My Years as a Commander

I'm curious about the status of World Pole in your point of view. As a commander, the protagonist is still a relatively high-status person. He actually wanted to be sentenced to five years in prison just because of that person's background without killing anyone or causing the mission to fail. Your World Pole was given to you by others in order to control you. It doesn't look like it was won by hard power.

The previous chapter was okay, but I was very curious about Chapter 22. There was a ship that had never been there before. As a very awesome commander, he was not alert at all. This kind of demoralizing behavior suddenly made me not want to watch it anymore.

In a world where communicating with evil gods can give you power beyond the limits of the world just by sacrificing the lives of other people, all countries will actually allow a place to become a hotbed of evil cults. Is your world view reasonable?

Well, I discovered it while reading the daily introduction today, and I finished it in one sitting. I thought it was pretty good, so I planned to review it. The author can obviously feel that he is a newbie, with ideas and creativity, but his writing skills are not strong enough. The middle articles are generally good and logical, but there are always a lot of inconsistencies in the details. At present, we have actually experienced two events. The first one is that the protagonist is demoted to Yongye Port, and then eliminates the local gangs that oppress the indigenous groups. The second thing is that the protagonist accepts a commission to go to Mortan, the chaotic borderland of the Fourth War, to rescue the hostages. Let's just talk about the shortcomings. The first major shortcoming is that the author does not introduce enough about the private military contractor, the Night Tower, where the protagonist belongs. His founding process, founder, organizational structure, etc. Are not clear. It can only be left to the reader's imagination. For example, when I think of private military contractors, what I think of is the mercenary group with the protagonist as the core in Mercenary World or Mercenary War. In a novel world, there must be all kinds of miscellaneous organizations. Let's not talk about other organizations, but you must make it clear about the organization where the protagonist belongs. In the first incident, this can be explained by the identity of the local indigenous people or the gang leader, or by other means, but the author has not made it clear yet, it is seventy or eighty chapters in. The second small disadvantage. In the first incident to eliminate the gangsters near Yongye Port, the protagonist is obviously a cautious and wise image. Why did he start a party just a week after arriving in Yongle Port, and the key is to have a party. Although people were arranged to monitor, there was no secret sentry. The two soldiers who originally belonged to Yongye Harbor who were killed at the beginning of the raid were overt, but logically speaking, the protagonist must have brought them there. Soldiers he trusted were secretly serving as secret sentries. Then the protagonist Fang was attacked by surprise. The power system was bombed and the air defense and missile defense systems were disabled. If the protagonist hadn't been cheated by the author, even if the backup power supply was enabled, it would have been a disastrous failure in the real world. A tragic failure due to negligence. The third disadvantage. The protagonist is already a four-star general from the beginning. In any case, he is a middle-level person. In reality, he should be at least a battalion commander or a regiment commander. Moreover, the protagonist is sent to the Yongye Tower to become a high-ranking member of the party who can do his own thing. I feel that the protagonist should also be regarded as a person. As a result, first when they arrived at Yongye Port, they were shot down by a group of spaceships, and then they faced that kind of gangster, even though he had a few hundred people in terms of military strength (estimated after reading the whole incident). But the protagonist, as a person sent by a big force, can't crush a gang in a small area (mainly because of the air force advantage. In reality, even in a country like Iran, when dealing with some terrorist organizations, as long as you know their specific coordinates, you can just send a few bombers there, even if there is a fortress like the one mentioned in the article. As long as he dares to show off, it can be easily solved, especially when the protagonist comes here in a spaceship. This is not very easy. Just start it. The back and forth designed by the author should not be back and forth, it should be crushing. Besides, as I said, the people sent by the Night Recovering Tower have died three times.) It feels very aggrieved. Especially later when the protagonist goes to Mortan to rescue the hostages, he walks on the line between life and death. Very unremarkable. I would say that the title of the book should not start with Commander. But let's start with the mercenary captain. This is more appropriate. Point 4. Power system. There are two parallel power systems in this book, one is firearms, and the other is the extraordinary power of individuals. The firearms are easy to understand, but the author did not use too much ink to describe the extraordinary power of individuals. There are 5 professions and a commander system with the protagonist himself, which is not very clear. It can't be considered a shortcoming. The author's description is okay, well, it's not clear enough. Point 5. Mainly the second event, the hostage rescue. There are some plots in it that are rather long-winded and unnecessary. The first rescue, the part where the Iron Hand mercenary group was defeated, made people feel that the rescue mission was too easy. It's not worthy of the protagonist's kneeling down or doing whatever it takes when the protagonist accepts the commission. If the protagonist doesn't go deep to rescue others later, the difficulty is completely too low. I feel that the old elf king only needs to pay some money, and it can be accomplished by finding some elite teams from the outside world. Later, the protagonist's teammates were very kind-hearted and wanted to save people, and then the protagonist looked helpless and expressed that they all supported you. I feel that the emotional rendering here is not in place. The logic is smooth and just, but a bit stiff. Then there are the twists and turns in the process of escaping. This twist is too many, and the next one or two twists and turns feel complete. It's not necessary, it's like the author added it on purpose, it's a bit blunt. I also feel frustrated. Especially the part where the protagonist fights back to kill Kalans. It's exactly the same as the plot in Wolf Warriors. Some want to complain. The above can be said to be shortcomings, but it can also be said that I am nitpicking. Overall, I think the author's writing is pretty good. But there is still room for improvement. Come on!

Shangxiang, your enemy wants to kill you, he picks up the knife and chops you but you are not dead, and then he asks you to have dinner, you grandson, do you really want to repay him?

😭😭😭The last one was dead, but I read it well I hope this one will be the same as the last one except for the death

The problems are relatively acceptable, but updates are really slow.

By the way, the number of female protagonists in this book is a bit too much. There are at least 4-5 of them now. We won't add more in the future.

Did the author combine the plots of several mobile games? The protagonist's personality and behavior are directly separated

The pink bunny is just another one in the book. A secretary who made three mistakes in one day and still retained a real brain, and managed such a reckless persona has gone back to more than ten years ago.

After looking at the results of the book, the author is so tenacious.

Limited

Male protagonist

From the previous book, the protagonist in the previous book had his own poison debuff. Can anyone tell me about this book? After only reading the first three chapters, the protagonist has become a commander, so what else does he need to do? (In my mediocre opinion, after becoming a Shangguan, you can rest, right?)

As title

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