Following the Immortal Food Records

As soon as Black and White wrote a food article, the pretentious plot in the article made people feel very natural. Could this be the innate body of food articles?

The idea is grand, the setting is novel, the plot is just okay, and the writing is poor.

It's a bit hard to comment on. I can't say it's ugly, but I can't say it's good-looking either.

To be honest, after reading the first few chapters, I felt that the book was indeed okay, but there was one thing that really surprised me. It was the title of non-human. Zai here is a modal particle. Non-human refers to whether it is a human being. The translation of non-human should be that it is really not a human. I feel that it is very awkward to see non-human beings collectively referred to as non-human.

There's not much to say, the author is awesome. 👍

I am an old author, but why is my writing so poor? I can't even express the meaning clearly in a sentence.

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The loser doesn't even read the literary hooks

The author writes well and the story is very good, but you have a lot of language problems and weird oral habits. It hurts the mood when you read it.

This is another trashy novel. The protagonist is not trashy, so he really doesn't know how to write.