Immortal Leizu

I originally liked the setting of the five-attribute thunder method in the introduction, but I really didn't read it. The author is obviously a novice author. His writing style is mediocre and simple, the plot is very cliche, and the plug-ins are too outrageous. After reading other book reviews, I found that it is still a harem novel, so I couldn't read it anymore. If I had just read the novel, I might have been able to read it, but after more than ten years of reading, I have read too many excellent works. Reading well-written works is like tasting fine wine. After you have drunk good wine, you will not be able to drink Niulanshan again.

It took me a week to read them all, and I always wanted to write something about such a good book. On the one hand, I would prevent book lovers from missing a good book; on the other hand, I also hope that the author can get some inspiration from the book reviews and make the book more perfect. In general, although the first two hundred chapters of this book are a bit toxic, the latter part is really well written. I will not go into details about the advantages and disadvantages, but will only focus on a few points: (1) This book is good at setting, perfecting the setting problems in the Mortal Cultivation of Immortality and making new breakthroughs; it is good at describing fighting techniques, and its writing skills are first-rate. Needless to say, "Mortal" is excellent, but in fact there is a big problem with the setting. Can a person with poor qualifications get a magical weapon and turn around? This is obviously impossible. A cup is just a cup. Even if it is given an ocean, how much water can it hold? Therefore, it is somewhat unreasonable for mortals to often encounter situations in which they cross ranks to confront enemies in the later stages. This game basically uses mortals in terms of spiritual root settings, but adds spirit body, Tao body and integrity settings to perfectly solve this problem. This is like someone else being a water bottle, and the protagonist being a big water tank. If you have good qualifications, your cheating will naturally grow faster. The biggest advantage of this setting is to effectively avoid the collapse of combat power in the middle and late stages. Secondly, the protagonist's golden finger setting is clever and powerful. It is not a mindless trick, but it perfectly complements the protagonist's qualifications, has strong growth potential and is very ingenious. (2) This work has a lot of shadows of "Mortal", but it is not a second-generation work. It always makes people feel friendly and familiar. Many elements in the book are reminiscent of the legend of mortals cultivating immortals, such as the Golden Thunder Bamboo, the Blood Trial, the Firebird of Fine Flame, the Body of Five Thunders, the Hidden Thunder Spiritual Root, the Immortal Techniques Left Behind by the Jade Book, and the items left behind by the True Spirit Fighting Technique falling into the human world, etc. What I want to say is that there is nothing wrong with borrowing from these, as long as you go your own way, and obviously the author did it, and made us mere mortal book fans feel a sense of nostalgia and tribute. Of course, there are many advantages, so I won't go into details. (3) Of course, this work also has some problems just like ordinary people. What I hope the author to consider most is the exit and promotion of characters. This book, like mortals, is not a group portrait, so this issue must be considered carefully. Among Mortals, this problem was not handled well. The exit of Mo Caihuan and Mu Peiling was handled well, but the brainless promotions of Zi Ling and Yuan Yao made Han Laomo's growth look like a joke. This game also has this problem, such as Ning Shaohong, Meng Ruoqi and Liu Qinghui. These three women seem to have no role in promoting the later plot and can be considered for retirement. Meng's formation talent can be replaced by the goddess, and the protagonist is good at alchemy. Liu's double cultivation bonus is replaced by Murong Zhaoxue. Secondly, is it too fast for his peers to advance to Yuanying? Especially Ning Daozhen, this guy is no slower than the protagonist. The reincarnation of a powerful person cannot be too much. It is normal that he cannot keep up with the progress of the protagonist in the later stage. Of course, this problem is not outstanding in this work. It is recommended that the author pay attention to letting those unimportant characters exit reasonably later. In general, this book has reached its own height and is a masterpiece. I hope the author believes in his own writing power and our vision, and can keep writing.

I heard there are multiple female protagonists, I'm here to chase her 😍😍😍

I think it's pretty good and refreshing enough to have its own outline.

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The traditional Mortal Immortal Mansion Immortality, Haoyu True Immortal, and the Immortal Way that I have watched in the past few years are considered the first level, and the Leizu of Immortality, Tianhai Immortal Path, and I Find Immortality by Chance are the second level. The middle and late stages of the first gear are either eunuchs or the writing gets worse and worse. On the contrary, in the second gear, except for the poor opening rhythm, the writing gets better and better in the middle and late stages.

There are too many things that have ruined the family life. I feel that the 40-plus chapters of the Immortal Version of Siheyuan have been suppressed by various calculations. I feel that if I don't improve my strength, it will be difficult to persist until it is released on the shelves.

I can't understand it, especially in the first few chapters when the fifth elder asks the protagonist to make a furnace. The Xiu Xian family must have a pyramid structure, with a large number of middle and bottom members and a few high-level people. If the high-level people wantonly bully the middle and bottom people without any reason, what centripetal force will the middle and bottom people have? How does this family survive? Won't the middle and bottom layers run away?

In this family culture, there are too many factions in the family and everyone is in charge of their own family. Aren't you afraid that some factions will betray the family? Aren't you afraid of being destroyed by other families?

Such a big thing is hanging there, and you are still engaged in this kind of immortal cultivation that is basically impossible to upgrade without a woman's double cultivation.

I heard that the previous chapters are very selective for readers? I read Chapter 50, but I really couldn't feel the motivation to continue reading. It was too ink-filled. I checked the comments section and found that it would be after Chapter 150? If you're not the author, are you sure you won't go back and rewrite it? Also, is the genius stream forced to be written as a loser stream?

I have never seen a good movie about family cultivating immortality. In the end, I either had to be a nanny or the family became a drag.

Looking at the introduction, the other four elements of the Five Elements Divine Thunder are Gengjin and Guishui. How come it turns into warding off evil spirits when it reaches the Wood Element? I feel obsessive-compulsive disorder.

Family cultivation? All the rubbish families were wiped out, and they were all refined into human elixirs. The whole family cultivated immortality neatly, but it wasn't just the family cultivating immortality that made it so frustrating!

It makes me sick. With such a strong physique and golden fingers, are you afraid that you won't be able to develop? He was forced to become a son-in-law

Already subscribed to the latest version. When I was reading The Legend of Mortal Cultivation, one thing I particularly hated was that the girls who were described in large quantities were not accepted, so I have always hoped for a mainstream novel with multiple girls that I could read. I support the author greatly!

It's okay, but as people say, if you don't have a million words, you won't see improvement. Overall, it's okay.

The protagonist is a poor boy who has no support but the mountains and the sea.

All the female characters are attracted to the protagonist, and the more powerful characters are all female characters, or they are supporting actors who are hostile to the male protagonist. This is an old cliché that makes me sick to my stomach. Can you please stop using it?

There is nothing wrong with this book if the title is changed to Dual Cultivation of Lei Zu. The functions of spiritual roots are actually used for dual cultivation.

The first chapters were not handled well, there were too many trivial matters, but things got better later on, with the revelation of the Houtian Ji Spirit Scroll and the Great Five Elements Thunder Body in more than 40 chapters, the pattern opened up, and it had a very mortal flavor. I hope to keep it, write less family trivial matters, and write more about the main plot!

Lei Linggen is more attractive, but Feiling Gen, a genius, is still relatively fresh after watching too much. The main character's IQ fluctuates and he accepts women too casually. At the beginning, he said that he was tricked by his childhood sweetheart and the heartbroken father vomited blood and later accepted the woman and even found a plug-in to remind him to accept the woman. This place is too poisonous. Also, except for the protagonists, most of them are written about women. It feels like the protagonists are surrounded by women.

The last book I was very satisfied with was Haoyu Zhenxian. Of course, the performance of that book cannot be compared with this one. The author is not a human being. He ran away after making money. The last dozens of chapters were eunuchs 😁😁

I have read more than 700 chapters without realizing it, and the overall feeling is very good. The author's thinking is unconstrained, creative and imaginative. Except for some flaws in the early stage, the overall layout is still very good. It advances layer by layer, and the map switching is in place naturally. The plot is well grasped, and it is both enjoyable and painful to read. The characterization is relatively detailed, and each character seems to have a distinct personality. I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on, come on, come on!

After watching it, the overall feeling is pretty good, and it has its own characteristics compared to ordinary people. It's just that the author's memory is not good, the protagonist and supporting characters are almost the same, comparable to a certain person in terms of combat power, and the combat power is a bit confusing. The points for improving the plug-in in Jiulonghai are unreasonable. Not only the Nascent Soul, but also the Core Formation stage can be obtained if the realm is high. I didn't participate in the war between the human race and the sea race. Isn't it the same as taking part in a large area? And there are not many points. The bloodline in the harem in the front is strong but incomplete. When you come back, you will have no points and no traceability. I hope you can put this plug-in to good use. Since the protagonist's spiritual body is very powerful, he should be able to kill across large realms, but in the previous stages, he only exaggerated his invincibility in realms. Overall it's pretty good, good luck to the author!

It's finally on the list. It's a very good Mortal series. The pacing of the first 100 or so chapters is a bit slow. The more I write in the later stages, the better it gets. It's one of the best among the Mortal series being serialized.

If the family plot in the early stage could be streamlined, it is estimated that the performance of this book will be better. Unfortunately, there is no one to talk about the plot and setting later 😅

Of the 100 chapters, 80 are on women

This book feels underrated. The three basic modes of immortality novels are family (the Ning family plot at the beginning), sect (the Yuzong in the middle), and lone wolf (currently the Nine Dragons Sea). The author has written them well and keeps readers fresh. Some people may not be able to stand the first few chapters, but stick to it. It's still good to watch. The protagonist is a rare thunder type. There is one problem. The protagonist keeps upgrading later. Regarding the lifespan of his harem, most of them have the most golden elixirs. There are only a few possibilities for Nascent Soul. It's okay if all the harems are upgraded, but it's a bit naive.

This book should encourage the harem of mortals to have abortions, for no other reason. Nowadays, mortal abortions basically have no female protagonists, and it is rare to change the taste. It is a pity that the author writes too many female protagonists. I heard from others that there is a possibility of missing a daughter... I can only say to be cautious before entering.