Starting from Searching for Spiritual Veins and Establishing a Sect to Cultivate Immortality

The first 20% are pretty good, at least they are grass jelly, but things start to go wrong later on. . . . . . Especially when the author wanted to highlight the protagonist's feelings towards the sect and other people's feelings towards the sect, it was a complete mess. . . . There are four reasons: 1. Although the Xuanguang faction pursued the Yunshan faction because they escaped before the battle, Feng Zhenren did it because the protagonist insulted him in public, and according to the fact that Feng Zhenren would rather not fight with Mo Shen and chase the skeleton, the protagonist should have died on the spot at that time. How much shame can he still fly away? Yiguang didn't start a fight with Zhenren Feng at that time? The author insists on defending, regardless of logic 2. The conflicts are rigid. The author of Han and Wen wants to create a character with deep love. However, when Han and Wen want to take back the Shahe Gang, they would rather have a deadly feud with the protagonist than try it out. I think the author has created him into a character like Tang San, regardless of the author. How much the author described how he fell in love with his partner, but what the author directly presented is that he used his wits to attack without any temptation. First, he definitely couldn't kill Elder Gu, which is completely certain. Second, under the first premise, it means that he offended four Zhuji who had no worries at the same time. The reason is just because He doesn't want to share the spirit stone mine with the protagonist, which is completely contrary to his most fundamental desire: to save his wife's life, so the conflict is too rigid and even unreasonable 3. The deus ex machina solves the writing problem, under the influence of the previous two major poisonous points, or in other words, the author's unlimited desire to create a protagonist who values friendship and wisdom. Under the delusion of a little war, and at the same time directly reducing the subjective initiative of the supporting characters around the protagonist, the author solved the conflict twice by mechanical deity in a row. The first time was to directly write the beads to Wu Yan, making the protagonist and the real person Jin Dan directly hostile, and the winner was obtained. Why didn't you just write that the protagonist was promoted to the real person Yuanshen? The second deus ex machina was to prevent the protagonist from directly exposing the beads to the broad field of vision. Another one suddenly appeared, Zangfeng Zhenren, who was not mentioned before, and forcibly saved the protagonist. Note that I am not talking about whether the author dug a hole or whether there was any explanation later. I am talking about the lack of foreshadowing for such a character. It is unreasonable to show it directly, and it is full of excessive coincidences, which greatly affects the logic of the article 4. In order to highlight The protagonist, his harem, and other members of the Yunshan sect are either stereotyped or pig-farming. The ones that impressed me the most were actually Zhang Lemei and Jiang Baitao, whom I hate the most. In order to portray the protagonist, a lot of unreasonable coincidences were arranged, which also greatly reduced the ability of other people in the protagonist's sect. The main character is one, and everyone else is a pig. The protagonist will be taken away when the time comes. This is unreasonable, especially for the description of Yang Jiye and others. There is only one word to describe it. Rong, he is not qualified, he panics when things happen, and when he does something wrong, he just thinks that the protagonist can wipe his ass, and then further causes the plot logic to collapse. The protagonist is a firefighter, and he cannot be saved, which leads to a very bad impression later on, as well as some disgusting behaviors of other characters that are not important, such as the guy who practices Mei Gong. This is not how I wrote about the harem, it makes it look like the author has no emotional experience Summary: This book collapsed, and the back part is really dull, because it is originally a farming type, and the adventure in the front is to avoid taking risks later. The small characters do not have the ability to directly intervene in the current situation. If it is forced many times, and the author wants the logic to be complete, there will only be one result - the sect falls apart. The protagonist may or may not be able to escape.

This book has gone through ups and downs in reality, including name changes and various requests for leave, but the author persevered and the updates were basically maintained. I was very moved and continued to update. From the content point of view, when the protagonist is weak in the early stage, he is very eye-catching when he is moving around in the small map. He develops power, improves strength, expands territories, inherits disciples, accumulates heritage, etc. It can be said that it is very rich, and there is no boring single-threaded development. At the same time, the different characters are also well written. They are not simple tool men. It's because of the decline in writing skills or lack of brains. It's just that the accumulation process is really the same, which feels like a flaw in this kind of book. Fortunately, the author doesn't make a running account or make a rocket breakthrough. The jumping timeline alleviates these problems, making it easier to read. The hidden thread gradually emerges later, and the protagonist's power level rises. The layout is still maintained. It feels that there should be a relatively complete setting system and a relatively complete outline. I feel that this is the strong attraction of this book to me. In addition, the development of power involves cooperative games with various enemies, friends, and enemies, etc., Which requires solid writing skills and rigorous and exquisite layout. Overall, I felt that I read it very well and liked this book. I feel like the author has a lot of hard work. He is very busy in real life. It is not easy to keep updated. I hope I can maintain this quality of writing.

I have been reading it for a week and have been reading the latest one. I think it is an excellent "food" book and I would like to briefly share my reading experience with my book friends. 1. First of all, the writing skills of this novel should be able to meet the reading needs of most book lovers, and the narrative is also relatively comfortable. 2. Secondly, this novel is the only one among the novels I have read in the past six months, in which the protagonist has a positive outlook and most of the supporting characters are also "normal people". 3. The plot is more traditional fairy tale, the protagonist is relatively smooth sailing, and there are not many depressing plots. It feels more relaxing to read. 4. Personally, I think that the connection of the plot is a bit abrupt, and the foreshadowing is not natural and sufficient. I think this also leads to a lot of plot settings that are not rigorous enough. This has a greater impact on my reading experience. 5. This is a sect novel, but I personally feel that the author's description of the sect's internal affairs is not adequate, which makes me not have a deep memory of the characters within the sect. The author prefers to use large "announcements" to summarize the current status of the sect. This can make up for the above problems and is acceptable to me. Different people have different opinions. In general, I think this is a traditional fairy tale sect novel that is worth a try for book friends who like this genre. I also want to thank the author "Reverse Version" for writing such a positive character that made me willing to empathize with him. The experience was quite good. I hope the author can write better and better, and I sincerely wish that the author's novels can be read by more people.

I really like this kind of emotional and warm book. Nowadays, many fairy tales are written very bluntly. The whole text is just "the weak and the strong" and nothing else. It seems that this can make it appear real and boring. This article is different. I decided to follow Xuan Jizi when he appeared. There are bad people in the world but there are also good people. The main theme between countries and sects is cold profit first, but there is always warmth between people. The setting of Thirty-Three Heavenly Lord is also very interesting. I hope the author can grasp the rhythm of the subsequent plot.

(There will be spoilers below. It was written when nearly 600 chapters were written. Order all) It took me three or four days to read the updated part, and I couldn't help but write down my thoughts on this book. The main advantage of this book is the shaping of the characters. Characters, especially the protagonist, are not perfect people, but flesh and blood people with their own thoughts and shortcomings. For example, the protagonist has the top IQ and top combat power in his sect; but at the same time, his education is in a mess, and he will also be dissatisfied and angry because he did not get any benefits (the scene where Jin Dan meets Mrs. Ji again actually had a bad impression, but it was still acceptable). Then the setting and description of the battle are also good. The setting can basically be justified at present; the combat part may be because the protagonist group is more difficult to fight, but the author's description can make people more involved and nervous for the protagonist group. As for this book, after reading it, I feel that there are/may be two problems in the future. One is that the emotional scenes are relatively dull. For example, from the perspective of a bystander, the emotional drama of the senior sister is the emotions that naturally arise from the long-term hardships of life and death. But except for the beginning, there are not many plots and perceptions of life and death in the novel. The role of senior sister is mainly a companion + assistant. The two of them together are not obtrusive, but just... Bland. This is especially true for Nishang. After staying in the sect for a long time and doing more things together, the favorability level will be full. Abrupt, you say? It doesn't seem to be the case; but it doesn't seem possible to let readers "knock" them both. At present, Mrs. Ji may be the next one, and the emotional description is more delicate, so it should get better and better in the future. Another point is that I am more worried about as a reader, but it has not happened yet: the author cannot grasp the development of the plot. From the beginning, the foundation was built as a regional mini-boss, and the golden elixir was unattainable and ruled a county; now, several continents + fairy islands, alien races + true immortals are spread out. I'm more worried that the author will collapse in the future, and there will be a situation where Yuanying is everywhere and there are as many golden elixirs as dogs. But for now, except for the routine cheating on the protagonist in the fairy tale, there are no other problems. To summarize: The current part is a good novel. The author writes it according to the current state, and the future is promising.

After seeing the part about establishing a sect, I feel that the part about counting the sect's inventory is really meaningless. Who can develop a sect through serious management? According to the model of this book, if a weapon-refining sect uses one hundred thousand spiritual stones to earn one million spiritual stones, it is better to use one hundred thousand spiritual stones to build a foundation and directly achieve a class leap. The same goes for the protagonist. I feel that spending so much time planning the future of the sect and formulating training plans is putting the cart before the horse. It is better to seize the time to build the foundation and establish a firm foothold first. He was compiling the sect rules in detail and compiling the teaching materials with some uncertainty, as if he was sure that his Qi Refining Sect would be able to inherit and thrive for thousands of generations The power belongs to his own world, and it is useful for the sect to collect resources, but as soon as the protagonist introduces Qi Refining, he hurriedly reestablishes the sect and wants to claim the sect as the ancestor. Without a God's perspective, it is not an exaggeration to say that the fight between the two Jindan sects may not be able to handle it, or even if other foundation-building sects come to test it, if the land is simply circled for the sake of spiritual veins, there will be no sects to care about, freedom of movement, and escape at any time when something goes wrong. According to the protagonist's own words, everyone must save the land and lose the land. If this world is a pattern where large sects occupy the center and small sects divide the remaining residue, then it is reasonable to establish sects early to seize resources and seek development. But with this model of big fish eating small fish and small fish eating shrimps, isn't establishing small sects proactively jumping on the chessboard to serve as pawns for others? The fate of the two affiliated Qi refining sects of Chaosheng sect is right in front of us.

The writing is pretty good, but the main character keeps fighting like a cultivator and hegemony style, and I feel like I have no desire to pursue it.

Lu Qian, the head disciple of the Yunshan Sect, took over as the head of the Yunshan School in a critical situation, but he had no talent or virtue and lost all the people's hearts. How can the male protagonist regain people's hearts after traveling through time, save his senior sister, break through the crisis, cultivate in hiding, and revive the sect? This is the story of a small leader of a dilapidated sect leading the sect to grow. [Work information]: [Book title]: The journey of the leader [Author]: Mengchaosheng [Label]: The leader, Xianxia, Calm [Status]: Serializing [Recommendation Index]: 🌟🌟🌟🌟 [Brief Description of the Work]: How to become a successful leader? The first step is to regain the hearts of the people. Senior sister, junior sister, and I, the only three people left in the sect, how will we escape the perilous pursuit and revive the sect's glory? When it comes to Zhangmen Liu, the one that everyone is most familiar with is "The Road to the Leader of the Cultivation Sect", and this book is not bad at all. If the plot develops normally, it can be used as a meal replacement for the Zhangmen Road. [Reason for recommendation]: 1. The writing is sophisticated, the writing style is very suitable for the fairy tale genre, and the storyline is compact, reasonable and fascinating. The title is chosen as the leader style, which is relatively rare among the ordinary people. In the future, it may also develop into a group portrait article. Judging from the writing level of the current chapters, it seems like a boss's vest. 2. The protagonist's character is likeable. The protagonist is a modern corporate executive who traveled through time. He has been in the workplace for a long time and is familiar with human nature. He is resourceful and decisive, mature and calm. At the beginning of the chapter, he uses his resourcefulness to kill powerful enemies despite being seriously injured. There should be a lot of wits scenes in the future. If a protagonist with a strategic background serves as the leader, he will definitely give a wonderful performance. 3. The characters are well-drawn and the IQ is online. There are currently two teammates at the beginning of the chapter, one is a senior sister (suspected to be the heroine?) And the other is a 6-year-old junior sister. The portrayals are all successful and vivid. The senior sister is soft yet strong, thoughtful and courageous, and the little junior sister is lively and cute, which is very bright. In particular, the change of the senior sister's attitude towards the protagonist is very natural, which further demonstrates the author's skill and makes people look forward to the subsequent development. Even the portrayal of the enemy is very vivid and vivid, and you will not fall into the trap without thinking. Recommended Group: 💕Readers who like the leader stream; 💞Readers who like smart protagonists. [Similar Recommendation]: "The Road to the Master of the Cultivation Sect" p. S. Everyone, please like and comment🌹🌹. If I continue to read in the future, I will post my latest reading experience in the comment area ~ You are also welcome to leave your comments on this post Our reading experience~give a fair reference to future friends~ {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

It's not easy to write a novel about power development. Good luck, author! I have read about two hundred chapters so far. The characters have distinct personalities and online IQs. It is the kind of novel about a master class that I want to read. Come on, author, I hope this book will take over the title of "The Road to the Master of the Cultivation Sect" and become the first-class fairy tale novel about the master.

The sun sets and rises again, autumn goes and returns, and the world is always reincarnated. There was light rain outside the window of the thatched house, like pearls in the curtain, and like tulle, the whole village seemed foggy "Alas." Feng Feng, who was only ten years old, sat by the window, looking outside, tears falling uncontrollably. He was originally a mortal in the city, and his father was a slave in a wealthy family in the city. He specially selected birds for the wealthy families and took good care of them. Unexpectedly, his father accidentally let go of a precious bird that was loved by the eldest son of a wealthy family. When the eldest son was furious, his father was beaten to death with sticks, and his mother was also snatched away by the eldest son. She was tied up by several dog-raising servants and sold to human traffickers. He slept in a dark and damp cave, was beaten and scolded by traffickers day and night, and endured hardships. Finally, with Feng Feng's struggle and resistance, he finally found the opportunity, fled all the way, and finally passed out at the entrance of a village. At that time, the old man at the entrance of the village was coming back from the fields. Seeing that Feng Feng was pitiful, he felt pity and rescued him home. It had been three days. The old man's wife has passed away, and he has only one son who is nearly thirty years old at home. He has no wife and no children. He is arrogant and domineering in the village and often beats and scolds his father. Feng Feng stayed here for three days, and was beaten with bruises and bruises by that bastard. He was no more capable than a trafficker. I'm afraid if he stayed here any longer, his own life would not be saved, so there was no talk of revenge. What's more, even if he survives, the gangster will sell him to human traffickers sooner or later. At this time, the door of the house opened wide, and the old man's son was drunk and staggering towards Feng Feng. "You bastard! How long are you going to eat and drink?" The old man's son looked ferocious. Without saying a word, he grabbed Feng Feng with his left hand and waved his rough right hand. Feng Feng had no time to dodge and was knocked down by him. Feng Feng couldn't help but see stars in his eyes, blood was left from the corners of his mouth, and the three teeth in his mouth were missing. At this moment, the old man came out of the back room with a bowl of hot noodles in his hand. When he saw his son beating and scolding Feng Feng, he didn't care about anything else, so he came to stop him. "Evil son!" The old man was no match for his son. He was knocked down with one slap. "You old fool, how dare you talk to me like this, huh?" The old man's son was drunk and crazy, punching and kicking his father. Feng Feng was furious, thinking that sooner or later he would be beaten to death by this drunkard. He thought that he was on the run, so he felt furious, ran into the kitchen without looking back, and took out a kitchen knife. Without any hesitation, he exploded with all his strength, jumped up suddenly, and struck the old man's son hard on the neck! Immediately blood splattered everywhere and couldn't stop pouring out. The old man's son fell to the ground with a "plop". "My son!" The old man stared in panic, his muscles stiffened, and he cried bitterly while holding his son's body, ignoring the pain in his body. Feng Feng's stomach was churning, his hands couldn't stop trembling, and his whole body was actually a little... Excited! Feng Feng saw the hatred for him in the old man's eyes and knew that there was no place for him here anymore, so he dropped the kitchen knife and ran out without looking back. He ran aimlessly, letting the rain soak him, and some of the blood on his body was washed away. He didn't know how many hours he had been running. He only knew that he was almost exhausted. The rain was getting lighter. The raindrops were not heavy, but they hit his body very painfully. There was no regret, no panic. The first time he killed someone, he just felt sick, but soon, he calmed down. "I still have a deep hatred to avenge, but I just killed one person." The thoughts in his mind gradually spread, and he couldn't help but think of the scene where he killed all the enemies who killed his father. He felt happy in his heart, like a bird escaping from the cage, spreading its wings and soaring. Unknowingly, Feng Feng ran to the top of a mountain, where the clouds and mountains were green and misty and rainy. The billowing white mist silently embraced the beautiful mountain peaks, and the continuous mountains turned into a light blend of ink. At this time, he was in a good mood after seeing such beautiful scenery, and he went straight into the mountain. Entering the mountains, listening to the gurgling streams in the deep valleys, the chirping of insects and the chirping of birds, it feels like you have arrived at the abode of gods. Feng Feng stopped running and walked slowly. A green water stream appeared vaguely in the clouds and mist in the distance. "What a deep river?" Feng Feng asked doubtfully. He lifted up his trouser legs and was about to borrow some water from the stream to wash away the blood. Unexpectedly, the sole of my foot slipped and flowed down the river, straight into the deep water. When Feng Feng woke up, he found that he was in a cave deep in the water. The cave is spacious and quiet, the luminous crystal stones shimmer with light, and the sunlight shines through the cracks. Feng Feng carefully explored the cave and suddenly discovered that a body was left here. Feng Feng was shocked. All that was left of this man was his rotten bones, and his clothes were torn. Only a small golden bag was intact. He picked up the bag, but found that he couldn't open it. He looked up and found a series of cold words carved on the stone wall. "Xuanguang Sanren? Qi training monk! Immortal cultivation technique!?" Feng Feng stared at the stone wall in front of him, excitedly and greedily learning about the past and inheritance of the immortal cultivator...

The quality of the content is excellent, and it can be seen that the author is very good. The training system, the description of single group battles, the portrayal of supporting characters, war strategies, interpersonal interactions, sect management, etc. Are all very good. Give me an example. In terms of character portrayal, Zhang Lemei's character is selfish, stingy, ignorant of the general situation, and has a strong desire to control. This became more prominent after Tan Hong's death, which directly created Tan Yunxing's cowardly character who was excessively eager for attention, paving the way for him to ignore the consequences, forcefully build a foundation, and go astray. In addition, the portrayals of Lin Le, Wu Yan, Jiang Baitao and others are also vivid and vivid. Another example is the battle plot design of "one wrong move and the whole game is lost". During the planning of the battle for the innate spiritual energy of the Chongming Alliance, the Chongming Alliance suddenly escaped after being warned by Kan Yuanzi. The banning plan had to be advanced, and the God of Joy bottle merged before it was filled. As a result, the Wanling Curse Fetus could not reach the consummation of the soul, making it difficult for the Cangzhou side to support it. In the end, Lu Gan found an opportunity and released the immortal urn, reversing the situation. In addition, in terms of character relationships, the protagonist has been interacting with higher-level monks. Before Lu Gan could reach the golden elixir, he was already involved in the game between the Xuanwei Sect, the Taiyi Paradise, and the Thirty-Three Heavenly Lords of Yuanshen and above. Compared to the protagonist reaching a certain rank and being targeted by enemies just one rank higher, this writing method is undoubtedly more complex and rich. Contradictions are intertwined and foreshadowing is deeply buried. The reasons for getting the opportunity are also more sufficient (such as Lu Gan's golden branch), which is much better than cheating directly. Another example is the dialogue content that hides mysteries. ("Yes, King Ming." Lu Gan smiled, "Then let me ask you! You ban sects respect King Ming, and you always mention King Ming in your words, but why, when it comes to tokens, you subconsciously say that this is the token of the Lord of Curse Kingdom, and never say that it is the token of King Ming?!") If you don't think carefully, it is easy to overlook the meaning, let alone the author's ability to present it, which is evident. The exercise system is also rigorous and rich. ("What monks seek from practicing Qi to the end of Nascent Soul is to unite their lives and souls, to re-integrate the originally separated heart breaths and dispersed spirit energy, to return to the innate state from the day after tomorrow, to understand the way of heaven in a pure and dust-free state, and to continue climbing upward.") The author combines Taoist theory and has his own rigorous cultivation system, which is transformed into a power system such as Taoist patterns, magical powers, etc. And there are many types, such as Lin Le's Ten Thousand Methods and Wu Yan's Space, which are all methods that are not weaker than the protagonist's. There are also magical powers such as "Zi Feng" and "Xuanque Toad Palace", which have various fighting methods and unique effects. The names of the techniques are quite foreign, such as "Taibai Fu Bo Lian Guang Zhen Jue", "Tai Shang Yuan Ling Zhen Hai Xuan Kung", "Eight-Armed God Capturing the Dragon Technique", "Four More Stars Mingzhao Divine Sword Zhen Jue"... There are many more. It can be said that the protagonist of this book has an above-average IQ, is decent and shrewd in his conduct, and the plot is also exciting and ups and downs. Personally I still prefer it. I just don't know why it's not popular...

Book review: I personally think this book has exceeded the speed of many so-called great gods. It has reasonable logic and exquisite writing. It is really rare to see some different ideas on the basis of the traditional fairy tale. Stick with it. Even if the update is not timely, we will always be there and never leave.

First of all, I would like to thank the author for his great commitment. I have been chasing the latest Lu Qian Jin Dan from more than 200 pictures. I probably have some guesses about the subsequent plot. I don't know if it will be the same as what the author will write in the future. I am looking forward to it. Let me talk about my feelings about reading. I read more than 300 chapters in one breath. It is definitely much better than waiting for one chapter every day. However, there will always be incoherence in the plot and forgetting the previous chapters. I understand that the author is not a full-time writer and the word count is really a problem, but I also want to talk about some small suggestions. The plot of Zhangmenliu is a bit slow. The main reason is that the irrelevant supporting characters are a bit too much. To be honest, several characters are really unlikable and have persuaded many people to quit. Maybe they will leave before the change that everyone knows. Also, I finally let out a breath after watching Tigers Roaming Together. It was so depressing! ! This is also the possibility of not being able to subscribe. In the fast-paced life, everyone wants to watch something warm and relaxing. It is analogous to the plot of My Immortal Simulation, which is mainly about planning. The plot has twists and turns. It is really good to read and write. Unfortunately, the follow-up has not been high and the ranking is not high. I think it is because it is too dark and too slow. The protagonist of our book starts from the time of destruction, constantly expands territory, and deals with major forces. I understand that the author wants to express the difficulty of the protagonist, but there are some plots, such as the protagonist participating in a soul-level event just by building a foundation. The author is currently only focusing on Cangzhou, but has already vaguely revealed a large world view. There are various other races that he has not dealt with. After the ascension, there should be a duel with the upper world. It seems to take a long time to write. But judging from the current rhythm, there are too many words and inks in the previous foundation building, which is too difficult, and the subsequent golden elixirs seem to gush out. The overall reading seems to be fragmented. I don't know if other readers have similar views. Wu Yantian's spiritual roots are exposed, and the subsequent road should not be easy. Yunshan Sect wants to ascend to Nascent Soul. The sect is bound to die a lot, and they are fighting each other. Maybe the first sacrifice is Lin Le (?). If the writing is too tragic, I would actually be happy to see it. There must be sacrifices in the war, but some readers are not happy. Zhang Lemei, who has been jumping around, is not dead yet, and the pillars of the sect are being sent forward with bang bang, which is not good. I think the author can gradually improve the remaining minor problems. It can be seen that the writing is more concise in the later part. However, the planning of this book is not too outstanding. Generally speaking, the protagonist speaks one word, and the others are like Wang Yu and Nishang. , The plot may not have developed yet. Wu Yan is just a talented disciple who only knows how to practice. She always follows the protagonist like a thug and cannot see growth. Growth is not a sentence or two, but the ability to plan independently. I hope that the subsequent plot can be better reflected. In general, I have said so much because I like this book and affirm the author's ability. I read it for more than 20 hours. I liked it very much as I continued reading, and I also saw the author's progress. Come on!

I started reading it from the title of the book or Journey to the Master. I recharged for this book for the first time. It has become my favorite book in the past six months. The story is wonderful, the characters are vividly portrayed, Lu Qian's wisdom and calmness, Wang Yu's selflessness, Elder Gu's bravery, etc. Also witness the growth of everyone in Yunshan. I know that the author is busy with work, writing books part-time, and also taking care of his family. Life is not easy. Please support him and encourage him. I hope the author will continue the Yunshan story and your book fans will push you on the road to success. Come on!

As an old bookworm, I really can't read Xiaobai's article, so I came here specifically to support it.

Advantages: 1. The writing style is smooth and natural, the writing power is clearly strong, the transitions are natural and there is no sense of sluggishness, and the plot and story are not conventional.          2，，，                                                                                                                                                                                                                       The character creation is very good, each character is vivid and vivid, there is no inexplicable behavior, and there is no plot to force wisdom. Each character has his own joys, sorrows, joys and sorrows. Disadvantages: 1. Generally speaking, it is a sect of cultivating immortals. The structure of the sect is very good and smooth, but it is slightly lacking in cultivating immortals and is a bit weak.          2，，，， The level of a sect is determined by the highest level in the sect, so as the leader, Lu Gan must cultivate faster.

This book is the best sect novel I have read in recent years. From the early stage of changing maps to seek a place to establish oneself, to the development in Cangzhou, there are also interspersed with the plot of Tianjun to provide some cheats and prevent the pure development content from being too boring. It has always been very attractive. The author is probably also a pen writer, I hope you will not stop updating it! I will also try my best to recommend it to book friends🥺

It is a book that I have been reading, and the writing is still above the middle level. It can be regarded as a good source of information.

I have been following up all the way until now, and I have reached more than 500 chapters before I know it 🙂. Personally, I think it suits my taste very well. The protagonist has a clear goal and the main plot is clear. At the same time, as the Yunshan sect continues to develop and expand, the world view is also being expanded accordingly. It will not lose the setting and structure at the beginning. It is just like writing a thesis 🤤 and is partial to group dramas. Personally, I think the character creation is quite good (the level of appreciation is limited) , old book friends are welcome to comment) The emotional aspect is also handled quite well. The protagonist is not a career maniac, but also has warmth and temperament. He dares to love, act, and be responsible, and there is no annoying plot of stock trading party disputes (I feel that there are many books without female protagonists and stock trading at Qidian 🤤). Personally, I feel that the rhythm and content are pretty good, the details are moderate, each event does not require the protagonist to rush into the scene, and the daily life is not too trivial (I personally don't think it is superficial 😟). Come on, author, please update. Lack of updates is a sin. If you have the opportunity to interact more with book friends in the comment area, I see that there are several old bookworms who are very serious about analyzing and predicting the plot. If you can continue to maintain this level, I will definitely order it all. I wish you to become an excellent author, create more and better works, and change from writing books part-time to enjoying writing books.

🙂I really want a title

The setting of this book is novel, the plot is full of surprises, the writing is exquisite and exciting, and many details are outlined, which can show the style of the world of cultivation. Perhaps due to the update, when the author writes about the development of the sect, he may be criticized by book friends when summarizing it. However, this kind of supplement can often fully outline the development of the sect. In terms of plot, the protagonist is often far removed from others but participates in it, which feels a bit awkward. After all, strength in the world of cultivation is still very important. This is also a question that many book friends have, and the author also explained it. ...... That's it.

Book Review The Forty-second Heavenly Lord Granted Me Five Colors of Divine Light

I have read a lot of immortality and fantasy novels, and the sect/family genre is my favorite category. However, previous novels of this kind would fall into the dilemma of a running account in the later stages of writing. Of course, this is understandable. In the early stage, the protagonist's level is low, and the description of fighting and war scenes is sufficient. In the later stage, when the level of the protagonist increases, these scenes will be difficult to control. This novel has been written so far. The author's writing and conception skills are quite strong, and the character creation is also very good. The personality is three-dimensional and there are no characters of the same type. Come on, author😊

Book Review This is a good book

Hahahaha I still like the original title () I found this book by following the original title two weeks ago 😭😭 I feel like I won't find this book after the change🥲

If you are still sticking to it, please support the author.

The group portraits are well written, and it's rare to find someone who wants to read more after following the updates for a while.

The number of monthly tickets is obviously not worthy of the author's strength. Please support me

The author's writing style is very sophisticated, not like a newcomer, but the pace is a bit slow.

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