the four directions - 108 caves - 800 Immortal Mountains. What you said in the fourth chapter was not very clear. The Immortal Dynasty should belong to one of the 800 Immortal Mountains, right? The ancestor of the Immortal Dynasty is the transformed god, so the four-party guarding is at least clutch. Since the highest combat power in the small world is clutch, then the middle world is at least mysterious, and the big world is Mahayana. I don't know if it is reasonable, but I just hope that the author can plan the world view in advance and achieve logical self-consistency. There are also some scattered issues, why can't small realms accommodate high realms? The currency system must be planned well; each realm is not much different from other novels, so the lifespan of each realm must be thought out, not too abrupt, how are the realms connected, etc. 3. I hope the author can keep up with the progress and make the whole story smoother, such as how many chapters are required at the county level, how to write at the Daozhou level, and how to lead the sect out of the small world in the Immortal Dynasty, Dongtian, Guarding, and so on. I really like the author's writing about trivial matters between sects, but one disadvantage is that if the number of words is small, updating in one day will affect the refreshing experience. There are no memory points, and some readers do not have the feeling of crazy pursuit of updates. Although many novice or cool novels are despised, the novel is updated in the era, the plot has ups and downs, upgrades to fight monsters, various dungeons, etc. Are indispensable.

You can't add all kinds of extra drama just to let the protagonist survive the 9th level of thunder tribulation and to prove that the 9th level of thunder tribulation is difficult. The golden elixir realm is already 2 million words long. Is this reasonable? Is this normal? The author's obsession is too strong. There is no use for plug-ins. I'm really convinced. Many readers are also convinced. If the author doesn't change it. It's better not to write novels in the future. Among novels about cultivating immortals, you have the largest number of words in Golden Core Realm.

I don't understand why you keep suppressing your realm? Is it really a good feeling to not be afraid of the late stage of Nascent Soul in the later stage of Golden elixir?

The characters, rhythm, writing, story, and conflict handling are all very good. It is very comfortable to read. I hope it will become popular and I will keep writing Of course, the current pace of general online articles is relatively slow

You are not an AI writer? ? It's really incredible. Two-thirds of the content is filled with pretentious and gorgeous rhetoric. It's a complete mess. Qidian review is not possible.

I wasted more than two hours of my time and subscribed to 100 comments. Chapter 13 is so disgusting. It has a bit of a pornographic plot. Am I more sensitive? Why is no one commenting? I really can't stand it. I feel uncomfortable without vomiting.

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You are awesome, you are awesome👍, I stopped watching it, I really can't stand it any more, you give the villain a wit, you inexplicably arrange some plots, all for the sake of the word count, and you talk nonsense. I fix those stinky footcloths every day. You are the author and you are awesome. I can't play with you. Goodbye.

I haven't been too busy at work recently. When I was fishing at work, I saw someone recommending the book "The Journey of the Master" in the "Above the Mount" book club. Because I personally prefer this kind of sect novels, such as "The Road to the Master of the Cultivation Sect" and "Above the Mount", which I like, and I like the feeling of running a sect or a family bit by bit. Even if you are a shabby sect, but with a little bit of effort and accumulation, you can pull a group of people to feed you and grow together. I really yearn for this kind of experience. In reality, I have a decent job and the heavy burden of getting married and having children, so I don't have the courage to do this kind of entrepreneurial feat. I just hope to experience another kind of life through stories in the world of words. Anyway, I kept it in mind and added it to my bookshelf. Yesterday, I spent a whole day playing with Zai in Liuyi. Zai was tired and so was I. I lay in bed at night and opened this novel. The first chapter made my eyes light up. I think it's good. Maybe it's because we are both fat. The main character is a talker from a down-and-out sect. The image is somehow special cue our animal. Chapter 2 Chapter 3 continues to describe the current situation of the Chongming Sect's downturn. The more downtrodden the community becomes, the more excited it becomes, as if it has discovered a strange and refreshing point in itself. Closer to home, in Chapter 3, the conflict between Fatty and Young Master Qing, my personal opinion is that the author is very careful in portraying it, and the effect should be said to be very good. In addition to explaining all the named characters in the entire sect, the characters are also slowly being laid out and shaped. But the image of Young Master Qing here, personally feels a little torn. You said he is full of arrogance, so how did the fat man control a genius whose cultivation level is two realms higher than his own in these years? You said that he is grateful for the fat man's upbringing, but he is stubborn and simple-minded. Can you write about the growth process of the third son, how difficult it was for the fat man to raise the two children by himself, and write a little provocative story? It is more natural to continue to explain and set the background by admonishing the two young apprentices after the conflict. But starting from the fifth chapter, I feel that the pace suddenly picks up, and there is no foreshadowing for the murder of Sin Xiu. In fact, at this stage, can more words be added to the story of Sister Song and Fatty, so that the plot of identifying the red fruit later can be more tenable? To be honest, the writing of this book is a bit stiff. The first conflict basically describes the cruelty of the casual cultivator society. The protagonist is in danger and survives two serious mistakes. One more thing to mention here is that the feeling of cheating should be slightly foreshadowed. It feels a bit inconsistent and strange to have two at once. The supporting characters who died are also sharp and sharp, not like Long Aotian killing NPCs. He is willing to spend pen and ink to shape the image of each character. Writing a story like this should be quite strenuous for a novice author, but it also shows the author's sincerity in writing. I appreciate this sincerity and hope that the author can persevere and try his best to finish the story of Chongming Xianzong.

When I saw Uncle Heilu leaving, there was a lot of water behind me. I didn't even want to say it. It was just water and it didn't feel any better