Starting in Tokyo, I Ushered in Spiritual Qi Revival

This book is very well written!! When I read older behind-the-scenes novels, the protagonists were all living the high life off the runway, while the main character was working in a small shop, getting bullied not only by other superhumans but also by ordinary people. Was that interesting? The protagonist in this book is well-written!!

I'm not used to this weird hero-saves-the-damsel-in-distress thing. It feels strange to take the initiative to make a move on the other person and then go to the rescue. What if the woman finds out about this in the end? Is this the kind of thing you have to keep secret for the rest of your life?

The protagonist doesn't go to the factory or participate in the action; it's meaningless if the character you create lives a life of wealth and luxury while you work in a small shop. Such behind-the-scenes stories are just garbage.

Is it worth watching? I just saw comments mentioning behind-the-scenes elements and a harem. I almost vomited from the women around the main character in *The Divine Tree*, I hope this one isn't like that too.

Author, if you could let go of your obsession with women, you could definitely improve your books' sales figures. (Headline: Poison Island)

The writing style is so cringeworthy! It made me cringe so much I almost had cancer.

It's not exactly a universal problem, just my personal opinion, since some people definitely like this. But I still want to ask, why do these behind-the-scenes stories set in Tokyo always seem to have a problem with female characters? They're supposed to be all-powerful and doing big things, yet they're always indulging in romance.

Stop writing those pretentious, childish lines, and stop using stream-of-consciousness. Tell us who the woman surrounded by the Kengan Association and a bunch of powerful figures is, and who Kurogiri (Hitagi Senjougahara and her daughter) is. The first twenty chapters were too verbose, with constant references to the Lord and mortals, and the prayers were just too awkward.

The synopsis clearly states that the protagonist will collect various beautiful girls, yet there are still a bunch of people in the comments section asking the same questions. Honestly, you might as well donate your eyes if you don't need them anymore!

The author's protagonist still has a loser mentality. Even though he can create life, he's still thinking about building a harem.