As Your Father, I Only Want to Quietly Watch You Live Forever

Does the author know what state the word "hunchback" describes in relation to the human body? As a martial arts master at his peak, why would Li Qingshan have a hunched back? He's not an ordinary person, nor is he a servant. Why would he need to hunch over? The author went out on the street and saw that among the older, healthy people, how many had hunched backs?

Well, after reading about ten chapters, the writing is indeed quite good, after all, it's a LV5 veteran author, but there are quite a few flaws. By the time I read the twelfth chapter, there were already two major flaws and one minor flaw. Major flaw one: He insisted on having fun with someone else while his wife was still in postpartum confinement. He has no common sense at all.

Before chapter 546, the protagonist was supposed to continue the martial arts tradition for humanity, cultivating only pure martial arts in his physical body to become a Martial Immortal, abandoning the path of Martial God, rejecting divinity in various ways, and purifying the purity of his physical body.

Seeing her at only 4 years old already feels repetitive; every time, it's about someone spying on his daughter, and the father takes drastic action.

The plot is so bad that no human could come up with it.

I've read a little over half of it. Overall, it's a satisfying read with clear strengths and weaknesses. As for its strengths, the characters are quite distinct and consistent, with no obvious contradictions. The concept is also quite good, and it's considered one of the more popular mythological stories set in recent years. Let's talk about the problematic aspects.

The book has a decent premise, but the author's setup is too rough. First of all, the Dao Fruit doesn't have an upgrade system; it uses levels instead, which is ridiculous. Polishing the cheat system would make it more immersive. Character description That won't work. Old Chen inexplicably becomes as close to the male lead as family because of his child.

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It was fine at first, but for some reason, the hostility grew stronger and more abstract.

The first hundred or so chapters were alright, offering a sense of novelty. But after that, it became a repetitive formula: target the daughter, kill her, target the daughter again, kill her, change maps, change maps again. The enemy's tactics were identical. Crucially, the writing lacked the skill of a master author; it was just filler.