Tomb Raiding: I, Chen Yulou, Seek Only Immortality

The terrifying giant python was about the thickness of a bucket and four to five meters long. I almost fainted with laughter. Really, my God, I really couldn't hold back.

The four worst settings for tomb-robbing fan fiction: 1. The bloodline of mythical beasts. 2. Copy the plot. 3. Use force and force. 4. Collect the harem. I hope the author can avoid

I always feel that the author doesn't know how to write big scenes. As long as they are related to big scenes, they are all ten or twenty meters tall. Even a snake that is three meters thick and ten meters long has been created. How fat is this snake?

He has 100,000 strong men and only leads a few dozen people? No need for a gun! Only a few dozen people can use the full wine bag and rice bag! You, the leader, are too crotch-stretching

The beginning is okay. The subject matter is really attractive. But the writing is so awkward that people are not in the mood to read it. Not fun, too much nonsense. I was speechless after that. While thinking about Gou. But he was so reckless that he died. The whole article is a bunch of nonsense and does almost nothing. Farming is not like farming, and cultivating the Tao is not like cultivating the Tao. After a few chapters, I'm still talking about this and that. Even the foreshadowing is too much nonsense. Moreover, in one month, he wanted to digest the gains from Pingshan and attack the tomb of King Xian. Where is Gou? In troubled times, it is not important to first stabilize the rear. Luo Laowai is so easy to get rid of? Some people also have guns in their hands. Have you ever thought about making a fuss? Besides, everyone knows that their hands are a mess and they don't bother to sort it out. The family business is not taken care of, and the cultivation of immortality is inconsistent. The character is like a psycho who loves to show off. Just a few words about cultivating the Tao. I have gained something after practicing for a few days. Please, enter the first level in half a year. You are stronger in one month than in the previous half year. You must have turned on the accelerator. I will cultivate immortality in return of your cultivation of Taoism. Would you like to see how embarrassing your writing is? There are formations in Aoki Kung Fu, but if you don't use them in Pingshan, it's considered incompetent. In the back, my own position is not set up either.

I've written 50 chapters of "Pingshan Tomb" and probably haven't made half of the progress. I've even raised chickens for all the things I got. I want to say that you can just practice the inner elixir and use it yourself. You can also raise chickens. After hundreds of years of inner elixir, you have to raise one or two small realms. Besides, no monster has ever eaten a human being. In the future, you will just rely on spiritual grass or something to increase your strength? Why don't you buy it directly? You have to go to the tomb to find it. Isn't it just suppressing the protagonist's strength in disguise? He just goes to the tomb without any spells. Fighting relies on gathering spiritual energy to slap and then it's gone. I'm really not afraid of death. With such a powerful technique, he cannot use it, and there is no magic medicine to buy. The leader of Xieling will be short of money and connections to buy medicine. He must first improve his strength. The writing is not pleasant at all. You still despise power and trouble. If you are rich and powerful, you can't do anything.

What a waste of this subject matter. I originally thought the tomb-robber universe written by Ba Chang was interesting... I lost interest after reading the first few chapters. The writing is the same as 💩. Those people in the original novel who were willing to risk their lives are like fools here, frightened and frightened at every turn. It's better to go back to the mountains to farm.

The previous ones have endured it, but I was speechless when I saw Dajin making a sword...

The tomb robber Long Ao Tianwen is wearing a layer of skin. The protagonist is cultivating immortality alone and is basically invincible. Every time the protagonist makes a move, he has an unfathomable look on his face. Others can't understand it anyway, but they are all shocked and surprised. They guess the realm of the protagonist 🙂🙂

After reading it... The water becomes the sea later, the golden elixir has an extra fire elixir, and an extra thunder talisman. Other than that, the sword is still used in the same way, and the partridge whistle hammers the protagonist's biological father. He gives whatever he wants, and he has to give it to him if he doesn't want it. When they went to the Ghost Cave, Yang Fang and Kunlun were cursed. The protagonist said something unexpected that he didn't expect. He laughed to death. He recalled the original work without thinking. Did he know that he was cursed in the capital city of Jingjue? Ever since I met the dragon surnamed Zhou in the lake, my ink writing became more and more complete.