As Your Father, I Only Want to Quietly Watch You Live Forever

"Rickocks" describes the state of the human body. Does the author know? As a martial arts master, Li Qingshan is at the peak of his uprightness and has a rickets back. He is not an ordinary person, nor is he a current person, so why is there a need for rickets? The author went to the street and saw that among the older and healthy people, a few had rickets in their backs.

How should I put it? After reading about ten chapters, the writing is indeed good. After all, he is a veteran author of LV5, but there are also many flaws. As of Chapter 12, I have already found two flaws and one soft flaw. Fault No. 1: My wife has to have sex with others before she is even pregnant. She has no common sense at all. Ah, you can say that it is a fantasy world, but Zhang Ya is an ordinary person in fantasy, and the person who reads the book is a modern person. You have to take care of the three views of modern people, and you have written so many chapters and still don't change this problem, which is really uncomfortable. Flaw 2: The protagonist kills for the first time and all nine crossbow arrows are inserted into the eye sockets. Brother, can you check the thickness of the crossbow arrows? No matter how thin it is, there is a limit. You also wrote that it is made of wood. If you write that it is made of special materials, I can imagine that it is extremely thin. Soft injury: Master Chen asked you to call you Lao Chen, so you did it with peace of mind? He is your guide on the path of spiritual practice, and he also lent you ancient books in advance. Even if you want to show that the two of you are close, you can call him Uncle Chen, but you have to call him Lao Chen, Lao Chen. Don't you know that this is usually how a high-status person calls a low-status and older person? Even modern people are like this. The exception is when a child of a friend's family whom you have known since childhood calls you this, or a relative only calls you this. What relationship do you have with them? This shows that the author is not clear about some things in reality, and is a little proud that he is right. The specific manifestation is that the author does not change what the readers have written.

Before Chapter 546, the protagonist will continue to write martial arts for the human world. The body will only practice pure martial arts, become a martial arts immortal, abandon the path of the god of martial arts, exclude divinity in various ways, and also purify the purity of the physical body. The Dragon Elephant Dao Fruit will also use this as an improvement, and the soul will only follow the path of divinity. As a result, in chapter 546, the writing collapsed. I stopped pursuing pure martial arts and let divinity infect my body. I changed from martial immortal to martial god. So what were you doing in the previous chapter 545? Water word count? Should you pay him back? The progress of the Dragon Elephant Dao Fruit has soared. Then why did you reject the divinity before? The new divinity will enter the body as soon as possible. The progress of the Dragon Elephant Dao Fruit has soared not long ago. Do you have to wait until Chapter 546?

I only saw 4 years old now, and I already felt it was repeated. Every time, someone was spying on my daughter, and the old father struck hard.

The garbage storyline is really not something people can come up with.

I've read a little more than half of it, and overall, it's a good read with clear advantages and disadvantages. In terms of advantages, the characters are relatively distinct and unified, with no obvious inconsistencies. The setting is also quite good, it can be regarded as the popular mythical genre in recent years. Let's mainly talk about the poisonous points. The first is the combat power system. From very early on, I can clearly feel that the gap in combat power between the various levels is very close, or the author wants to tell us that they are actually much worse, but the actual content gives me the feeling that the gap between them is very small. As long as the protagonist keeps practicing martial arts, the weak will definitely be able to defeat the strong. You can't feel any fundamental improvement between different realms. The impression given is that people at a higher level than you just have practiced higher-level martial arts than you. As long as I also practice this martial skill, I will definitely be better than you. There is no deeper difference between them. Secondly, the content of the fights is basically the same. To sum up, the protagonist teleports over, blasts the opponent with his physical body, or blasts the opponent with a mechanism, and then teleports away. It was fine in the early stage, but it became obviously aesthetically fatigued in the later stage. Then, there are also many problems with the settings. There are many settings that only stay in that paragraph, or even one chapter. For example, at the beginning there was an upgrade to the Divine Base, but it was only mentioned at that time, and then disappeared. From now on, the protagonists will all obtain high-level ones directly without having to upgrade at all. For another example, the protagonist obtains different divine bases of seven emotions and six desires. This is basically a useless setting. The first few chapters show the different characteristics of the seven emotions and six desires. After the seventy or eighty chapters, it is completely meaningless. It just highlights the deep foundation of the protagonist. Actually, it's the same old story. It's about time travel, so the soul is powerful; the protagonist has many spiritual roots and his cultivation speed is slow, but he has ten times more spiritual power than others. It all means the same thing. Finally, many plot advancements are very blunt. Basically, the villain wants to do something to the protagonist's daughter. The protagonist gets angry and the protagonist goes to kill the villain. Then the villain sends people to investigate behind the scenes. After finding the protagonist's daughter, the protagonist gets angry again and kills the person again. The cycle goes on and on. It's okay at first, but it makes people speechless later. There is also the line between the imperial court and the sect, which I personally feel is quite confusing. Obviously he is still a guest of Qin Tianjian, and there is no foreshadowing of the conflict between the sect and the court. He only occasionally intersperses some content about pacifying the king of chaos, and suddenly the protagonist is in opposition to the court. The logic is also rather blunt. The villain doesn't seem to have a high IQ and doesn't care about anything. He just wants the protagonist's daughter to marry him. Then of course the protagonist disagrees and kills the person as a matter of course. . . Anyway, it's hard to comment. I don't know whether to say that the protagonist is strong-willed or stubborn. That's about it. In general, it's still the same sentence, a refreshing article with clear advantages and disadvantages.

The subject matter of this book is not bad, but the author's setting is too rough. First of all, there is no such thing as upgrading in Daoguo. The lv level is still used, which is too high. Polishing the golden finger setting will make it more representative Character description It's not good. Oh, Lao Chen is inexplicable because the child and the male protagonist are as close as one family. How about you make this supporting character fleshed out, for example, his wife and daughter both died, and you write that he is an old man in his late sixties who has been single all his life. The emotional advancement is too blunt The protagonist's wife There is basically no sense of existence, there are only a few lines, and all the protagonists are: I want a wife and children to be on the hot bed, it is difficult to hold on. The biggest failure is the few chapters before it is released. He takes his daughter to kill people and shoots his head. The description of the daughter is still crazy with joy. I think, there are no villains like this. What a write-up, the author's brain feels like something has eaten it. It's really eye-opening for me to write such a top-notch book. There's no need to pursue it after it's on the shelves. The author obviously didn't polish this book carefully. There are a lot of small loopholes in the book, and the big ones are directly poisonous.

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It was fine at first, but I don't know why, but then the hostility became more and more intense and abstract.

The first 100 or so pictures are okay, they provide a sense of freshness, but the following routines are repeated again and again. Target the daughter, kill, target the daughter and kill, change the map, change the map, the enemy routines are exactly the same. The key is that the writing power is not as powerful as that of the great master, Daily Pure Water, the world view setting can write more than 6,000 words in one chapter, and the remaining chapter is a bit surprising, so you have to read it, otherwise you will not know what happened, and it is a big chapter. After more than 100 chapters, just look at the title of the book.