Sect Cultivation: Rise from the Heavenly Book of Luck

In many sect novels, the protagonist claims to be the leader, but is actually the nanny. Logically speaking, a sect is similar to a modern enterprise. A company is created to make money, while a sect is created to allow disciples to better collect resources to assist the protagonist in cultivating immortality. As for the sect inheritance and cultural core mentioned by some authors, unless the ancestor has a spirit in the sky, it is just to fool Sha Zi, and it is the same as the so-called wolf culture now.

The first and most uncomfortable point is that if you lead a spirit to build a foundation, your lifespan will be increased by 60 years, while building a foundation will only have a lifespan of 180 years, and condensation pills will only have a lifespan of 240 years. No matter how you look at it, it seems awkward. Although the short life span is a foreshadowing according to the author's intention, a famous writer once said that newcomers are not worthy of foreshadowing (that's what the original words meant). The early plot itself can only be regarded as fodder, and a very unconventional setting will make the desire to read even lower. As for the self-created realms of opening pulses, attracting spirits, and condensing pills, they can only be regarded as weak points. Second: The protagonist is indeed not a nanny, but very much like a nanny. The reason is that the protagonist's cultivation level is always incomparable with that of several other people. This does not make sense logically. The protagonist is already considered a genius, but the speed of entering the world of several junior disciples can not be left behind at all. In terms of character, because I have very little description of the character's character, I can't tell what makes them better than other monks. In other words, I don't feel that they have extraordinary understanding or a rock-solid heart for seeking the truth; in terms of talent, the two juniors at the beginning have low-grade spiritual roots, and Li Hai has a marginal mid-grade spiritual root, which is already a poor level; in terms of resources, if there are a lot of resources, The source can make up for the lack of spiritual roots, so the advantage of the large monks over the small monks should be overwhelming; as for the last luck, this setting does not feel like it has played its role, it is more like giving the author a reason to give the character whatever it lacks. The biggest reason is that none of the supporting characters have a distinct and profound image that can ignore their talents. As for those monks who advance rapidly in the same sea area, it is even worse. The overall progress speed of the monks in the entire Yunsha Sea area is like spiritual energy recovery. Third, I came to read this book because of the sect, but as far as I can see from the dozens of chapters after the protagonist's foundation building, the sect is now as established as it is not built, and the sense of existence is too low, including the sect's recruitment of disciples, training of disciples, disciples performing tasks, the inheritance of the sect's masters and apprentices, the specific scope of the sect's influence, the distribution of mortals, etc. There are too few descriptions. Moreover, the entire sect only has ten or twenty people, but it wants to include many institutions, names, decentralization of powers, etc. Early on, giving people the feeling that they are all officials in one class in elementary school. Another author seems to be reluctant to part with the characters in his works. He rarely sees sacrifices, and rarely sees disciples who are still powerless and lonely after hard work. He drags them away together. In any case, the fairy spirit will be much weaker. Exercise resources: The sect does not seem to be that rich, but it seems that there is no shortage of anything. The reason is the aforementioned luck. Rather than saying that luck improves the luck and fortune of the disciples, it is better to say that it gives the author a reason to send supplies. No matter what is lacking, just go out and have it. The techniques and skills were passed down too easily. Financial system: There are no problems with prices, but there are bigger problems with making money. The first one is poor and the second one is white. When you open the pulse, you can earn one or two hundred spirit stones a year. When you are guiding the spirits in the next few, you can buy thousands of spirit stones. Each time you kill the spirit-guiding monks, you can get thousands of spirit stones. The middle-grade spirit stones can be used in dozens of places. However, when the protagonist builds the foundation, he invites the protagonist to the demon hunting group for only one thousand a year. Moreover, when the protagonist upgrades the magic weapon, he cannot get four thousand spirit stones. No matter how you look at it, it is unreasonable. In terms of combat: The simplicity of fighting scenes is a common problem, and it also exists in this book. When fighting, you can only see the strength ratio and the danger of fighting, but there is very little mention of moves and spells. Another thing is that the monks' strength is not written out. So far, I only remember that the protagonist uses a halberd and is strong, Li Hai uses a sword and is talented, and Wang Qing uses a bow. As for what is different about them from ordinary people, what kind of recruitment they can do, and what spells come with their exercises, I have no impression at all. Zong's Hundred Arts: It's too easy to pass them on. As mentioned earlier about luck, the other thing is that the disciples of the sect have only been practicing the hundred arts for a short time, but they can master them as long as they need them. This is the same as the previous use of luck to send skills and resources to the sect. Others are just minor problems. As for the name of the area, every sea area is called xx sea area regardless of its size. I have no idea about the size of the area. It is recommended to refer to the division of states, counties, counties, etc. On land. There are relatively few descriptions of high-level forces. Fubo Sect is only known to be a Jindan force. What are the specialties of the sect, what are the important affiliated forces, the number of disciples, and the gap between the disciples of the big sect and the disciples of the small forces are not described. The setting of spiritual veins is also quite awkward. When I think about the time before and after the protagonist builds the foundation, the whole sect only has one micro-spiritual vein that is not in the sect, and most of the forces in the entire sea area do not have a spiritual vein, I wonder if this setting is really from Xian Xia. The last thing is the issue of colloquialism. Many of the dialogues are very modern colloquialisms. Of course, I don't mean to play modern jokes or anything. It's just that many of the dialogues feel like two modern people chatting at a glance.

It's very interesting, but I don't want the protagonist to have a female protagonist. I feel that when the protagonist reaches a certain level, he will accept disciples, let the ancestors do it, and then give the pen and ink to the sect theme. In the early stage, the protagonist can be the center, and in the later stage, the sect is the theme. The disciples he accepts must not be female disciples. It really feels disgusting.

New authors should not create any new settings by themselves. The traditional mortal realm still accounts for the majority of the audience. I think what people in the comment area said is absolutely right. You have to get a bucket for the spiritual rain technique. How about lighting it first for the fireball technique? There is nothing wrong with what I say. It nourishes the Qi, opens the pulse, and guides the spirit. To be honest, the new setting does not have any sense of superiority. If the new book can write the story I want to write in the setting of the old book, it will be very good once it is written. Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. I wish you a great success in this book.

Growth always requires sacrifice, compared to the Xuanjian Immortal Clan

1. There is a problem with the setting of Goldfinger. The protagonist kills people alone and raises a sect. Although he does not support all the sects, the sects and him seem to be of no use. Moreover, the level is low now. When you get to Genshin Impact, there will be a few enough for you to kill and accumulate luck. 2. The protagonist looks decisive and cautious in killing, but in fact he is very stupid. Every time he kills someone with a background, he always relies on a group of people not to tell anyone. It's not who you are. If you don't tell, you won't tell. This is the case with the Chen family, and the same is true with the Fengpeng family.

Thank you for your advice. What can be modified has been modified. The first and second volumes have been reorganized. Thank you very much! There are a few questions, let's explain them together: 1. The protagonist is not a nanny. If the junior brother should be allowed to practice, he will let the junior brother practice, but he will never let it go and watch indifferently! 2. The survival of the sect is better than anything else! 3. There is no forced intelligence, the supporting characters and villains all have their own plans! If you have any ideas, you can reply here. Book reviews will not be deleted!

In the early stage, shouldn't we give priority to giving luck points and resources to the strongest protagonist, trying to break through to the next big realm as soon as possible so that he can deal with the enemy? However, without any planning, the junior brother's own realm is lower than that of the protagonist and then breaking through to a small realm will not be of much use in dealing with the enemy.

The Nine Transformations of the True Spirit is really powerful. Even now, 10 years later, it is no problem to book ten thousand orders from the starting point. The world view is really well written. If you can learn from it, it will be a masterpiece easily. Nine Transformations of the True Spirit was written in an ordinary way in the early stage. It slowly unfolded from the middle stage and became more and more enjoyable in the later stage. I have read it three times and it is really good.

You wrote a protagonist who has his own power. Every time he has a secret, he has to confess to others. The golden elixir confesses to others. The Dongtian Token also has no secrets of his own. I feel that the protagonist really doesn't have any secrets of his own. Everyone knows the golden elixir exercises. They are all other people's. The protagonist's underwear is his own. Anyway, this protagonist basically has no secrets. Some secrets have to be revealed in the end. Is it better to write about casual cultivators in the future? To avoid being picked on by others all day long. Besides, why do others have to take advantage of every good deed or why do others have to know everything they do? If you have a token and sneak in, there will be some top secret realm resource points that cannot be controlled by other forces. Even if you can control them, you can't control them. All casual cultivators can enter.

Well, now that I've seen the first 10%, I feel like I'm wearing the skin of a cultivator 😐

It's a very good book, but it's not popular. I'm really afraid of eunuchs... I've been reading books for 20 years and have read all kinds of books. There are not many books that I can patiently follow chapter by chapter. It may take a long time to find one that suits my heart.

Being bullied to a higher level again and again, but no one behind the scenes helped the protagonist to stand up. As a result, he has been working hard to contribute to the alliance. Talents, and then passed them all in a careless way. Why are you selling your life? You have no weapons and no pills.

The protagonist Yuan Yi can condense elixirs, and so can Yuan Hai, but the second and third senior brothers are not enough. The contradictions behind the plot, the power of the elixir, and the characters appear enough. The author is really encouraged. I have been following this book recently. The spiritual veins of Linghua Island are not enough, which restricts the upgrading of the sect. The Yunsha sea area is still too small, and there is no backstage. It is really difficult to develop! This golden finger, sigh...

After reading Chapter 30, what is the character of the protagonist? They have traveled through time, aren't they smart and strategic? Looking at it now, I always feel that he is a big boss, very tough... Especially like a young man who will sacrifice for the sect... Has his character changed in the future? If I don't change it, I will always have the urge to abandon the book... I especially hate the protagonist who is brainless, doesn't know the strategy, and acts recklessly when encountering problems, regardless of the consequences. In the first 30 chapters, it appeared several times... Has his character changed since then?

It feels like the sect has no connection with this heavenly book. 1. I only saw that the protagonist can increase the consumable luck. No other person in the Book of Heaven can increase the consumable luck. The increase in luck becomes the protagonist's business alone 2. I didn't see the role of the sect's luck. It was just a number. I saw neither the increase for the protagonist nor the increase for the disciples So what is the use of this sect? If the protagonist only adds his own luck, will it take off long ago? There is no complementation between disciples at all. The protagonist is just a lone wolf nanny.

In order to promote the plot, there are also skills, but in the end I went to fuck a Taoist disciple of the Xianzong. As mentioned above, I was sneaky, thinking that I could hide my identity. I had no back and was a small sect wandering around, pretending to be cool everywhere. I killed the Taoist disciple of the Xianzong Yuanshen Seed and slapped the Xianzong. Where is the face of the Xianzong? Why don't you send a True Lord of more than two tribulations to kill the pig's feet directly?

The more you look at the lifespan settings, the more uncomfortable you become. Competing with the sky, each realm does not even have double the lifespan. Those who travel through the realm of cultivation must choose the world of cultivation, otherwise they will be unlucky.

Martial Arts? My understanding is that various exercises, knowledge, skills, etc. Developed based on a certain concept are valuable assets that can be passed down. The sect is the carrier of inheritance and continuity with these precious wealth. This is not the case for the sects that still exist in modern times. They trace their roots to the development and continuation of Taoism, Buddhism, Confucianism, Mohism and other ideas. Things without core concepts have long been submerged in the long river of history. Even if they are very popular at a certain stage in history, they still exist as gangs and underworld gangs, and it is difficult to reach the level of elegance. For example, the Taoist Tai Chi of Wudang has been derived from Wudang boxing, swords, body movements, etc., And various Wudang medical prescriptions, health methods, etc. An example is the seventy-two unique skills derived from the Zen concept of Songshan Shaolin, the Great Return Pill, etc. Emei Confucianism, Taoism, Buddhism and other fusion concepts are derived from swordsmanship, hidden weapon techniques, health care, and medical concepts. Others include Qingcheng, Dong Dong, etc. But without these martial arts concepts, such as Cangzhou and other places, martial arts have been reduced to gangs, gangs, and folk culture.

Brother, in the later stage, you are just fighting and killing.

The next volume recommends focusing on matters within the sect, such as how each resource point is constructed and distributed, the taxes paid by each family and island under it, and even competing for territory with the demon clan, etc.

There are too many books where 90% of the plot is about fighting and upgrading, and there are very few good sect articles. The author should not forget about sects. Fighting is for better farming and sect development. After the battle, not only write down what resources and distribution were brought back, but also how the disciples made progress with these resources, fighting -> winning -> distribution/construction/pretending/training -> the sect's strength increased greatly -> fighting again to protect the results and progress. This is a positive cycle. If you don't write about the daily life of the sect, the setting of the sect will become more vague; the more vague the setting, the less you can write about the daily life of the sect, and you can only bite the bullet and continue to let the protagonist go out and kill people. It's easy to fall into an endless loop

Both Top of the Green Lotus and Green Gourd Sword Fairy were written with millions of words in the later stages before they gradually became high-quality. You can do it too. Don't forget the advantages of the early stages.

The realms of this book include body training, meridians opening, spiritual guidance, Dao foundation (three grades of upper, middle and lower and nine levels), condensing elixir (after the Yuan Dan is completed, you need to condense the evil spirit and practice the Gang. The evil spirit is divided into upper, upper, middle and lower grades, and the Gang Qi is also divided into the top grade, upper, middle and lower). Master Dan (upper, middle and lower grades), Master Yuanying, Master Yuanshen (ordinary, one calamity, two calamities), True Lord Chunyang of three calamities, Immortal Lord (five Qi toward Yuan, three flowers gathered on top, the book has not been finished yet) Tao Lord, to be determined. Traditional realms of cultivating immortals: Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Nascent Soul, transformation into gods, return to void, integration, Mahayana, transcending tribulations and ascending (originally there is another set, which is that after reaching Nascent Soul, it is distraction, leaving the body, integrating, transcending tribulations, Mahayana, ascending to the upper realm). It can be matched one to one, and this is probably how this book is set up. If there is anything wrong, book friends please add it.

In order to promote the plot, a small number of daily details have been ignored. Important and exciting points such as farming and management cannot be missed. The results of harvesting spoils are properly arranged. The before-and-after comparison and results of farming, accumulation of mortal disciples, and growth and harvest are many exciting points. Already ordered

Will it be updated today? It won't be updated at 0:00 on June 8 😭

What about today's update? The author is great

This book has only entered its middle stage, please read more, I love reading it

Author, you can not only write fights to promote the plot, but also write a lot of content, such as training settings and magical power cultivation, cultivation of sect's evil pits, training of junior disciples as important roles, recovery or expansion of foreshadowing, etc. In the process of accumulating sect's heritage, you also need to open a map for an important introduction. The person who opens the map can be the protagonist or other supporting characters in the book, for reference only.

Author, will you make up for yesterday's chapter?