Immortal Tang: Starting with Teaching the Exiled Immortal to Refine the Moon
仙唐：从传授谪仙月炼开始
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- Completed
- Length
- 958k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 1y ago
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The wording is too exaggerated, a bit pretentious.
The writing style is frivolous and doesn't fit the atmosphere of classic Xianxia (fantasy/martial arts) novels. The characters are underdeveloped and monotonous, and the plot feels adrift and randomly generated. While the premise of the new Xianxia founder is decent, the inclusion of level-based monster-slaying is a waste. It's a waste for an author who has written so many books to produce something like this.
Is the protagonist going to wipe out the lingering influence of the Six Heavens? Which side will the protagonist stand on in the future? If one sides with the imperial court, they will undoubtedly promote their new immortal path, which will inevitably lead to conflict with the old forces. During the An Lushan Rebellion, they are destined to clash with the cannibalistic cultivators on An Lushan's side.
Isn't "extraordinary" a term from Western fantasy? Why is it being used in Xianxia (Chinese fantasy) now? Seeing "extraordinary" immediately brings to mind knights, wizards, and stuff like that. It's really distracting.
Ugh, it's totally a nanny-style story. They raise Li Bai like a son, but Li Bai just goes around showing off and causing trouble, while the protagonist is constantly cleaning up his messes. No wonder the grades are so bad!
Entertainment literature prioritizes ease of understanding, serious literature prioritizes profound meaning, expository literature prioritizes conciseness, and poetry and prose prioritize evocative imagery. To be able to avoid all four is truly remarkable.
The word choice and sentence structure are too affected, and the pretentiousness is overwhelming. Those who like it will love it, but I'm too old to appreciate it.
If someone imparts their knowledge, they are naturally a master; why call them "brother Daoist"?
The comment section is almost empty; there's been too much explanatory content, and the pretentious scenes lacked any real enjoyment. The author wanted the protagonist to have an air of superiority, as if he were a benefactor descended upon the world, but the pretentiousness felt forced and the flow of the story was off. My biggest takeaway from reading it was that all of the protagonist's actions were driven by necessity.
The protagonist seems to be in too much of a hurry. Without establishing power, they engage in all sorts of reckless actions and reforms. Rebellion is more interesting; let's establish a legitimate state on the ground. Purge all kinds of powerful landlord families.