Quit the Team and Then Pick up the Beautiful Girl with the Problem

After seeing Chapter 242, the pace of the story and the protagonist's IQ have been declining. The protagonist's setting has changed from a mature and reliable adult male, a reliable senior, and a person with normal views. He has become unable to handle the relationship between teammates and avoids his own emotional problems and other people's emotional problems. The scene where the tree-creating star soul cuts down the tree is even more outrageous. The author directly lowered the protagonist's IQ to the NPC level. It is more like a narrator explaining the current status of the novel's story development stage. It also suppresses the protagonist's combat power. The front foot is completed. A complete set of equipment, no matter how bragging you want, two level 9 enemies on the back foot can fight an 8th level enemy. One main character C and one main character assistant have to hang up there. I read the comments and articles foreshadowing that the ex-girlfriend is going to return to the team, and the main character doesn't even dare to chase her away. It's really no brainer. The system can obviously prompt you with information about the people you meet, but you don't look at it, it doesn't display it, it just forces the protagonist to lose his intelligence. On the surface, he quits the team. In fact, the protagonist abuses the protagonist and has no initiative at all. He is not proactive and responsible emotionally, and just pulls and pulls. It is said to be a western fantasy adventure novel, but it is actually a romance novel on a female channel. There are also some advantages. The description of the world setting is good, but it was taken from gbf. The protagonist's character traits were well described before it was put on the shelves. Unfortunately, it was all rotten after it was put on the shelves.

Let's talk about the conclusion first Quality: grains and herbs - medicinal herbs Toxicity: non-toxic - slightly toxic Brief review: A newcomer's seedling that was dragged down by the title and beginning, it is a pretty good novel about a beautiful girl's love affair with Shura. It is obvious that the author is a newcomer. Both the book title and the introduction of the three golden chapters are unattractive. Most of the first three chapters deal with the setting and background story. It is really inappropriate for the core heroine to be introduced until the third chapter. And even if the setting was laid out in three golden chapters, a lot of supplements and revisions were still made in the follow-up. A particularly important point is why the protagonist was withdrawn from the team. It was not clearly explained at the beginning. It was only after subsequent supplements that we found out that it was a political struggle for power. It is already foreseeable that the main plot of the book will be particularly draggy. However, the good news is that these are not the selling points of this book after all, they are flaws that can be ignored. Although the author's main plot is a bit slow in pace, the characterization of the heroine is still remarkable. In the final analysis, the selling point of the novel is the troubled girl and the Shura field, not a poorly written adventure story about quitting the team. The characterization of the heroine alone in this book is worthy of herbal evaluation. Let's talk about the (possible) poison points My poison resistance is quite high. I don't think the following are poison points, but obviously not everyone thinks so. If you want to avoid lightning, you can take a look. Spoiler Warning!!! 1. The quitting flow. The quitting flow, which has been badly written by Ri Qing, is obviously a poisonous point. Watching the quitting flow now will not make you feel happy, but will only make you feel stupid. The good news is that this book is not a witty trick. Subsequent supplements make it clear that the new group leader is motivated by greed and is ostracizing the old members. However, I personally don't think everyone can see this after reading the first chapter. 2. The male protagonist is a very weak and nearly full-level tuba. The routine of a max-level tuba leading a novice village is also a selling point in itself, but the author did not write it that way. Through many patches, for example, under the world view system, the level up is only skills, and it needs to be combined with external objects to form combat power. The male protagonist's own external objects were banned by others using despicable means, and the male protagonist is only an auxiliary, etc., Which greatly limits the male protagonist's combat power. Obviously not everyone can accept the dangerous plot of a ninth-level account leading a second-level heroine and fighting fourth-level bosses

Alas, I can't stand it anymore, it's boring if there are too many harems, okay, I almost don't know who is who when I look at it, and except for the beautiful girl who is attractive, the other settings are almost negative points, the inexplicable empire, the inexplicable demons inexplicably destroy the world, all kinds of inexplicable things It's something like that. A girl in jail always waits for your protagonist to rescue her. Something will happen wherever she goes. It's a humanoid disaster weapon... It's so classic that I can't even complain about it. Can you make some progress in writing Western fantasy? I have no books to read. Do I really have to write it myself? 😰

Granblue Fantasy has been ten years, so don't you have to write it for ten years? I want to read your book for the rest of my life. Without this book, wow Darcy, I can't stand it. Please, add another chapter, book friends will do anything I only have Zoe in my heart now, and I think about this village girl kitten every moment. When will Leon go find Zoe I haven't seen Zoe in 7 days Hey, I feel like I'm sick, brother, give me one more chapter, I'm about to die, please, brother, I feel like I'm covered in sackcloth, I feel like I'm shaking all over, I can't breathe, please, brother, just give me one more chapter, just one more chapter, I'll never touch it again, please, brother, really, just one chapter, I swear I'll never touch this thing again, I really can't bear it anymore

It's well written and interesting to watch. However, the impression I gave everyone before quitting the team was not very good. If this book had not been recommended by friends, I would have run away when I saw the title. I think the author could consider changing the title of the book.

It was translated by Nippon Toilet Paper, and it smells like waste material.

Newcomers, run quickly. The author especially likes to suppress the combat power. A level 9 protagonist can cast a level 6 spell with a blue bar to remove a quarter of the target. Later, he also asked female teammates to wear bikini armor to give benefits to NPCs. A little green. I especially like to write about mentally retarded operations in Japanese comic plots

There are only ten levels in total. If you are at level 9, you will fight the monster Luo Li from the novice village. You will be speechless😓

It feels like any enemy with the same level of combat power can fight the protagonist group back and forth. The protagonist's group has such a strong support as the protagonist, and there are several others with the same level of combat power, and some who are even more powerful. It's not a crushing match every time, it's almost as if they're evenly matched every time. Every time in the plot, the enemy does something first and then the protagonist discovers it and then solves it. Everyone has experience in other worlds. Can't they prevent it first? If there is a problem, it's not enough to just ask the guild to crush it. I really don't understand. And the recent plot of Land of All Souls and City of Thousand Towers didn't feel very good.

Ever since my ex-girlfriend returned to the team, I felt like there was something wrong with the rhythm of the plot. I don't object to my ex-girlfriend returning to the team. After all, this is a harem story, but the writing of the protagonist is too awkward It gives me the feeling that I want to patch up the team withdrawal flow, but the more I fight, the more uncomfortable it becomes (the setting is because the ex-girlfriend left without saying goodbye, so the protagonist devotes himself to the development of the team wholeheartedly and even obsessively) First of all, other female characters in the team are problem children, so the protagonist must control them rationally, but the fact is that the protagonist can no longer control them. A visit to the Shura Field is good, but writing too much will give the protagonist a headache, and the readers will also have a headache Secondly, outside the team, the author wants to write a traditional royal and passionate comic, where the opponent is infinitely strong, and the protagonist can only defeat it with all his strength. But the actual performance is very slow and abrupt, just like the author's own description of the empire. In order to highlight the oppression of the early BOSS, the enemy is given very abrupt and powerful abilities Finally, the root of the problem is the withdrawal flow. The author wants to use this to attract attention and describe the growth of the protagonist by the way, but the description of the protagonist is too awkward In a setting like this for a problem child, the protagonist must be very calm, especially if the enemy is set to be so powerful, then don't make it so awkward For example, the devil's curse, one second just said that it is very harmful, and the next second relies on the devil's curse to show off, ignore it when there is no need for the devil's curse, and say it is strong/dangerous when needed There is also a description of the combat power, often forcing 55 to be opened, often stopping the explanation, and then asking the opponent to zoom in, and finally the protagonist opens it The protagonist must not be awkward. The enemy was originally designed to be powerful and oppressive. It was supposed to be a relaxing harem plot, but the protagonist was still awkward. Originally a rational, tense and exciting adventure plot, it turned out to be awkward when meeting the former adventure team. After the end, the powerful BOSS came out, and the awkwardness before seemed to have turned into a poisonous point.

It doesn't matter if the writing is good or slow, the character should be stable.

I was told to quit at the beginning. It was too slow. Fortunately, I resisted and read in. The writing behind it is very good. The poor data has something to do with the slow pace of the start. Come on.

The writing of the battle is so bad. When the battle starts, the protagonist is watching the enemy using the camera and firing a bunch of moves. Oh, the enemy is too fast and you can't keep up. You are a fake ninth level. You describe the enemy as being more or less strong. You give the protagonist a lot of tricks and still hit everyone with a 50-50 chance. It's so uncomfortable to watch...

Uh-huh, even a ninth-level spellcaster can forge excellent equipment. For his teammates, he has to make something a little exposed like bikini armor to give benefits to the opponent. Is it difficult to attach a heat dissipation spell? You also like to write out the missing parts for fear that passers-by will not see it, right? 😅

I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 32. As a level 9 boss, it takes time and effort to fight low-cost monsters. The plot is too slow. To put it simply, the plot unfolds too slowly. I like this kind of setting, but I don't like too slow novice plots. If the novice plot is tight and enters the adventure life earlier, I won't be able to stand it. There are few novels that I can't stand until chapter 32. I hope the author will get better as he writes. I am destined to read your book.

Cute village girl

According to readers' suggestions, since the journey in the book involves different islands, and each of them has a different natural environment and customs, constructing specific details can easily increase the sense of substitution. The author agrees with this point of view. The author himself is not a full-time writer. He mainly focuses on advancing the story every day. It is often difficult to deliberately add details. Generally you can only rely on inspiration. So, if any readers are interested or have already thought of some detailed settings, you can leave a message and the author will choose the appropriate ones to use. The categories of detailed supplementary settings are not limited to special diet, clothing, dressing, speaking styles, daily entertainment, etc. Based on the natural environment, customs, and living habits of each island. Examples of islands that will be visited in the future Mengze Island: rich water environment and lush vegetation. There are waterfalls, streams, rapids, swamps, dense forests, and giant trees that reach the sky Luppus Island Country: Island in the middle of the sea, volcanic activity, plantations, fishing industry, lava destroys civilization Thousand Tower City: There are many towers, modern and ancient life intertwined, magic In daily life, it is prosperous, has many readers, and has a strong cultural atmosphere Makena Island Country: Rich in minerals, an important industrial town, patrolled by magic machines and crafts Rulm City: There are many shipyards, mainly workers, with docks and docks in between. The residential streets are connected to form a city Trade capital: prosperous, a model of a modern city, a developed commercial street, similar to the earth's modern business district, and a port and market for concentrated trade Saint City Vitask: There are some types of cities on the above islands, high-end powerful people gather, high style, high level, you can see the world's top level scenery The above is an example Thank you for your continued support, all orders are rising slowly, and you can chat with us if you have any other ideas about the book.

Too little, why do you want me to read this book now😭😭

Why didn't the author write some other support in the early stage? As a result, the male protagonist looked a bit useless, with short blue bars, brittle body, and weak attacks. Just like putting all the skills of King of Glory on one hero, the result is that the blue bar is only one-third of that of an ordinary hero (personal feeling), which makes people feel that he deserves to be kicked.

I am currently reading Chapter 6, and I see a very annoying setting. The protagonist is a ninth-level conjurer with no physical strength at all. His arms are sore after swinging the sword 66 times in a standard way? Can the author explain it?

Hehehehe

The story of leaving the team is quite well written. Finally, it's not the same stereotype of beautiful girls being kicked out by all the team members 🙂

GBF official certification, the old man is female 😏😏

Why does the Western Fantasy World destroy the world at every turn? What happened to the world? Even if you are a villain, you must have a motive.

I got a little bored after reading the more than 700 chapters. I was typing back and forth, describing too many characters, and it was tiring to read. Li Ang completely becomes a supporting role. I barely saw his highlight moments

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It was quite difficult to promote this book. Many people stopped reading it when they saw that it was a quitting series. Why did the author think of writing a quitting series?

In terms of online articles, it is generally excellent, and the shortcomings do not hide the good points. The world view is grand and the suspense is laid out in an orderly manner. I hope the author can consider the following two suggestions for his next work: 1. It is not advisable to create too many female characters, and Dream of Red Mansions only focuses on the Thirteen Hairpins; 2. The number of words should not be too long, which reduces the co-ordination of the plot before and after.

Come on, it's very good 🤓

When will it be finished? I read 826 and am a little tired 🙂