Immortal Tang: Starting with Teaching the Exiled Immortal to Refine the Moon

The wording is so exaggerated, a bit artificial

The words and sentences are frivolous and do not suit the atmosphere of classical fairy tales. The characters cannot stand up and are monotonous. The plot is unstable and randomly generated. The setting of the founder of the new immortal way is not bad, and he also has the idea of ​​​​traveling through levels of cultivation to fight monsters. It is a waste for the author of so many books to write like this.

Is this protagonist trying to wipe out the old spirit of Liutian? So where will the protagonist stand in the future? If you side with the imperial court, you will definitely carry forward your new immortal way, which will inevitably cause a conflict with the old forces. During the Anshi Rebellion, you are destined to have a fight with the cannibal monks on the Anlu Mountain side.

Isn't "supernatural" a word in Western fantasy? Nowadays, all immortals and heroes use it. When I see the extraordinary, I think of knights, wizards and so on. What a show.

Hey, it's completely the nanny school. Li Bai was raised as a son. Li Bai pretended to be B everywhere and messed around. The protagonist tried his best to wipe his butt. No wonder his grades were so poor.

The essence of entertainment literature is easy to understand, the essence of serious literature is profound meaning, the essence of explanatory literature is conciseness and conciseness, and the essence of poetry and parallel prose is the elongation of artistic conception. It's amazing to be able to do all four things.

The choice of words and sentences is too artificial and too pretentious. People who like it will like it very much. I am too old to watch it.

If you preach, you will naturally become a master, why should you be called a Taoist brother?

There are no people in the comment area, there are too many explanatory contents, and the pretentious plot is indeed not very satisfying. The author wants the protagonist to have a spirit of "I come to the world for all living beings and look down on the world." The problem is that the pretentiousness is too stiff, and the content is not very smooth. My biggest feeling after reading it is that all the actions of the protagonist are done out of necessity.

It feels like the protagonist is too hasty. If you don't build power, you will mess around and make reforms. It is still worthwhile to rebel and establish an earthly country. Liquidate various aristocratic landowners.