The Ex-Wife Is the Main Villain

I have read two books by the author, one by Li Nanke and one by this one. Let's talk about it first: The author's advantages are obvious. The case is well written. 1. The detective and suspense plots are very detailed, the logic is good, and there are plots. The detective plot is very comfortable to watch (the crazy ambush plot is disgusting. I will explain why later). 2. The love story between men and women is very sweet, and the writing is relatively slow. It has a sense of daily life and is very comfortable to read. I can't say what's next: In fact, I just write pure cool articles, but the author seems to feel that he is not just writing cool articles, so this kind of conflict makes readers feel very awkward and uncomfortable; 1. The protagonist must have an invincible cheat by his side. But I just don't let the protagonist and readers know what it is, and then go crazy and crazy with foreshadowing and foreshadowing (you can know the main plot after reading dozens of chapters, but it's just a foreshadowing. Do you think it's annoying or not)? It is obviously a cool article, but it disgusts the readers like this (magical writing method) 2. Tell me why it is a cool article: 1. It is an absolute harem cool article. It indicates which women are in the harem and there are many of them. 2. These female protagonists are all top-ranked masters in the world regardless of their age, but almost all the training content in the whole text is mentioned in one sentence. Unfortunately, the protagonist is a super weak chicken starting from 0 at the beginning. 3. The heroine is exaggerated in the article, but the inner character cannot be written clearly. Her cultivation and personality are very strong and special when she appears for the first time, but only for the first time. The rest are just to demolish the first time. There may also be inconsistent conflicts. The inner nature of the female character cannot be sustained at all. The writing is not deep, but there are many female characters. 4. The fact that the heroine falls in love with the protagonist is obviously not written anything. The heroine starts to add her own drama, and then the heroine falls in love with the hero to death. . . 5. The protagonist himself is actually an empty shell. He has never thought about what he wants to do or what he wants. There is no main line, but the protagonist is just a puppet being pushed along according to the main line. Except for thinking about the main line case, his brain is empty. I personally suggest that the author distinguishes his own strengths and understands that what he is writing is a cool article. I believe there will be great progress

The characters in this book are too childish, and both the dialogue and behavior lack the stability and dignity of an adult. The villains in the article are also extremely stereotyped, and the villains are all lustful, which makes people speechless. As villains, they can have clown characters and brainless designs, but they cannot talk about men and women (this is not only true for villains, but also for decent and lack of stance) Almost all of them are about having weekends all day long, love, desire), whether the villain can do something big, whether he can be successful, and opposing the male protagonist all day long, but the key point is that many times the conflicts arise inexplicably, and they are basically related to the women around the male protagonist. Regarding the female protagonists, as mentioned before, the characterization is very childish. Let me first talk about how the female protagonists fell in love with the male protagonists. It was really unexpected. Basically, except for a few big female protagonists, the younger female protagonists only fell in love with each other in one or two chapters. I really doubt that some female protagonists just like the male protagonist's appearance. After a simple contact, if something unexpected happens, such as physical contact or doing something like that, the relationship will come naturally. , The young female protagonist fell in love directly, but the male protagonist still had to hold on for a while, "Ah, I am a gentleman. We have known each other for too short a time, and our relationship needs to settle. Of course, if you really insist on me, I am not unable to accept it, but you must consider that I have many women, and you must be mentally prepared, but you are definitely very important in my heart." This process creates an image of a deeply affectionate (playful hypocrite). Although some heroines can only be regarded as supporting roles, the formation of a relationship is really not that simple. If you think there are too many female protagonists and the emotional scenes are too long, there is really no need to write so many female protagonists. No one is forcing you to write. If you want to write, write it seriously. Let's talk about the eldest heroine. The eldest heroine is nothing more than dye, red, and calendar, because most of them haven't written about the romance. Although the relationship process is more complicated than that of the little heroine, it is really embarrassing. I didn't see the Shura field that I really wanted to see. What I saw was a few elementary school students fighting over who is more powerful and who is older. Then there is the drama of tearing clothes and pieces of cloth. The character's language style is very like that of a primary school student. While watching the movie, I felt that the writing of the heroine Ran was very awkward. Sometimes I wanted to portray her as aloof, sometimes she was portrayed as tsundere, and sometimes she clearly didn't pay attention to feelings, and she often went crazy and cared about the male protagonist everywhere. As for Hong, I originally thought that as the leader of the demon world, Hong, not to mention being domineering and heroic, must have some authority so that he can lead his men to do big things. But after looking at it later, I found that she is just a simple little girl, and I don't know how she became the leader of the demon clan. All day long, I was thinking about brother Xiao Jiang, and then I was entangled with Ran, either competing or worshiping. There was no sense of strategizing like a sect leader. As the male protagonist's boss, Li is the author's classic XP. He has had a good impression of the male protagonist since he appeared, caring for and protecting him everywhere. But where does this good feeling come from? I don't understand. The male protagonist traveled through time and only lived with Ye Hehong and Nightingale for a while. Time, not long after that, I joined Six Door Dark Light. I can't remember how long I joined. I just remember that it wasn't long. That Li's good impression came out of nowhere. I seriously doubt that Li likes the male protagonist purely because the male protagonist is handsome, otherwise there is no reason. I won't talk about some of the female protagonists who will be given away for free in the future. The implication is very obvious that the male protagonist basically did nothing, and the female protagonists rushed PUA to deliver it themselves.                                             The world view of the plot at the beginning of this book really surprised me. I thought it was a magnificent production. However, from the perspective of each character, I felt that the previous judgment was a bit arbitrary. After all, I have subscribed so much and spent money, but I still hope to read good-quality novels, especially now that there are few novels of this type, so I'll just make do with it.

The rhythm of this book is very strange. Apart from other things, if you like this kind of daily life and detectives, and downplay the level, there is no need for so many plots of bitterness and hatred. In the beginning, the Supreme Bone is taken away, and the wife is killed, etc. The style of the game doesn't match at all. If it weren't for those messy things, the male protagonist would actually be quite happy. It feels like there's something stuck in his throat, and every chapter feels like he's getting deflated.

I don't know why the whole plot is suppressing the male protagonist, and any male supporting character will covet a certain female protagonist, but the male protagonist is not strong enough. Although there is no obvious poisonous point, it just feels like a stalemate and useless, and it doesn't have the feeling of a refreshing novel. Especially the first volume, I almost couldn't watch it anymore. Since everyone is reading a story with multiple female protagonists, they must be watching the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists. Every time the writing is sadistic, why not write it sweeter?

The look and feel is getting more and more confusing, there are more and more pitfalls, and the protagonist's personality is too different from the previous one, which was more calm, and now it's getting weirder and weirder (too much contrast? It feels a bit like a gangster?). I really don't know how to like the character Miaomiao, maybe It's my own viewing problem. The relationship between Hong and Ran's good sisters actually depends on his previous work (Li Nanke and the Princess). I really didn't expect it. At present, the best one is the 4 sisters. I plan to keep it for a while 🙂 Of course, I will still subscribe.

Come on, author, book friends all say that the author is very handsome, and I think so too. 😁

The plot has really fallen apart recently🙀 The wedding scene felt a bit disgusting. As a sect leader, Hong doesn't even try to disguise himself when he comes to the enemy's base camp (the capital)? Being recognized so easily... Then Xiao Jiang was also a mystery. He didn't explain anything to Ran and ran away with another woman on the wedding day? As the protagonist, wouldn't it be a bit disgusting for readers to do this? Leaving a mess is really uncomfortable. The wedding plot that I originally expected was like this: after the three people recognized each other, the Shura field started, and Hong was not recognized. Then the main plot was slowed down first, and a small daily life of the three people in the Shura field was written. Let Xiao Jiang find a way to solve the Shura field or delay the Shura field. At least explain it, and then encounter an opportunity to continue the plot. Of course, all this happened in the context of Wu Hong's identity being discovered 😅

I originally wanted to finish reading before posting, but I couldn't bear it and I really have to complain here. First of all, the setting of the male protagonist, Golden Finger is close to him, and there is the best sword in the world. The sword demon teaches him martial arts, but can you think that he is a waste? The author sets him up as having very poor martial arts qualifications, and his martial arts skills can be said to be average, but at the same time, he is given a golden finger, and why is he asked to be taught by such a bad master? Tell me, I've read more than 200 chapters and I still can't understand them. Why do you write them like this? I originally thought that the male protagonist was holding a sword and preparing to fight to become the best in the world step by step. His grandma's legs were out of the capital, but he was still a small dark light with no reputation in the world and no status. He was also a small dark light in the officialdom. His own martial arts was rubbish. He was useless against the five scum even with a golden finger at his side. What are you going to do with this setting? Setting up the male protagonist's combat power is based on using his brain, but as a result, he can't compete with other scholars with his words, kill people with his mouth, and play tricks that are unparalleled in the world. The force is not good, the brain is not good, and then you shout every day to avenge Sister Ye, your grandma is stupid, the best sword demon in the world teaches you martial arts and has a golden finger, you don't work hard to improve your force, just kill the whole world to avenge you Sister Ye, there are so many foreshadowings to bury you all day long, there are more than 200 pictures, the male protagonist really has no personality charm at all, like an empty shell, now I feel that he is worthy of the male protagonist? What abilities and qualifications, status, status, military power, financial power and brain power does he have to make so many women worthy of him? Do the two words go together? The portrayal of the male protagonist is really a piece of shit. I actually saw more than 200 pictures and I just had to read it. The male protagonist gave me the feeling that he was just playing with his brain. His brain is not very strong, and his strength in fighting is average. I really don't think it's enough to portray the female protagonist in a harem. After watching it for a long time, I think this male protagonist is fine even if he is dead. He has no social status, no identity, no financial power, no strength at all. Why does he accept so many women? Is he worthy? I just asked. The author should first portray the male protagonist, and then the female protagonist. The two words that make me read this book are frustrating.

This is really the most disgusting book I have ever read. I have read over one million words. Let me tell you how you feel. I just want to ask why do these women like the male protagonist? Inexplicably, only one person can judge the case? Forget it, there's still a lot I don't want to say. Anyway, it's just one sentence. Are you worthy? ? ?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​: Cut out the harem plot and all that's left is the outline. In this huge world, I just run around a few places. If I want a new scene, I pop up a secret door formation. When I go in, I find that the female protagonist who has been missing for several chapters happens to be here; the male protagonist has no clues at all and only knows to follow the prompts; he is obviously looking for someone, and the time is tight and the task is heavy, but he has to spend a few days waiting for the little Luoluo to come to seek revenge so that he can pretend to be a slap in the face, no Yes, do you think this is the right time? In the later period, the image of the male protagonist is getting more and more devalued, and he has no responsibility or responsibility. At some point, he only wants to spend time in gentle countryside. With this condition, he does not want to bring peace to the world, but only wants to please the harem. The villains are all in the same mold. When a girl sees a girl, he will be small and dominate the big head, while the female will be jealous and full of ugliness. Let's talk about Ran, her image plummeted after the wedding. I think that the male protagonist is like that in Ran's mind. He kills the male protagonist with his own hands and acts like a normal person. He doesn't think about saving the male protagonist or helping to defend against the enemy. If other people didn't come to help the male protagonist, he would be dead. If Ran had mostly good intentions, she should try her best to save the male protagonist; if she had mostly evil intentions, she would drag the whole world with her. Ran somehow escaped before the male protagonist was resurrected, and then took the red demon heart and evolved directly. She didn't feel any guilt at all, and her death with the male protagonist was in vain. After I recovered, I asked if it hurt. You only want to be big, and you will kill others if you are suppressed by others. How can you have the airs to ask the male protagonist for conditions? The male protagonist is also abstract, and there is a 30% chance that he will survive, right? Are you worthy of your sister Ye? Are you worthy of Hong'er? Did Ran put some kind of poison on you to make you become her dog? She was killed without any complaints, and she still said with a shy face that she was not worthy of her. I have never seen such a bitch, you are not as good as Lu Renjia. Then there is Jiang Yi, what kind of naughty character does she have? She keeps saying that a hedgehog pricks someone and then sheds tears. This is a description of the phenomenon, not an explanation of the cause. Where does this naughty character come from? Why are the people watching so unhappy? The wealth behind her is so rich that it can rival the country. No, how can a Silver Moon Tower come with so many things? I think Jiang Yi's strength was just like that before Shuang Cultivation. I thought this amount of wealth was obtained by squeezing the common people. You don't even know how to search the government. Sword Demon, how well-shaped he is in the front, but a pure tool in the back. There is no psychological description of knowing that his daughter is a pregnant woman. The male protagonist and his daughter appear out of nowhere during the final battle. Li Guanshi, the dual cultivator who has been preparing for so long, just took him through it day after day? Meng Niang disappeared inexplicably midway, and came back inexplicably a long time later. I don't know what she was doing in the middle, and I don't know what she was doing in seclusion or why she was in seclusion; Nightingale, she hid her identity for so long, but in the end everyone knew it, and she hid it in vain; Uncle Xia He Qiu Ye Li, who is this? I don't know, where did it come from? In summary, it was all about foreshadowing, but in the end, the outline was that the characters were in a mess, not as good as Lao Lu chasing Qing Niang.